Once Upon A Time & Irene

[Irene]

Here we go

[onceuponatimeareview]

Hi :)

[Irene]

Hi! :)

So... Do we decide on a plot or something first or? :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

Yes we decide the plot. I have a some idea I could throw out on the table.

[Irene]

Please do, since I haven't tried this befoe! :D

[onceuponatimeareview]

I prefer doing doubles which is both of us is a girl and a boy. So we can always combined ideas and such. I also have a few ideas that are for doubles. I also have a Mortal Instruments Idea and a Divergent idea.

(view spoiler)[So I had this really good idea that popped into my head after listening to Cop Car by Keith Urban.

Girl A is a good girl. She gets good grades. Guy A is a bad boy. He commits a crime and kidnaped Girl A. They are in the run. One night the cops find them. She denies everything the cops says. The cops believe her and let them both go. She doesn't see Guy A anymore. He left her. She was broken hearted. Until one day they go on vacation. She sees him. Then he commits a bigger crime that effects them both. Will she turn him in?


I would like to be the girl.
Someone who can play a bad boy would be nice.
Detail I want someone who make become more detail. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[I have this idea about this girl who lost her memory and she goes back to her old life a year afterwards and still doesn't have her memory so she goes to school and no one talks to her. Her boyfriend sees her and wants to know what she knows. She doesn't like him. When she needs someone.Will she except the help? Will she get her memories back. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[You know of the story of Red Riding Hood. Wrong. Little Red Riding Hood has goes to grandmas house. Like the normal story. The big bad wolf turns out to be a werewolf who tries killing them. The axe man is a werewolf hunter in disguise. He kills the werewolf. He must of not a done a good job. Some years later.The werewolf is the new student at a high school. Red Riding Hood is now this a regular girl in school. She isn't cool,but has two best friends. They do everything together. She thinks the new kid is a stuck up jerk. He is,but he is drawn to Red. He doesn't know why. He forgot the scent of the little girl. They fall in love and he tells her what he is. She doesn't believe,but she does. She ran away from him because he tired killing her. Sometime later she excepts it. She wants to be turned to live with him forever. The hunter comes back ready finish the job he started. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[All anyone wants is to be normal. Double goes for Girl A. She wants to fit in. That will never happen. She is a vampire. She stays keeps it low at school. Correction she is a Vampire Princess. She is being forced to marry another vampire who she doesn't even know. Guy A is the new kid at school. He is a jock. He fits right in with everybody else. Except he made one mistake. He decide to sit at the lunch table make friends with Girl A. She doesn't trust him at all. Then she realizes she likes him. He likes hurt. One day on a hiking trip a vampire hunter shoots and misses hitting him. She fights with herself to change him. She didn't want to lose him. Now he is a vampire. What she did was forbidden. Now they have to keep it a secret. With hunters and rules. Will they be able to stay together. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[This is one is based off of 50 Shades of Grey the characters are well at least some of them are. No we wouldn't do any hard core romance. I will explain more of it to you.

Six years ago Lillian Kylee Grey went missing more so she ran away. She left everything and started over some place else. No one knows why she left. She left her past behind her and thats where she wants everything to stay in the past where it belongs. Until one day her past collides with her future. How can she keep everything to herself when she meets the one person who she always falls in love with all over again. Then one day her secret is out about who she is. Will the one person who she loves stay beside her or leave her because of who she is? (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[The year is 3024 and the world is rule by a new species called the Perfects. The Perfects are and alien/human hybrid. Each perfect has a special ability and talent that use. Humans are extinct. Or that's what they think. Humans have to hide because they can't fit in with the Perfects. Most humans are barley living.

Each Perfect is driected if they find a human they have to bring to the Dome where they would be transformed. One day the bad boy popular Perfect went stumble across a human girl on the run for life. He takes her to the Dome. The human girl gets transformed. Little did he know about the corrupt ways of the government until he is made to take care of the girl until she adjusts to her new life.

