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Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments That sounds good. I am okay with gore and violence.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Yes, we should make our characters. And I do not really care on who my character is. I can be either male or female.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Name: Marcilla Red (Red Riding Hood)

Age: 17

Power: She has the power of speed and a with one slice of her two double edge swords, she instantly kill someone.

Appearance:
Eyes: one blue and one yellowish green
Hair: brown



((Let me know if this is not working...))

Personality: She is very quiet and does not like to make a scene. When she meets someone, she is usually shy at first, but then once she knows that they know about her, she strikes.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Works For: No one.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Sure. I will start. So what should the setting be?))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments The leaves crunched under her feet as she ran. She could feel the pain rush to her head as she paused at the end of the woods. She glanced back as she tried to catch her breath. Marcilla Red could not remember that last time she had run away like this. Except when she was only ten and her parents were killed by some kind of beast. She had heard it was a wolf, but for some reason she did not believe it at all.

Marcilla slid down so that she was sitting on the ground; her heart pounded as fast as she was running, it was night time, she was cold, and tired. She really needed a place to rest at the moment, but she also needed to keep going so she could get back to her small underground home.

Marcilla is not a city person, but more of a country person. She was always wanting to talk to someone, but she had no friends to talk to and she barely even went to school. She is now seventeen and in less than a month, she will be turning eighteen.

Just at this moment, she sat there wondering why someone had not followed her. She knew there were bystanders near by even though she had just killed some high schoolers who obviously drunk. She rolled her eyes as she fell into a deep sleep.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla held one of her swords in her hand and licked the blood off; she shivered as she could taste alcohol in the blood. She sighed as she remembered all of the stories or at least rumors of her. The one who kills with one blow or the one who sweeps through the shadows and leaves no trace. “Oh there goes Red…Look at her, she is soo sweet…What idiots. No one knows about me. They do not know anything about me!” She threw her sword at the tree opposite her. “Why me? Why do I have to kill?” She screamed at the top of her lungs.

After swinging her sword, she heard something snap until she realized that one of her swords cut right through the tree. Marcilla, Red Riding Hood, rolled to one side just in time to hear the huge Maple tree fall onto the one she was leaning against. “Oh come on!” She screamed as she stood up and stomped over to where her sword landed.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments (How am I doing?))

Red Riding Hood, just picked her sword up when she heard some kind of sound, more like a growl, through the forest. She pulled the second sword from the sling on her back as she stood in her stance; she was ready to take on what was coming. “Come out!” She screamed at the top of her lungs. “I am really angry right now so come out and fight me!”

Red - Marcilla - walked along the edge of the forest before walking out into the open meadow. Wanting to get this over with she stayed as quiet as a mouse. Her ears wanted to hear only a pin drop. The hood of her red cape hid her face as her eyes darted around wondering where her enemy was. This could be it She thought to herself as a million thoughts raced through her mind.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla Red through the tall grass, but not so tall. She swerved around to hear something at the edge of the woods. Just when she something, or someone ran out towards where she was, she imminently took action and clashed her swords against something. Her eyes glanced up and saw what she had stopped. An axe.

For almost a few moments, she held it there and then let it fall to the ground. She held her swords at almost seven o’clock. She let the moon light glint off of her sharped double edged swords. For a moment, it was dead silent. “I do not know who you are, but fight me!” She screamed at the other person.

Red Riding hood slid into her fighting stance as she was ready to slice or chop someone up. Red did not even know why she was even doing this. Was it all for her parents sake or was it for her sake to survive? She had always gone through those questions at least a million times. She just stared at the person as she said nothing more.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((It is okay. And I am okay with that. for both your idea and adding an assassin. I also have to go to bed soon. But I will reply in the morning. What time zone are you? I am North Eastern.))


Marcilla was soon back in action as she dodged and swung her swords through the air. She could hear them slice through the air. Had almost turned around when her hair back; she let herself fall and then rolled over just as his axe his the ground. She jumped to her feet and growled back at him for a moment as she watched him circle her. Her ears soon rung off all the thoughts he was thinking into her mind.

Red Riding hood paused for a moment and stared at him, “You should be afraid! I can slice your head off in less than a second!” She growled at him wondering why he even admitted to her that he was afraid. She soon pounced off of her small feet and ran in the direction of where the person was. She knew for a fact that she had killed more than one hundred people so far in the last seven years, but was this really going to end?

