Looking for Feedback and Suggestions on The Goodreads Web Serial Are You My Father, Travis Holliday?

[Amber]

Hi. My name is Amber and I write web serial fiction exclusively on the Goodreads Creative writing community page.

I would love feedback and suggestions on my first ever general fiction web serial called Are You My Father, Travis Holliday which is inspired by the TV show Almost Family and I've gotten some inspiration from it from the film Delivery Man starring Vince Vaugh.

The first 4 chapters are up right now and chapter 5 will premiere on 11/29/19

Here's the Synopsis if interested and the link to go read it:

Liz is a 32 year old high school literature teacher who discovers that she has siblings who came from an anonymous sperm donor. When they think that their father is horror and genre icon Travis Holliday, a road trip commences to find the answers they need as well as discover other siblings along the way.

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Enjoy and please let me know what you think. Thanks!