The government secerts he finds out.
She's confused and has no memory on what happened but she is a danger to the public with her ablitlies that no one has.
Can they stop the government before it's to late? (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[Okay so I have this idea that I want to write a more about on my own. So I need someone to help spark ideas on how to write it this idea.

Its August 7th 1888 when the famous killings of Jack the Ripper began. No one knows who he is or why he is doing it. Girl A is young and naive even when the killings start. In the Whitechapel District there is a new guy in town. No one knows anything about Guy A. Guy A is demon. Guy is also Jack the Ripper. When Girl finds Guy A can she resist him. Can she believe he has a good heart? Or will she be his next victim?

I want to be Girl A
I need someone who can play that mysterious bad boy
I want someone detail
Remember I can only be detail if the other person tries to be or I won't get my brain juice working. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[I'm suppose to be evil. Don't you see?

Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?


I know this is a killer here I really would love to be Girl A.
Another thing is I'm trying to become more detail so I would love someone who can push me to be detail.
Also someone who is active I understand people have life's outside of goodreads.
Anyone? (hide spoiler)]

(view spoiler)[Girl A lives in a kingdom that is having an on going wars for her whole life. The most recent of such is the Dragons. The dragons by far are the most terrifying creatures in this kingdom. Guy A is a dragon. Of course are dragons can transform into humans. Girl A is out to prove that girls can do anything guys can do. She has her mind on killing a dragon. During this hunt things don't go as plan at all. In the end Guy A rescues Girl A. Guy A senses something about Girl A, but can't put his finger to it.

Guy B is Girl A's twin brother. He is always in trouble. He hates following rules. He is also is very protective over his sister. Well Guy B is dating a Girl B who happens to be a Rebel who lures Guy B into this. Guy B doesn't mind because he knows his parents are wrong and corrupt about everything.

Basically this whole group of people go on a journey together eventually to bring peace to all the kingdoms. Along the way Girl A and Guy A fall for each other but it takes time. Guy B doesn't like Guy A. Guy A would do anything to get Girl A. Even if that includes flirting with Girl B or other girls along the way. Everything will be end up being tested in the end. Will they succeed?


Requirements

I want to be Girl A and Guy B

I want this to be detail super detail

I understand people have life. Just post at least once day.

I know this sounds confusing but I feel once we get Roleplaying it everything will go good (hide spoiler)]

[Irene]

Nice ideas! The first idea sounds really interesting and can have some ethical aspects. What if x, what if y etc. etc.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay yeah sure :)

[Irene]

Where should we start the story? From the beginning of the kidnapping or when they meet again at the vacation? :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

Um at the beginning and work our way up

[Irene]

Okay :) And you can be the girl (: I would love to play the bad boy lol

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay :)

[Irene]

Do we create our characters now? :D

[onceuponatimeareview]

We can or we can skip right into it.

[Irene]

I think the latter works best for me :) Btw which time zone are you in? Just to know if we will be on at the same hours :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

I'm in Eastern Time

[Irene]

Oh, ok, I'm GMT+1, which means it's just past midnight now :)

Ok, I'm ready when you are then :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

Wow its only 6:15 here :)

Who shall go first?

[Irene]

You can!

Oh, and I'd like my character to be named Marco! How old are we? :D

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay um my character is going to be like 17-19 I think the guy should be 19 but its up to you. My character will be Aaliyah and she is 17

[Irene]

Marco is 19, that's fitting :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

Cool so how detail do you want this to be? I'll just post and then we can go from there. This around the very least I can do. I do way more.


Aaliyah was just on her way home from her track meet on Saturday. She was the best there and was really good at doing everything she had to. She always placed in higher rankings than her team mates. She started to slow down to get her cool down process. She bit her lip a little as she felt someone was falling her. She shook the feeling off because she knew no one would take her. She knew everyone here. This was a safe town. Her parents were strict and they agreed to let her go on her own. She had so many rules to follow on everything.

