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message 101: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie yeah probably


message 102: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie Yeah that's fine @belle


message 103: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle okay..

Chapter 2


message 104: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle take it away guys


DarlingAngelWriter _camo_flowers_ wrote: "@belle and @kozzi should we just start the whole scene over?"

Just go from here...
I belong in an insane asylum. butEvan didnt seem to think so he just held my until i cried out the confusion of his prescence all the while trying to hold the Monster back...


message 106: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Evan," i cry into his shoulder. "Im going menatl!"

"youre not Abbie," he kisses my forehead. "Youre not."

"These thought?" i say looking up at him


message 107: by Maddie (last edited Jan 19, 2015 05:25PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie She was so close to winning. I dont know how much longer i can hold her back...


message 108: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Youre you," he says softly, and i slowly feel myself going back to normal. "And youre perfcet."

Evan could tame the bad side of me.

he knew me.

"Was it you?" i ask suddenly. "Who took away my memory? so i couldnt remember u?"


message 109: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie Evan lets out a tired sigh and melts me with his sad eyes


message 110: by Maddie (last edited Jan 19, 2015 05:29PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie He doesn't answer. He just kisses my forehead and tells me to get some rest.


message 111: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Evan tell me," i plead. "Please."


message 112: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle (bye guys! i gotta go now! continue the story!)

- belle

Goodnight everyone!


message 113: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie "Tomorrow" Evan says. "I promise"


message 114: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie Bye !!


message 115: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie "Now,"he says,"Get some rest. We have a long drive ahead of us."


message 116: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie I finally give in and close my eyes


message 117: by Maddie (last edited Jan 19, 2015 05:37PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie What wakes me is the soft crunch of gravel beneath feet. My eyes crack open and I can see that I'm being carried.
"Evan..?? I murmur, my voice barely above a whisper.


message 118: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie "Sshh" he tells me. "It's okay, you're fine"

I observe my surroundings. Gravel everywhere, tall pine oak trees, everything seems normal, that's when i notice...


message 119: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie someone in front of us.
"Evan," I whisper, panicked."Who is that?"


message 120: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie "He is a friend of mine." he replies.
"Who?"
"You will find out" Evan tells me just as we approach him.
"Ah. I see you brought her" he turns to me. "Long time, no see right Abbie?"


DarlingAngelWriter He looked exactly the same as Evan. Same brown hair and strange green yellow eyes. I could feel the Monster getting frustrated with me. She knew who this other Evan was but what did she know? i decided to ask her.


message 122: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie I dont know. She growls.
I slap Evans chest hard and he puts me down gently.
I narrow my eyes at the stranger. I can only see the right side of his face, his eyes, but not enough to know exactly what he looks like just enough to know that he can hold his own in a fight.
"Who are you?" I demand, skeptical. His face falls and he looks at Evan. Great. I'm starting to wonder if everyone but me knows whats going on.


message 123: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie "You don't remeber me?" he asks. "You don't remeber all the times we've had? Huh. That's a bit odd." He turns his gaze to Evan. Anger boils up inside me, anger towards Evan.
"What times" I glare at Evan. Thats when i remeber...


DarlingAngelWriter Evan introducing me to his friend...
Warm days on soft green grass...
Picnics, roasted fish and beaches...
I knew who this guy was...
He was Emanuel!
But something about him stirred my Monster up like crazy. I remembered... a betrayal!


message 125: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie Being thrown to the ground, yelling at me, saying I was weak and worthless, he left me.

"You" i mutter. "It was you, you betrayed me. You left me to fend for myself!" but why? Why did he get rid of me? I explode with rage.


message 126: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie the Monster within me took complete control and the worst part was... I didnt even mind.


message 127: by DarlingAngelWriter (last edited Jan 19, 2015 08:25PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

DarlingAngelWriter End Chapter 2

Begin Chapter 3

(This is so good I don't even know where to start)


message 128: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Abbie calm down," Evan tells me holding me by my arms

"You shut up!" I scream at him gysterically. "You brang me to the person who i hate most! This is youre idea of keeping me safe!"

"Abbie, babe clam down," Emauel says calmly walking over to me

"Stay away from me!" i shout pounding at Evan's chest. "Make him go away!"

evan wraps me in his arms and stands protectively infront of me. "Emauel she's not ready to meet you right now. She needs more time."

and then Emauel walks away.

I cry my heart out into Evan's chest for the second time that day.


message 129: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie "I'm sorry for freaking out like that Evan," I whisper, guiltily. The Monster within is still growling and snarling like a rapid dog. She wants to take control again. But I won't let her take control. Not again. Something very bad could happen if I do.

"Shhh. It's okay. You're allowed to have a little freak out now and then," He laughs softly. A sexy grin claims his mouth. It's at this moment I remember how close we are together. My heart starts hammering so hard against my chest, I'm sure he could feel it.


message 130: by Anjo (new) - rated it 5 stars

Anjo And it clicks. Almost pounding into me like a physical force. I jerked to the side. A world of monsters, mayhem and two brothers. Evan and Emanuel. They both wanted me. Emanuel to stop something or someone-but just who I couldn't quite recollect and Evan to take me away from something to keep me safe. But what Emanuel wanted me to do was my birthright. No matter how dangerous Evan thought it was.

