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How long did it take for your book to sell?
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Mar 30, 2020 10:03AM

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The ones I've published had a spurt of sales that started almost immediately and lasted a few months … but it was still never enough to pay for the cover art I had done for them. So I'm still in the red in total.

I occasionally promote future works with snippets of the cover, but for my current book, I may post a screenshot of it or a nice picture of someone reading it, always a friend, or even its reviews. My book has been featured on a few blogs and on other Bookstagrammer's page. I don't say, "Hey, but my book." I say something more like "what lies beyond the cover is an adventure like no other" or anything to make it sound adventurous and mysterious to intrigue the reader. Those don't seem to work other than getting some likes.


If a reader comes to a novel's Amazon page they will almost always look at the excerpt before they buy. We have to assume that your promotional efforts, plus people searching by genre and tags, have brought prospective customers to your page. And once there neither the cover nor the blurb will sell it. Nor will reviews that don't say "Verified Purchase," and which came from a pay-for-reviews site.
What sells the work is how a given reader reacts to your words. In general, a reader arrives with mild interest, which fades, word by word, unless your prose replaces curiosity with active interest in a page or three.
As a suggestion, you might want to dig out the books on fiction-writing technique you've studied, do a refresher read, then sharpen up the prose a bit.

If you want to sell books you need to:
1. Make sure that cover will stand out yet fit the genre. If you put a fantasy cover with a unicorn on it in the Thriller category, it will stand out, but thriller readers won't buy it. It doesn't fit their concept of a thriller.
A thing about genre, niche down that genre into as small a niche as you can. A new author in Thrillers won't get noticed but if you write time travel thrillers with aliens, put it in that category and you'll have a better chance of being seen because there are fewer books there.
2. The title. The tile must be eye catching and make the reader want to read the book. It should fit in the genre yet make a reader stop to find out what the book is about.
3. The blurb. It must be SEO optimized yet pull the reader into the book. All blurbs should contain the protagonist, the antagonist and the problem that is central to the story in a way that hooks the reader. Also use a call to action which encourages the reader to buy that book. If this blurb doesn't take them to beyond that 'more' line in the description, you have lost that potential buyer. The first sentence needs to pull them into the rest of the description.
Your description of the book may be the back cover blurb or it may be longer, but that may not mean better. You give just enough information to pull the reader into the story without writing a synopsis of the book. Look at the best sellers in your genre for the back cover blurb vs the sales descriptions. It does take a lot of practice to write blurbs and descriptions. We do creative writing, not copy writing. Those are two very different things and takes two different mindsets to do them.
4. Your first 5 pages need to keep the reader reading. If you can't hook them there, no matter how good your book is, they won't read it. After those 5 pages, you must fulfill the promise of a good story or you will end up with negative reviews. Make sure that book is as free of errors as you can make it, nicely formatted and is something that you would pay money for to read. It also needs to have a satisfying ending with all the loose ends tied up unless it's a series where the books are connected. Make sure the reader is aware if it isn't a stand alone book.
5. Reviews. Yep, to get found, you need some decent reviews. After the "The End" put in a sentence encouraging your readers to leave a review so others may find the book. Ask your email list to buy the book on sale and leave reviews. (remember, if Amazon thinks you are friends with them or related, they will pull the reviews.)
6. You need to promote that book. That doesn't mean offering it for free for a week and then forgetting it. Use your email list, FB, Booksagram, Pinterest, local bookstores. ads, promotional websites, joint promotions, etc. Remember, no one likes to be spammed so don't go into rooms on FB and post "buy my book" every day when you haven't been there before. I do use my regular FB page to advertise my books, but I don't go into my motorcycle group and advertise it....that isn't a place to promote my book unless it was on motorcycle riding. There are a lot of free things you can do for book promotions. Get inventive.
7. This is a full time thing, You need to keep advertising your book until you bring out the next book. A backlist of other books you have written is a good thing. One book doesn't get it. I fact, that first book probably isn't all that good and should be seen as trial run. The more your write, the better you get (hopefully) as you learn the craft of writing. So, put that first book out and move on to the next one. That not so good book can be revised and used as a free giveaway later.
Hint: If you are doing a series, make sure your readers don't have to wait a year or longer to get the next one. You might want to write them all, and have them ready to publish over a year or shorter.
8. If you don't care about sales, ignore everything above and publish the book, forget about it and go on to the next one.
I didn't advertise any of my books until I had my third book out. That is when I started an email list and working on getting known as an author. Remember you are the product. Your readers want to connect to you as much as your books, so promote you and your books.
Good luck.





