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Maddie With the adrenaline no longer pumping through my veins, exhaustion finally creeps in until I'm barely able to stand on my own two feet.


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Anjo I'd gotten a fair amount of sleep but She was stressing me out sucking my energy from me.


Maddie While whispering horrifying thoughts into my brain, telling me to let go. To let her take control.


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Anjo But that wasn't even an option. I almost screamed as and shifted around in my mind-putting nightmares into my system making my want to scream.
Why me?
Why me?


Maddie "You know why, little girl!"
She whispered. "But I don't know why! Why do you assume I know why?" I cried out. She didn't answer, just merely chuckled.


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Anjo I picked up the stone and threw it out the window. Screw the numbers. And "Screw Evan!" I screamed. I didn't care anymore. Not knowing was it's own battle.


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Belle Memories flood my head. a hot summer night with abreeze, a soft kiss...


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood from someone--- I couldn't make out who they where. Trying to grab onto what they looked like. Finally making out dark eyes and dark hair. Although the hair was lighter than it usually was, because we'd both been out in the sun almost all day and it caused the boys hair to lighten up than what it usually was. Trying once again to try to make out the boy's full frame to see who I thought it be, but didn't want to believe it for a minute.


Natalie It was him. I knew it as soon as soon as I saw him. I looked closely at the girl who he was kissing. Long, dark hair flowed down the girl's back. She pulled away from the kids and looked at me. My face. It was me. The memory faded and I gasped.


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Belle This big was him... but I only had vague memories of him... but who was he really? My boyfriend?


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood My ex-boyfriend? Or someone else--- something else to me? Then why were we kissing if he wasn't my boyfriend... or ex- boyfriend? Was he lying when he said that he didn't know who took my memories? Or was that also just a story he'd made up. In order to protect himself?


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Belle im guessing the second one. Because he felt so familiar... clearly there was something wrong... something he was trying to hide.


Natalie I brush off the thought, annoyed with him invading my mind. I brush my teeth, knowing I have to get out of the house. Luckily it is a Saturday, so I can go out. I walk downstairs after checking my messages. I have one new one, but I don't bother to check it. "Mom, can I have the keys?" I call up to her as my phone buzzes. She calls back now saying yes. I pull out my phone to see who is texting me. It's an unknown number, but I look anyways.

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Belle was this message from the guy? or was i going mental?


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Anjo My phone buzzed again I looked down at the message.

>Run. Run Before you remember.

I almost through my phone away and the Monster purred and slammed around again.


DarlingAngelWriter Someone was screwing with me... and the Monster loved the hate that it stirred within me. i checked my phone again:
Run.Run before you remember.
Yep, I was definately being screwed with. Hell, I didnt even know what it was i was running from. The Monster? Evan? Myself? I was so screwed...


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Belle i dont run however.

i try to act cool.. until i see evan standing by my driveway, with a smile on his face


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood Walking out not even waiting to see if she'd give me the keys anymore. Asking in a not very nice voice that came out more as a bark and command than an actual question. "What they hell do you think your doing here??"


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Belle he meerly just smiles at me- a sad smile and i groan.

storming up to him i grab a hold of his shirt- by his chest.

"Tell me who u are!" i demand. "And what do u want from me?"


DarlingAngelWriter He simply laughed at me and spun away... Oh, no he wasnt!


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I start to storm after him, hopping in front of him and saying "No! You don't get to walk away. You don't just get to show up at my house in the middle of the night and not give me any answers. So--- Who are you? And don't lie this time!"


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Belle a sad expression crosses his face.

"If i tell you, you'll be in more danger than you already are."

"So whats your purpose than Evan?" i demand


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood I wait for him to answer half expecting no answer at all, seeing as he was so fond of not giving me answers anyways. So I was surprised when he actually did say something.


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Belle "what do u mean?" i try again

"I mean the person who did this to you, knows that im here right now... you need to go back inside. coming here was a bad idea." he says looking behind him and then back at me.

