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The Other People by CJ Tudor
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I wished the supernatural element was more fleshed out and built up into the climax a bit more.
I loved the concept of The Other People and the Dark Web angle and maybe would have enjoyed it more if they were more of a focus.
Overall, it was an average read for me.

If it stayed a more straight-forward thriller about a man getting his daughter back, and a family getting revenge, I would have given it 4 stars. The last third bugged me so much that I've dropped the rating down to a 2.
By the end of the book I wanted to grab the author and tell them to calm down and focus on telling a great story, and less on trying to surprise the reader with random twists.


100% agree! I wish this was more focused on because I was so interested in that aspect."
Agree!! After reading the epilogue, I need more information about the modus operandum of this organization.

Things I loved:
- The dark web element
- the other people organization
I think this book could have benefited from being a longer story and fleshing out some of the ideas. The ch..."
YES! agreed. Too much co-mingling of the characters. I didn't care for the "6 degrees of separation" element. I really felt that the supernatural element could have gone deeper. Kind of glossed over I felt.
A good, edgy read in the end with a few flaws (personal taste flaws)

I ended up giving it 3 stars because it keeps the reader interesting and hooked but there were a lot of things that didn't seem right or real for the story.


How did everyone find the different voices? Like a lot of authors write from different perspectives and some do it well and others not so much. I found that the adults were done well and I felt like I was reading a different persons thoughts but I couldn’t say that I felt the child sounded anything like a child, kind of pulled away your sympathy for her a little as she sounded so grown up and almost pessimistic and enigmatic for a character that was supposed to be so young.

That said, I gave it 4 stars. While I love a good supernatural element in a book, this one just didn’t really seem to make much sense. I did enjoy trying to figure out how everyone was going to end up being connected in the end.


Totally agree! I loved the book and honestly what made me love it was the focus on The Other People...but I felt like the supernatural element made no sense to the story, wasn't explained or fleshed out, and was just kind of there as a plot device. I think it would've been just as chilling if we only focused on the dark web element instead. I have it 4 stars for that reason because I was so confused when Isabella smelled like seawater and then when the windows opened by themselves I was like "ok" lol

But overall I gave 3,5 stars. I didn’t felt super emotionally attached to the story or characters, I didn’t mind the supernatural element, but that kinda just happened and never got discussed within the characters.
And... the lack of diversity. I know the setting is England (and probably not close to London), but there were only one black character (and his son) and every girl and women in this story was either blond or had white hair. 🤷🏼♀️

But, I really loved all of the connections with the people and instances in this book. The reveal with Miriam shocked me. I wasn’t prepared.

I am eager to read more CJ Tudor though and own her other books, so I have a feeling I will be reading them soon!
A 4 star read I think.

I’d be curious to see if the Samaritan comes back for Fran if he finds out she’s not actually dead. Somehow I don’t think that Fran is very useful if The Other People think she’s dead. They wouldn’t be coming after her, and it sounds like there are never any constant members. Just people asking and then fulfilling favors.

I have to say that I was rooting for Katie and Gabe, and families of choice, so the ending pleased me. The death of Isabelle and the supernatural aspect felt a little rushed, and I didn't care that much for them, but this didn't really affect my interest in the book. Miriam, I expected it to be her, but not in that way, and I was actually surprised that she was that kind of greedy, nice touch, more interesting than her being all earnest and loving.
One thing I noticed is that Gabe just can't live without secrets can he, first he was hiding Isabella from his wife, and now he's hiding the fact Fran is alive from Katie, not the best foundation for a tentative relationship, but oh well.
All in all, I appreciate that the book didn't leave anything about the central story to our imaginations, apart from the organization, and the supernatural. I would have liked to maybe see Evelyn and Harry, or DI Maddock once more before the end, but I can live without that. I will give it 4.5 stars, rounded up to 5 because I just couldn't put the book down, and this is the first thriller I finished.

I did love the cult thing though but I regret that we don't really go deep down in there, I still have a lot of question about The Other People.
I find the connections between the characters a bit to easy even though I didn't see it coming for Fran and Katy.
I loved the story about the main character and Isabella, and why The Other People are after him and chasing his daughter.
But the thing a find a bit too much was the person who hired The Other People to kill his family. I mean the reasons were quiet basic and maybe didn't really explain such an deseperate act only for money. I was looking for a better explanation.
The supernatural thing kind of lost me and I found it maybe not necessary because nothing is explained at the end.
But overall, I liked this book because it was an easy reading, especially for me that isn't an english native speaker, the writing was really enjoyable and the story was really captivating, and really suspensful thanks to all the questions we kept having chapter after chapter, until the end.
(Sorry if I made some mistake in my writing).
I'm looking forward for the next book!


