Beta Swaps - YA

[Tara]

Hi, I write for fun mostly, but I have been trying to complete a project recently, but I worry about the usual flaws.

The project is a YA post-apocalyptic, Sci-Fi (ish) book. Female protagonist. I am interest in most other types of stories, and I am almost always willing to do a trial run, so if you think your story may not be my cup of tea, give it a chance!

PM me and let me know!

Tara

[Moira]

Hi Tara,
I think you novel sounds interesting--I love ya and post-apoc-- and wouldn't mind beta reading/critiquing it if you're still looking for someone.
I have a 99k YA fantasy that could use someone to look at if you're still interested in swapping.
I can give you more information if you're interested.
Moira

[Jeff]

Hello!

I've got a finished 110k YA science-fantasy. Blurb (revising query ATM) below:

At seventeen, Zander's world ends when Princess Alessia runs away rather than marry him. A failure to his cruel northern kingdom, he throws himself at the mercy of Alessia’s father. With one chance to prove himself, he accepts a suicidal mission to hunt down the last of the Machine-Gods that once ruled the world.

Meanwhile, hiding beneath the Earth, Celene wakes fully grown inside a tank, designed perfect and powerful by machines as a weapon to send against humanity. But when Celene collides with the runaway princess, their instant connection interferes with plans a thousand years in the making.

Beneath the light of a broken Moon, Celene begins to share Alessia’s dream of a recovering world. But as Zander leads an army against her home, she must decide whether she is on the side of Alessia and humanity, or the side of perfection-- a decision with the potential to plunge the surviving remnants of humanity into chaos.

Email me at jeffreyhunterdeleon@gmail.com to swap the first few chapters to see if it would be a good fit. I am a harsh and honest critiquer. I'm looking for the same-- but I just got quarantined, so TBH I'd be happy to gain most sorts of feedback. :)