Beta Reader Needed for Noir Short Story

[Daisy]

Hello!
I'm looking for a beta reader for a short story called The Lone Nights of Cherry Hill. It is just above fourteen thousand words. I'm particularly looking for critiques and feedback on the story, pace, writing and various editing characteristics you may be able to provide.
Being a story of noir fiction, it is about a young girl descending into the loss of hope after being kidnapped.
Of course, I'm willing to return the favor, reading and offering honest reviews of short stories and novelettes under 18,000 words.
Feel free to PM me or post to this thread. Thank you!

[Jason]

Hi, Daisy, did you get beta readers for your story? I'm looking to raise my editing profile. I copy edited two traditionally published books for a friend.
No charge, if you still need a reader/editor.

Thanks,

Jason Beech