This book really hit my personal feelings because my 18 year old step brother was murdered in 2017. I could easily understand each characters perspective on grief and the motives behind their actions.
Unlike most people, the “supernatural” element going unexplained in the book did not bother me. I think that it’s much like life, those little unexplainable things that happen. If you believe in things like this, is there ever a good explanation for those events? I’m okay not knowing what was happening. The ending with Fran hinted towards maybe the afterlife or limbo, but either way, I remain unbothered by that.
The request was never fulfilled when it comes to killing Izzy and The Other People were aware of this fact. Would Gabe and the others be able to live in that house without constantly waiting for The Other People to show up? The Other People could have easily come to the conclusion that the house is where Gabe ended up living. But at the same time, like life, you never know what’s lurking out there, people live with constant anxieties about strangers and fears for their children.
I did not see the twist about the Sandman/Samaritan being the father of the boy who killed Katie’s father coming. That was a nice touch, because I was curious of his motives and how he became the Samaritan/Sandman.
Overall, loved the book. Finished the whole thing in five hours.

I am the type of reader who can enjoy ambiguity in an ending, but the lack of an explanation on the supernatural elements seemed less like an artistic choice and more like a misstep simply because all other elements were wrapped up and fully explained.
I think I’d give this a 3.5 if I’m generous and based on pure readability- but I wouldn’t actually recommend it to a friend.


She could have easily left that aspect out and it would have basically been the same story. The trauma of what Izzy experiences could explain all kinds of behavior.
I was a little put off by the motivation of the nurse being introduced so late in the book, but I’m guessing that if I did a close re-read I could find hints of that earlier. In general, however, I am not a fan of characters being introduced so late in a story. Especially in such a significant way.
Yeah, there was just a little bit too much deus ex machina action happening in the last quarter of the book. Everything was just all too convenient. “I thought you were dead,” really pushed it over the top for me. Someone tell me why Gabe needed to know Fran actually lived. What was the point there??
And I can’t say it too much, but the Izzy/Isabelle supernatural connection was ridiculous. Izzy remembered being at the house at the age of nine months? Uh, no. Wasn’t there a reference earlier in the book to the concept of childhood amnesia and how children don’t remember things from early childhood??





Other than that, this was amazing! I was hooked right from page 1. The way she wrote the different perspectives kept me constantly intrigued and on the edge of my seat. I loved trying to piece all the little details together.
I can't wait to read more from C.J. Tudor.

The writing style is good. However the story just fell short for me. I figured out everyone's roles pretty early on. The ending was meh. I'm not all that surprised as I felt the same way about The Chalk Man and ended up giving that 3 stars.
I still need to go threw and read everyone's posts. :)


So the paranormal element: I feel like there should have been more or none at all. It felt a bit weak and I don't understand what the point of it was.
Totally could see Gabe and Katie coming together a mile off. Predictable. Bleh.
I can't believe we had such a confusing, meandering path to get to the bottom of the mystery and.. it was meh. Don't get me wrong. I did enjoy this book but I was expecting more twists and turns at the end.
The twist of Fran still being alive: I feel like that was only added in so we could get a full explanation of what happened that night. Literally no other reason for her to be alive.

1. I was completely sucked into this story from the first chapter. C.J. Tudor has a way of making every point of view extremely interesting and you need to know more after every single one of their chapters. I had so many questions that I needed answers for and I needed to know right away.
2. The writing style of this book was very easy to follow. Although I was hesitant at first because there are a few POV and I didn't think I'd be able to follow them all, I was pleasantly surprised at how I could.
3. Although the first half of the book completely shocked me and made me fall in love (I genuinely thought at that point, if the craziness continued I'd be giving this book a full 5 stars) the ending did fall flat for me.
I was expecting another huge plot twist, and sadly did not get that. The questions I had, did get answered.. however the ending was in a way a bit predictable. I'm super sad that Miriam was the reason for all of this, to be honest, it seemed like an easy way out.
My heart strings were definitely tugged on multiple times when Gabe would bring up that he was visiting Isabella when his daughter got taken and his wife was murdered, and how he continued to visit and care for her from a distance for so many years. I also expected a more emotional reunion between Izzy and her father, it wasn't as dramatic and heartwarming as I would have liked.
Overall, I really did enjoy majority of this story, but was sadly a bit disappointed with the predictability of the ending. I do think this book would make a good movie though! I will be picking up C.J. Tudors other books!


As far as Steve and the Other People, I was thinking maybe since he was a cop and saw people being punished much less than he believed they should be, he joined up with the others. Let’s face it, there had to be SOME people who weren’t the pawns in charge of The Other People. So maybe Steve was part of that hierarchy? I don’t know.
Really enjoyed Katie and Gabe and kiddos. Izzy/Alice did speak fairly more mature but maybe because of all she’d been through? Not like she was hanging out with other children, only Fran and creepy mirror gal.
I gave this a firm 4 stars. My first Tudor read, though I’ve had ChalkMan on my shelf for MONTHS!