I've done an Amazon 99 cent promo, though it wasn't that long, only about three days. I promoted the sale way before the first discount day, yet nothing came of it.

With that said, if you only have one book out and it's not selling well, don't worry about it. Work on making the next book better. Keep learning. That means learning from the masters. Read and put into practice those books by James Scott Bell, or Randy Ingermanson, Experiment with them and see what works for you. The more you write, hopefully the better you will get. And above all....READ. Read a lot of books in the genre you are writing in. Figure out what makes them work or not work. Break them down....look at the plot structure and are they using a 3 act structure. Where are the turning points? How is the dialogue? How much telling and how much showing? Soon certain things will stand out. Join a critique group and learn what is good and what isn't good writing. Practice, practice, practice.
Bottom line, first book, don't worry about sales. Write that next book, get it published and repeat. Begin marketing when you have 3 books so you can give way one for free and have a back list for them to buy. Repeat frequently until you can't write any more and stop. Each book that you write should be better than the last one until you hit a groove where you are writing good to great books each time. If you go back and read one of Nora Roberts first books, you can see how much she has grown as an author. (The first one wasn't that great....trust me on that one.)

The first book I published fell quiet about 2 years later and I worried. Then it revived and made it to #1 in its genre. So you mustn't write a book off! Just keep going if you enjoy it. But we have to remember not to give up the day job.


It wasn't until I started writing that I started deconstructing sentences in books from my favorite authors. Especially the first sentence or two of a new chapter. Does it hook you in? Does it set a mood? How many adverbs are in it (ideally none)? How many adjectives?
It's actually made me more critical of my own writing and books that I read. It also made me appreciate some of my favorite authors more...but some of them less. I'm more observant of the flaws.


How did you make sales in its first month? My book hasn't made any sales.

I agree, G.R. I did a KDP with my first book a while back. Gave away about a 100 copies. Hopefully at some point they will have feedback and reviews I can learn, grow from, and use.



That said, I've found that the most I've ever made in sales was always in person, at some sort of fair or convention. Physical sales have far outweighed online purchases. My advice is to shoot for things where there's lots of high foot traffic and people looking to spend money if you want to get decent sales (after the covid pandemic, that is).




I'd recommend giving the promotions a shot, as well as maybe looking into sites like AwesomeGang and Bookgoodies (they'll post an ad for you for Free).
Good luck!


Maybe we share a common ancestry. I remember reading the same about Carrie, makes me smile. One of Stephen Kings most popular stories and it needed to be rescued from the trash.




Perhaps I am luckier than most as my book is a history mystery "faction" thilller in a Dan Brown short chapter style but I have managed to sell several hundred over the past three years and every month I get a small cheque enough to buy a few drinks with!

