First two chapters (3K)... YA Fantasy (90K total)

[Jeremy]

Hi,

My working title is DEMON'S CROWN. It's a journey, post-King Arthur's death, following the last knight of the Round Table and the Lady of the Lake. It has demonic possessions, a woman of dragon-blood, curses, and zombie knights.

I am seeking help for a shelved manuscript I am rewriting a year after getting a full request and rejection from a dream agent. Rookie mistake, I didn't find a CP or beta readers. I am now through the first few chapters and need some help. I have a degree in journalism with no experience in literature, so I would appreciate any experienced readers/authors.

I'd appreciate any help and will offer fresh eyes for your work, so please message me directly and I will share my work through email.

Thank you for your time,

Jeremy

[Herm]

I'll check it out. Send it to hermanbattiste@gmail.com

[jennmreads]

Jeremy wrote: "Hi,

My working title is DEMON'S CROWN. It's a journey, post-King Arthur's death, following the last knight of the Round Table and the Lady of the Lake. It has demonic possessions, a woman of drago..."

Hey Jeremy - I could do a first three chapters exchange. I'm not an experienced author, but I have been an avid reader of many genres (though mostly YA fantasy) for nearly 20 years (that makes me feel ancient). I have just done my first revision of my first draft of a YA fantasy and I feel like my first three chapters could be stronger. I'm apparently an old hag because I don't know how to message you directly.

[RK]

Sounds fascinating, I'd love to help out. PM me :)

I've been critiquing nearly 4 years and I'm querying at the moment so I have time before I start my next project.