And yes, her death was a little bit too curious. I mean the police would be called regardless, right? Isabella died so you could call officials for that, but what DID they do with Miriam? I did think as soon as that happened, uh-oh, how are you going to explain that to the cops?


Did anyone else notice that she used the word “fusty” like six times throughout this book? Maybe I’m an annoying reader but that really bothered me lol. Use a synonym!!!

It’s a shame, I really wanted to like this and the concept was super intriguing. There was nothing I particularly disliked but I feel like it tried to do too much, it should have been a gritty thriller about the dangers of the Dark Web OR it should have been a kidnapping story with a supernatural twist. I liked both elements separately but Tudor didn’t manage to convince me that they should go together.

And we're adding a romance in at the end, after things have resolved? Ugh. I guess I won't be picking up another C.J. Tudor book. Too many other authors I would rather read.
I would recommend people who liked the dark web to read The Chain if you haven't already. That was a great book.

The beginning of the book started off strong and I do have to say that it was nice to have such a fast read. However, I found a lot of the twists predictable, meh, and sometimes cringe. Gabe and Katie ending up together was something I predicted from them being introduced to each other in the cafe at the beginning. I also found Miriam’s motive to ask the other people to kill Gabe’s family just not enough - if it was money she was after, Gabe was more than willing to set Miriam up for life yet it wasn’t enough for her? And the way she died was so cringeworthy and silly and unrealistic. And the paranormal aspect - either needed more of it or none at all as it didn’t actually make much of a difference to the plot and I still can’t wrap my head around how it connected the Isabella’s, or why the pebbles were so important. There were also characters that were introduced but not well rounded such as Katie’s mother and Steve. Steve would have been a great character to use to see more about what the other people were actually like and about. My favourite character out of the whole book was the Samaritan probably

The ending I found it a bit rushed but liked how all the loose ends got resolved. That the Samaritan was the young killer Dad, I didn't see that coming.
Now all the supernatural connection between Isabella and Izzy, I found it unnecessary to the whole story and plot, reason for not giving it all five stars.
Overall it was a great suspense thriller which was hard to put down!


The book also mentions that a lot of people reach the website because they receive it (or a hint to it) on a card. If they switch around the website so often, what happens to people who receive the card but only decide to act upon it a year later? Since these people are somehow linked, what happens when the police are involved in the investigation?
Maybe I might want a follow-up for that. The writing is great, really drew me in. I just cab't give it a 5 because there are some loose ends. Everything that wasn't a loose end was pretty much spoon fed. There's not really a point in the book where I came to a realization - it was more so like "this character you never met is now linked to this other character in this way", and the character recieving this bit of information always reacts with *insert shocked pikachu face here*.

I also didn't like the supernatural aspect as it was not explained at all. And I also had to remind myself that Izzi was 7/8 yo, she sounded like a teen for some reason, unlike Sam and Grace.
I didn't like the characters, specially Gabe, and I thought the writing was awful.
But I did enjoy reading it and it was fast paced that I didn't struggle to finish it. I just think that the book had so much potentials but the author chose the easy road.


I do have a recommendation for anyone who enjoyed shadowy network of "The Other People", it's a short story called Maneki Neko by Bruce Sterling. You can read it for free online, and I definitely recommend it.
http://www.lightspeedmagazine.com/fic...

Things I loved:
- The dark web element
- the other people organization
I think this book could have benefited from being a longer story and fleshing out some of the ideas. The characters seemed to be SO conveniently intertwined that it really took me out of the story, especially when it came to Katie and Gabe. Like of course, they are just always at the same coffee shop and her sister kidnapped your daughter AND her boyfriend is a hitman...
Overall I liked CJ Tudors writing, this book did have a bit of a *I'll just tell you rather than show you* type of quality, which I really don't like in thrillers. If the author tends to have to explain the plot through characters expositions in dialogue at the end of the book, it tends to get a low rating from me, but I am willing to give The Chalk Man a try to see if I'll like it more.
Didn't like the supernatural element but I think that's a commonality for a lot of us. I'm fine with going supernatural, as long as there is a reason for it, and how the events went down at the end... nope it really wasn't for me
Also I was just kinda disappointed with how little The Other People were really involved in the story, I really wanted to know more and have a deep dive into their dark organization, but that's just a personal preference that I didn't get.
*Nit Pick* but can ya'll believe how easily Gabe guessed the password to get into The Other People on the dark web?? Good god.