[Irene]

I think what you did is okay for a start - since I haven't tried it before, I don't really have a prefered writing style yet :)


Marco was outside having a smoke. He was trying to cool down, but his heart was beating very fast. Today was one of the worst days ever in his life. It wasn't his fault that the band didn't get the contract. Okay, sure, slamming his bass against the floor several times probably wasn't the right way to make the record company listen, but still. There was no other way! He couldn't see why they had to kick him out of the band.
Suddenly an attractive girl walked by. He couldn't help but stare at her. He wondered where she lived, when he decided to just follow her. He could really use some company tonight!

[onceuponatimeareview]

((okay))

Aaliyah was starting on her cool down now. So she started to slow down. She was wearing short shorts and a neon pink tank top as she was slowing down. Her long blonde hair flowed down on her shoulders. Her nice smooth skin was kissed by the sun. The only thing unique about her was her piercing blue eyes. No one every forgot about them. She didn't sense anyone following her.

[Irene]

He finished his smoke and tried to blend in as good as he could; it wasn't easy with hs gothic looks. His hair was dyed black and was greasy. He also wore eyeliner. This all made it hard enough, and it didn't help that he was wearing his leatherjacket. It was hot, but he didn't care - it was all about looking as tough as possible.
He tried to walk as natural as possible, while making sure he made no sound. He wondered what she was doing, since she looked so sweaty. She's got the looks, he thought, I wonder what it'll take for me to get her phone number.

[onceuponatimeareview]

She wondered what to do after this. She started to slow down. She stopped as she felt someone following her. She decided to pick up her speed and start on her run. I wonder who is following me? She thought to herself as she got to a corner she stopped to take a breath. She was use to the long miles without stopping but she needed a break hence her cool down.

[Irene]

It was getting harder to follow the unknown girl. He wasn't a sporty type at all, and now she started running? He decided to take a shortcut and hope to get to the main street before she did - if that was the way she was going! He leaned against a building at the corner of the mainstreet and did nothing but to wait and hope she'd pass by.

[onceuponatimeareview]

As she came to main street she started to slow down. She took a big gasp of air trying to catch her breath. She was going to finally do her cool down. Aaliyah started to relax. There was no need for anyone to take her or watch her at all.

[Irene]

He lit up another cigarette as he stood there waiting. It didn't look like she was coming. Two minutes. I'll give her two minutes. If she doesn't show up by then, I'll go back home and get myself some coffee he thought. He couldn't help but feel a bit sad to let this opportunity go. How often did you see girls like that? She had to show up!

"Auch!" Suddenly he burned his fingers. He'd been lost in thoughts about the girl and didn't realize that the cigarette had burned down.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Aaliyah was almost at the spot where her stalker was. She kept walking slowly because she needed a break from running. She didn't care what was going to happen because this was her free time. Her parents are always there this it the part where she breaks free. She looked down at her feet as people started to crowd by. She didn't like being near people.

[Irene]

He kept on looking. Lots of people, but noone like her. It wasn't until she was right in front of him that he saw her. Quick, quick, I need something quick, he thought. He had no idea how to get in touch with her. He realized that he had to do something now, or he would miss his chance once more.
He followed her, took out his phone and then on purpose bumped into her shoulder. He quickly turned around and started to apologize. "I'm so so sorry! What was I thinking? I was just checking my band's facebook page and forgot about everything else. I'm so sorry," he pleaded.

[onceuponatimeareview]

She looked up at him. "Oh thats okay." She said. For a few seconds she study him. "You know if your trying to go for the rocker look its the 21st century and most guys don't wear make up. Rockers have a strong build type of look." She said with a smile and started to walk away. She didn't really want to deal with him at the moment.

[Irene]

He couldn't help but laugh. "Oh, so you don't think I'm strong? Is that what you're saying?" He cocked his eyebrow at her and then blinked.
He looked at her, from top to bottom. "So ehh...what are you trying to look like?" he teased her

[Irene]

Are you not interested in playing anymore?

[Irene]

I take that as a no then.. :/