I was terrified. The feeling tumbled into me and met up with the monster. They laughed together like good friends, swing their arms around one and other. Then they laughed at me.

Although I didn't know the details of the strange occurrences that I had been apart of supposedly I knew the details one would put into a synopsis and it wasn't close to enough for me to be satisfied.

I pushed at Evan, almost angry. "Tell me everything. What am I supposed to do."

And although I hated Emanuel I knew his mission for me was the right one.

Because even the wickedest of people can have good intentions. For there own reasons of course.


message 131: by Maddie (new) - rated it 5 stars

Maddie I wonder what his are. Emanuel is unpredictable. He could be dangerous but that doesn't stop me from knowing that his mission is the most important thing right now.


message 132: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle but what exactly was his mission anyway? to kill me? lure me to him? was he the one who had made me lose my memory?


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I thought as I took a deep breath, trying to figer out his end game. If he was the one who made my memory go away then why was he trying to come back into my life? To make up for something? Or for other reasons.. Darker reasons.


message 134: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Hey, Abbie, You okay?" Evan asks softly and i look up to meet his gaze

"Why cant you tell me whats going on?" i ask miserably.

Evan sighs and then takes my hand in his.
"Okay Abbie. I'll tell you."


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I couldn't belivie that he was finally going to tell me what was really going on. But at the same time, now i wondered if I even wanted to know... Was he going to tell me who took my memories? And everything that lead up to it? I wondered as i took another deep breath nodding my head. "Okay.."


message 136: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle (why does no one continue this!!!!! i dont want to be the one who says it...)


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood ((I know!!! It's so good! And then they just stop. I don't get it! I was trying to come up with something to put for the last comment that was like forever ago but couldn't do it. And now Someone does so maybe they'll come back))


message 138: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Abbie, it was Emanuel," he says at last


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood "So... he did take my memories. All of them," I say thinking out loud mostly to myself while also meaning it as a question, even though I could already tell that, that was what he meant.


message 140: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "he loved u," he says

something told me he was lying


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I could tell that he was lying... something about the way he said it. To slowly. Not convincing enough, like he wanted to tell me but at the same time didn't want to either. So what was it that he was trying t hide from me now? I wonder saying "I don't belivie you...."


message 142: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle "Why?" he asks meeting my eyes


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I think about it for a moment. Then say "EVEN if he did why would he take my memories?! Why would I feel like you where lying to me about him loving me?"


message 144: by Belle (new) - added it

Belle evan stays quiet. and then it hits me

"It was you!"


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood "You did it! It wasn't him, it was you that took them. ------And for what? So that I'd forget about him? Forget about you?"


message 146: by kaitie (new) - rated it 5 stars

kaitie I can see the hurt in Evan's eyes,but he doesn't reply. A wave of nausea rushes through my head.
I need to get out of here. I start to walk away when Evan grabs my arm.
"Abbie please, just, let me explain."
"What did you do that was so bad, that you had to take me memories?"
"Abbie, it wasn't me,"


message 147: by Anjo (new) - rated it 5 stars

Anjo I snorted. I'm done the last 15 minutes have not been enough for me to trust Evan-no matter the pull I feel towards him. I brush the events from my mind.
"Goodbye, Evan." and I took what little adrenaline I had left in me and ran home on it.

I stayed in my home battling my demons (figuratively and literally) for a week. Until a knock on my door and a man with a cruel smile would destroy what I call life. For the last time.


AbigailDenyse01 end of chapter 3

beginning of chapter 4


AbigailDenyse01 I open my eyes. I am underground. I can tell because of the musky dank smell. I can feel the crud on my face and I try to lift my arm to wipe it off, but my arms are secured to the table, I try lifting my head but my neck presses into a cold metal bar like the ones around my arms and ankles. she is surprisingly not bothering me for the first time in forever. I close my eyes and try to remember what happened. my vision fades and the memory bombards me.
someone is knocking on the door. oh my gosh it better be some pizza delivery dude looking for directions... or here to give me free pizzas, because if it is Evan or Emanuel or some other person from my past I swear my brain will explode. as I throw back the blanket and lumber to my feet my mind drifts back to the handsome brothers who, at the moment, have been the source of, like, all my thoughts. I walk down the hallway past moms bedroom, like usual it smells like smoke and alcohol. yuck. I cant remember a time where mom had given a crap about my grades or my life in general. but given the fact I could basically remember jack that meant little to me. I unlock the door and push open the screen. a man is standing on my deck. I really doubt its a pizza delivery guy. when he sees me a cruel smile stretches across his face. definitely not a pizza dude. he reaches into his jacket and pulls out a tube of liquid. " hello Abigail. you don't remember me but you will soon. I truly have missed you" his smile gets a snarky tint and at that point me brain is repeting FML,FML,FML... I am about to slam the door in his face when he opens the tube and as the scent hits my nose


AbigailDenyse01 then the world goes black. the next thing I remember is waking up in this god awful smelling place.


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