When she missed, she let herself glance behind her while her heard pounded heavily. If she could have killed this person so easily this person, then they would have been, but instead they were capable of fighting her and not getting sliced in less than a minute.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Do not worry, I will reply in the morning. I will not forget to reply.))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Morning!!))



Marcilla spun on her toes as she looked around for him. Then in less than a second, she could feel something against her side and then she was in the air; upon feeling herself hit the ground, she began to laugh uncontrollably.

Red Riding hood, knew that she killed innocent people, but that did not mean she have a heart. She did in fact have a heart, but it comes and goes when she is not looking. It is like punching her in the face. At this moment in her life, she wanted to live a simple life, but some how she never knew how to stop. It is like a switch.

When she could not feel him on top of her; she reached for her swords and clutched them in her hands. Just as she was lifting her swords, she saw him run towards her and the flip over her. When she felt a punch into her back; she could feel that it was not that hard enough to give her a small push forward.

Marcilla spun on her heels and grinned at him as she held each of her swords on both sides of his neck. “You poor thing, are you out of breath just by fighting me?” She taunted lightly. “Do you need to rest or should I kill you now to get all that pain out?” She knew he would not give up at all and neither will she. Right now, she would have killed him, but at this moment she could not get herself do it. She hesitated for a moment before placing the blades slightly on his neck.

She thought for a moment as she recalled his words in her head. …Afraid…of you… Red kept her blue and yellowish green eye on him. “Why did you even fight me?” She questioned him, “You knew that I am dangerous, why?” She almost was tempted to scream the last part, but forced herself to not scream it.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((I kind just realized that. And sorry for the short post.))


Marcilla watched as he jumped for her and then hit his head; she chuckled, “Are you that clumsy?” She continued to taunt him more. “I thought you could do better than that?” She questioned as she let her hood fall from her head. Marcilla really wanted to get this over with. She knew that she started all of this, but then again, there is a possible chance should could blame it on him. The thought being here just bored her.

She sighed and pretended to yawn. When she finished, she felt herself on the ground. “Seriously, you think that shredding my clothes is going to help?” She questioned him calmly before pushing him off and stood up.

She picked up her swords up and swung them towards the person she was fighting against as was oblivious to not have clothes on. “If you dare follow me, I will defiantly kill you with one slice.” She warned him as she stopped her sword right before his neck and then round house kicked the side of his head while sending him to the ground.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Let me know if I have a too small of a post.))

Marcilla was just about to jumped up onto a branch of the closest tree when she felt something in her arm. She felt her arm and could tell that she was bleeding. She held her arm hissed at him as he ran away.

She could not take this anymore. There was too much stress in the air, she was tired, stressed out and really needed to sleep. Red Riding Hood put her swords on her back and walked home quietly; she shook as the hairs on her neck and arms stood up.

“Why that stupid…. that stupid…” She repeated as she tried to think of any insults she could think of. She shook her fist in the air. “I will get kill you if it is the last thing I do!” She screamed into the air. “You wait and see!”


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla soon had arrived at her underground home. She had placed her swords on the table and changed into another set of clothes she was wearing earlier. Just in her small closest, she had tons of copies of her clothes.

Marcilla began to throw her fists in the air as she screamed at the top of her lungs wondering why she did not kill him. The process was so easy, yet the recent battle made it seem even tougher. At one point, she threw at least three dishes at the wall; they broke of course, but she did not care at this moment.

“Why do you have to do this to me?!” She screamed again as she repeated it over and over again in frustration. “I will find you sooner or later!”


((I like that idea. Do I have to create a character then?))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Sorry for this being short and I have to go to bed soon. Again, I will reply in the morning))

Marcilla had gone to bed and just slept for the rest of the week not know what was going on. All she wanted to do was be calm and not kill anyone for a while. She needed some rest anyways and now was the perfect time to do that.

She slept soundly through all the days and nights of that week. She did not want anything to wake her up from her dreaming. At the moment she was was away from everything. The whole world, the people she had killed, the people who are still alive and that person she had fought.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((got to go to bed.))

Marcilla soon woke up as she rubbed her eyes. For a second she almost forgot that she was in her warm bed, underground away from everything. She yawned as she just laid there. She thought of all the possibilities she could think of trying to find that person. First of all she did not even know what the person looked liked, second where the person lived and third who the person was.

