Hey everyone! I have finished the first draft of a high fantasy story. I am looking to swap chapters with authors of similar genres. I always found that my critiques are far more constructive and knowledgeable when I'm critiquing within my most proficient genre. My critique style is mostly positive. I will always tell you what you are doing right before I tell you what you are doing wrong. I focus primarily on plot, characters, and worldbuilding and tend to ignore grammar unless you really want me to dig into that. (I would suggest using Grammarly though. It'll do a better job of that than me! xD)
Here is the blurb for my story:
Don Traveler, an eccentric young magician, embarks on a quest to reunite with his long-lost family and recruits the jaded shapeshifting thief, Shalnark, to escort him on his journey. Don’s only vivid memory of his family is his father’s love for the Blue Moon Festival that only happens every eight years. After an incident with the all-powerful Church of the Holy Trinity, the duo finds themselves on the run. Meanwhile, a zealous bishop intends to start a bloody crusade that could jeopardize Don’s quest. Don has the power to save countless lives, including his family’s, but doing so means he will miss his chance to ever meet them.
Feel free to message me or comment here if you are interested!
My critique style is mostly positive. I will always tell you what you are doing right before I tell you what you are doing wrong. I focus primarily on plot, characters, and worldbuilding and tend to ignore grammar unless you really want me to dig into that. (I would suggest using Grammarly though. It'll do a better job of that than me! xD)
Here is the blurb for my story:
Don Traveler, an eccentric young magician, embarks on a quest to reunite with his long-lost family and recruits the jaded shapeshifting thief, Shalnark, to escort him on his journey. Don’s only vivid memory of his family is his father’s love for the Blue Moon Festival that only happens every eight years. After an incident with the all-powerful Church of the Holy Trinity, the duo finds themselves on the run. Meanwhile, a zealous bishop intends to start a bloody crusade that could jeopardize Don’s quest. Don has the power to save countless lives, including his family’s, but doing so means he will miss his chance to ever meet them.
Feel free to message me or comment here if you are interested!