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message 1: by Beena (last edited Mar 20, 2020 02:28PM) (new)

Beena Khan | 1 comments Hi, my name is Benish Khan. I have a Masters of Arts degree in developmental psychology, and Bachelors of Arts in Psychology. I'm currently pursuing a PhD in Clinical Psychology. I have formal training in English literature, Fine Arts, and Graphic design.

I'm a writer and an author myself, I understand what it's like to be rejected by publishers. I can beta read primarily, any work on your budget. I beta read general fiction, literary fiction, nonfiction, memoirs, romance, thriller, mystery, science fiction, erotica, short stories, articles, and much more. My feedback would include a 1-2 page of reader report, constructive criticism, and I can offer a sample of minor editing and grammar issues.

My feedback:
1) Does it have a strong beginning?
2) The pace of the story, does it move too fast or too slow?
3) Sense of setting, consistence of setting
4) Descriptions
5) Are the characters believable? Are there are too many characters? Character names
6) Removing/Adding Characters
7) Character development
8) Dialogue between characters and scenes.
9) Plot structure/ Any loop holes/plot wholes/discrepancies in the story.
10) Is the ending too predictable? Do you have a strong ending?
11) Overall judgment.

**You are welcome to contact me before ordering. My email is beenazai@gmail.com

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PRICES:
$10 for 5,000 word count
$15 for 10,000 word count

DISCOUNTED PRICE:
$40 for 50,000-90,000 word count. For larger word counts, please contact me.
7 days minimum delivery time.


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