She breathed in and out slowly as she replayed the fight in her head. For some weird reason, she had to replay it about ten times before she knew who it was. The Wolf. Now who is the Wolf? She was not sure at all, but she needed a way to figure out who the person really was or well, not really a person, but a creature.

Red just laid there spaced out wondering what her next steps would be once she gets up from her comfy warm bed. She really wanted to lay there, but at the moment the first step to finding who this creature was, was to get out of bed and eat something.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Sorry for this being kind of short))

Marcilla was now up, dressed and had something to eat. She was still tired, but knew that she had to get through this before she is capable of resting again. All she needed to do was take care of The Wolf and her life will be a little more complete. “Why is this so hard?” She kept on questioning herself over and over again as she began to pack everything that she needed for her trip.

She was in the middle of sharpening and cleaning one of her swords when she thought she heard something outside. She slowly stood up and then began to hide everything that she owned in their hiding spots. When she finished; she shut the kitchen window curtain and sped outside to cover the main door to her home and then went back inside to exit through the secret passage way.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments After Marcilla covered the secret doorway, she began her long journey to who knows where, but knowing that her instincts are going to kick in. She walked long the long dirt pathway wondering what is going to happen once she finds The Wolf.

Ever since Marcilla Red was little, she had this weird instinct like something important or bad was going to happen. This is why she is always on top of everything. She was there just in time for that one something to happen.

Red sighed as she kicked a small stone alongside the road and at some points hid when she heard anything coming down the road. She was always hidden even though she was there. And she knew that people could sense if she was there, well there are very few that could sense if she was there or not. Marcilla Red is not someone who likes to leaves traces of themselves so people could know that they were there. She is a person who cleans up after herself no matter what the situation is.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla was just about to give up for the night as she rounded the bend until she saw something in the distance. “What is that?” She questioned herself before speeding the direction so she could get a closer look. When she tried to get a better look, all she could see were trees, “Should I climb a tree or just head towards what ever is in the distance?” She asked herself another question.

Red Riding hood had no idea what the place was until after another hill, she realized that she was was near or coming up on the Royal Kingdom. Now she thought for a moment of how she was going to fine The Wolf before he finds her. When she finally reached the gates, she leaned against the wall to think wondering when she should go in.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((So I am doing alright. Right?))

Maricilla felt a chill run down her back as she could feel someone was watching her. She glance up towards the castle and every window there was facing the gates. She sighed before hiding her two swords and pulling her hood over her head to cover her face so no one would know who she was.

As she stepped into the village, she glanced around at the many men, women and children walking up and down the small road. She soon was walking up the road and through the crowd. She then thought for a moment wondering whether or not someone would notice her and call out, “there she is…Let us all throw rotten tomatoes and vegetables at her.” But that did not stop her from being there after making her journey to the Royal kingdom.

Just upon entering the village, she decided to search for a place to rest before continuing on. Her eyes glanced up at the signs and skimmed each name as her mind tried to make up which one to stay in.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Maybe she meets Brent's x-boyfriend and then he ends up leading her to the castle and then she get put into the dungeon (he now works for the Kind and Queen. And then Brent could start off not feeling bad for Red and then then start feeling bad for her. I do not know... Just thinking up something.))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Yeah, that is fine. I watching something at the moment, so I do not mind!! But I love our roleplay so far!!))) (And Brent's x-boyfriend acts like a friend to her and does not tell her anything important...))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Red asks Brent about The Wolf (Brent), like who is The Wolf and stuff like that and he leads her into a trap basically, but ends up telling the truth about Brent...(Does not tell her that he dated Brent though) ))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((So go ahead and comment on your other roleplays and I will wait until you come back to ours...))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((I am just checking to make sure, but am I doing alright with my post? Are the long enough?))


Marcilla had just turned around and wondered where she was in the village, but when she decided to continue on, she almost fell backwards after someone’s shoulder hit her’s. When she looked up at the person who bumped her, she almost blushed when she heard him ask if someone had dropped her from Heaven.

She opened her mouth and then closed it for she was too afraid to speak to a guy who complemented her. What am going to do? She thought to herself as she stared into his eyes. “Do you know who I am?” She questioned him quickly without thinking.