"Evan," i beg him. "Just tell me."

he reaches up and touches my face softly, sending shivers through me.

Those shivers were really familiar


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood "I can't.... No actually I wont." He said as he looked back to me from looking over his shoulder. Causing me to wonder who was back there.. where they a threat? To me? To Evan? To both of us? Plus I still wanted answers. Asking "Are you the one that sent me those text messages?"


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Belle he looks up shocked

"What text messages?" he asks in urgency

"Telling me to run... run before i remember?" i say slowly.

the wind picks up and i shiver. Evan takes off his sweater and drapes it over my shoulders, to which i am grateful for.

"I didnt," he says. then takes a hold of my hand and leads me to his car."Get in. im taking you some place safe."

"Will you answer my questions then?" I ask getting in.

He buckles his seat belt rapidly. "Yes, but for now, lets just go."


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Belle end of chapter 1...

begin chapter 2


Cassie    'The Thinker Go Go Go Go' Mis. Roben Goodfellow'\Isabelle Lightwood The ride was long, and quite. The only time there was noise was when I tired asking him questions. But never got an answer to them. Sighing, as he once again made a fast turn, around a corner. Asking again "Where are we going?"


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Belle "Abbie please," He sighs as we pull onto the highway.

"You said you'd answer my questions!" i raise my voice and he runs a hand over his face. as if saying: what have i gotten myself into!

i cross my arms over my chest- i wasn't getting any answers


kaitie But I never know the answer as a splintering pain surges through my stomach and darkness takes over


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Belle "Dont go with him"

a voice says- a male voice

"He doesnt love you. he wants to kill you. evan wants to kill you"


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Belle "By him.." i say

"Him?" he looks over at me

"That voice.." i say

Evan looks at me through his amazing eyes. "Abbie, what r u talking about?"

'That voice," tears stream down my face. "Is telling me u want to kill me."


DarlingAngelWriter he reached over and brushed my tears away with his thumb. looking into his eyes it was hard to know if he knew something or not. then he spoke,


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Belle " I would never hurt you Angel," he whispers.

and then a memory comes rushing in


kaitie dried blood, tears, a body ...


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Belle (what a nice place to put it! anyways, bye!)


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Belle Kozzi wrote: "dried blood, tears, a body ..."

but whose was this?


Maddie Belle wrote: "Kozzi wrote: "dried blood, tears, a body ..."

but whose was this?"


im so confused right now. do we pick up where Kozzi left off?


kaitie @belle if you mean the tears its from the main character. But i dont know whos body it is, its up to you


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Belle "Abigail!" i hear a voice say

"Abbie! abbie snap out of it!"

i blink and open my eyes.

im screaming and im in the car with Evan.

he pulls the car towards the side of the road and then pulls me towards him.

i rest my head on his shoulder and cry

"Its okay Abbie," he kisses my forehead.

it wasnt. i was going crazy


Maddie I belong in an insane asylum.


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Belle Kozzi wrote: "@belle if you mean the tears its from the main character. But i dont know whos body it is, its up to you"

opps, i changed the scene.. do u want her to go back into the scene? or just move on?


Maddie She should just Move on


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Belle _camo_flowers_ wrote: "I belong in an insane asylum."

(what is that?)


kaitie _camo_flowers_ wrote: "Belle wrote: "Kozzi wrote: "dried blood, tears, a body ..."

but whose was this?"

im so confused right now. do we pick up where Kozzi left off?"


sorry my writing skills aren't that great im working on it


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Belle Kozzi wrote: "_camo_flowers_ wrote: "Belle wrote: "Kozzi wrote: "dried blood, tears, a body ..."

but whose was this?"

im so confused right now. do we pick up where Kozzi left off?"

hey hey, everyone's a great writer, we just have our own styles :)

sorry my writing skills are..."



Maddie @belle and @kozzi should we just start the whole scene over?


Maddie @belle and @kozzi should we just start the whole scene over?


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Belle @Camo-flower

lets just start chapter 2 again..

so after she gets in the car with him.

fine with u guys?


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