To get readers, you need to decide who your book's target audience is and market to them. Those are the ones who will be buying your books. John, getting 40 reviews is fantastic. Look at what they said and why they gave you the rating they did. Feedback from readers is what helps you to make your next book better, especially if they are all saying similar things.
As to agents and publishers, they go by trends. What ever is big at the moment. As to 50 Shades of Grey, that was a popular book due to the subject matter. It wasn't that well written, but the story was good and had a lot of organic sales due to word of mouth from those who liked the book. I, personally haven't read it and it isn't at the top of my reading list.
Here's the bottom line, no matter what genre you write in, you must have engaging characters, a good story, a plot that follows the genre expectations, and it must be well written. That takes time to learn. And yes, women and men want to be emotionally attached to the characters. There is a reason people read Lee Childs books and Dan Brown, or James Patterson, Nora Roberts, and Tolkien.
Read books in your genre to discover why they are popular. Learn to break down the plot, the points that make a character engaging, what techniques the writer used to keep the reader reading, what genre conventions did they follow or break, etc. There are a lot of authors out there who are popular and have a lot of good reasons why they are best sellers. They give the reader what they want. That means characters that are memorable and a story that makes you want to keep reading or that you don't forget right away.
Yes, the 50 Shades of Grey books were big sellers, but so where The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo series, The Diary of a Wimpy Kid series, The Help, Gone Girl, Where the Crawdads Sing....All of those gave the readers what they wanted...an escape from the real world into another world.
If your book is still selling, write another one and put it wide (not just Amazon) since Kobo and B&N do sell a lot of books. Advertise. It doesn't have to cost a small fortune but those few dollars will add to your sales. Look to where you can get your book into libraries. They will help add to your income. Promoting on Book Bub, even in the lower echelons helps in sales. Build a following be it on Amazon, Book Bub., Facebook, or an email list that you send out updates to and engage with over time.
It isn't the Celeb names that get you into the best seller ranks. It is all about your story, characters and how well you pull the reader into that world and keep them there. To do that, you need to learn how to write like the big name writers. What do and how do they do it to keep their readers reading their books? Don't blame the agents, publishers and the platforms if they pass over your book. They get 1000s of books a month so yours has to stand out in a good way. Self publishing is a way of by passing the slush pile, but, again, if your book doesn't stand out, it will go the the bottom of the slush pile for readers and not be seen.


I'll recommend looking at the Story Grid for editing. I'm finding that is one of the better editing styles so that the book has the meat and bones for a good book. As to style, if your first book is still selling, you have a decent style and voice. The more you write, the better you will get. I'll admit that writing is my retirement plan where I can have fun doing something that I enjoy. That means that it can be as cheap or as expensive as I want to make it but the main thing is learning how to turn out books that are the best they can be. To do that, I had to learn how to write while keeping my unique style and voice. That's the reason I said to go back and review those comments by readers, learn from them and repeat.
I will encourage you to jump in there and repeat the experience, enjoy it and write the things you want to read and to hell with what is popular. I believe you should start your own trend and go with it. Sounds like your first book was a good start.


I searched your book and found it, then went to your author profile. There's nothing there. No reviews. No updates. Not even a profile picture. I'm not saying you should put your whole life story there, but readers like connecting with writers. This is doubly true for the sort of readers who like to read indie stories.
By posting reviews/ratings on your profile, you can give readers some content between books, give them a sense of the sort of books you like or don't like, and let them get a feel for you as a person.
The other benefit is that every time you post on a message board or leave a review on a book, you create a chance for someone to click on your profile and find your book. You can advertise passively, without ever trying to bully anyone into buying your book.
I'm not saying this will make you a bestselling author or anything like that. But it might help. Good luck!




You're welcome! I read an earlier version as well but read the new one too. Worth it!

"Promoting your book is where many indie authors drop the ball." - So true.
Add - Went to David Gaughran's Amazon book immediately. Sadly, it's not available.

Writing is the easy part."
LOL. Again, an accurate statement. A very accurate one, I might add. Loaded with so many nuances understood only by those who went through the process. If only we didn't love writing so much...

Independence or.... Nope, I really wouldn't say "death." Boredom probably.
They can throw brickbats, boulders, or the occasional nuclear missile at Amazon, but I am thankful some entity gave us the opportunity to publish without the purgatory of trad pub processes.
But that's only me talking. Opinions might differ

Got it. Downloaded it! Thanks! I wonder what was that page which came up during my search. Anyway, I do hope the book helps.