Is that the best I could do? She thought to herself again. I am so stupid. First of all, in all of her years growing, no one has ever spoken to her like that at all. She was just too amazed at what he said to her.

“Thank you I guess.” She answered again quickly, but as soft as she could while her hands were ready to reach behind her and grab her swords. “Do you know where the best place to stay in this village is?” She asked him calmly, but a little louder and for only him and her to hear.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((I usually do not write this much, but I am trying as hard as I can.))


Red Riding Hood lightened up a bit when he said that she could stay at his place, “I do not really mind at all.” She told him, but when she got a glimpse of eyes looking at her hands, she pulled them back, “I am sorry, force of habit.” She informed him before staring down at the ground and sighing, “Well, I understand a little and will have to find another place to stay then.” She glanced back up at him and side stepped around him before continuing.

Marcilla really did not want to look for a place to stay after the boy had offered her to stay at his place, but some how she felt like her stomach was in one huge knot and something bad was going to happen.

She walked quietly up the street and walked down an alley so that she was behind a building with out a second glance behind her. At this point she did not really care if he followed her or not. This was her life and she could make things happen on her own with out saying a word. With a soft sigh, she leaned back against the wall of a house and slid down so that she sitting on the dirt ground.

Taking a small dagger she likes to hide in her boot, she drew out what her plan was going to be after sun set. This was it, no turning back once in there. You get it done right away, or your done for. At that moment before she had planned on standing up, she saw a rat across of her; she threw the dagger and killed it. Blood began to leak out as she got up and walked over to pick the rat up and eat it. Or at least drink the blood, skin the rat and eat the meat.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Like how later, Right now it is 8:50pm and my internet goes off at 11:00pm. But if I do not get to reply then I will reply in the morning))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Once Marcilla was finished with the rat, she stood up and headed towards the castle wondering if the king and Queen could help with the information she was looking. She sighed as she walked along behind the buildings until she reached the castle.

At this point, she was out in the busy street again and was staring up at the castle wondering how she was going to get in. She thought for a while before walking up to the where the guards were standing and silently walked through. But the one thing she did not know was that these Royal guards had never let anyone by since the king and Queen had come into power.

She was about to step across the threshold, but the guard on the right pushed her back, “You can not get in unless you are asking to talk the king.” He informed Red; She turned and headed back down once she understood what he was saying and without a fuss.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla was just about to check how much money she had in her pouch when she felt something on her face. She quickly took her mirror out and checked; to her surprise she had at few scratches. “It is not bad as long as I cover my face.” She sighed as she put mirror back just as she felt a punch to the face.

She did not know that The Wolf was attacking her as she walked, of course, she just thought that her skin was getting cracked. She had decided to eye the crowd for the guy she was talking to earlier.

Marcilla Red was about to give up when she spotted him next to stand of apples; she decided she would tap him on the shoulder to get his attention, “Excuse me.” She called out to him. “Is there a way, I could get a meeting with the king?” She asked The Wolf’s ex-boyfriend. She very well did not know what his name or The Wolf’s actual name was. As she was talking, she could feel pain on her face; she swiped at and rubbed her eyes, for whom she was almost dead tired at the moment and needed some sleep.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments ((Just give me a moment. first will you post? I will add more in the next post...))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla Red waves her hand in front of his face. "Excuse me, I kind of need some help." He informed him. "I am sorry that I was rude to you earlier and was wondering if you know a way in to the cattle." She whispered the last part.


Marcilla sighed and leaned against the cart, "I am waiting for you to answer. She waved her hand in front of him again.

((Sorry for the short answer. On my iPod.))


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla nodded, “Thank you.” She was about to turn when she placed a kiss on her cheek. Red wanted to punch this guy in the guts right now, but did not for some reason.

She held her fist tight as she watched him walk away, but then turned and ran as fast as she could. She remembered what he had told her.

Upon running to the back, she snuck in and found an unused maid’s outfit; she put it on and worked her way through the castle without the guards noticing her so far.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Marcilla paused for a moment and then dashed behind a pillar as three guards walked down the hall. She let her air go once they were out of site. She began again once more down then long hallway towards the throne room.

She really needed to talk to them about something really badly. If they could not answer her, then she planned on going to the library.

Red Riding Hood sighed again as she wondered if she was going to see that boy again, but she had an iffy feeling about the way he acted. How could he try to kill her? That was the one huge question on her mind.


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