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message 451: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Thank you for your patience. Welcome to the Group, and your character looks good. I just have a few things:

There is already a character named Aloe Vera, who was active in previous roleplays. Please choose a different name.

Your personality is only a string of adjectives, so please expand it to at a minimum of 2 and a half sentences.

Your character is also a little overpowered. Please limit the abilities to two and watered down.


જ⁀➴ Cσყ ⁺₊ .ೃ࿔ Is my character approved?


message 453: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Thank you for your patience everyone. I am sorry for the delay in approvals. The end of the year can be quite busy.

"Who can love, but still be so mean?": Hydrangea Approved

Aryah: Barracuda Your character looks good, but to avoid confusion and potential timeline changes, we do not want OC royalty in this group (with the exception of SeaWing princes, who can be claimed because there were so many unnamed ones). Other than that you are good to go.


message 454: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Elsa: Honeyeclipse Your character looks good, but please follow the template. It makes it easier to check off everything and easier to organize and categorize information. Also, for hybrids, it is important to explicitly write out all of the abilities they have, to prevent a character from being OP (limit of 2-3 and watered down.) Having no abilities and/or no powers is fine though, I just want to clarify.

Don't worry about your first character not being approved the first time. Sometimes it takes a few adjustments for the character to be approved. :)


message 455: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Elsa: Honeyeclipse Thank you for implementing the changes. However, please expand on the personality (minimum 2 1/2 sentences).

Also, I realized that I may not have been quite clear in my original post. By abilities, I mean abilities like firebreathing, poison barbs, blending into shadows, etc. Its fine if your character doesn't have abilities, but I just wanted to clarify that.


message 456: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Elsa: Honeyeclipse approved.


message 457: by Rambly~why do I exist~ (last edited Feb 05, 2024 05:15AM) (new)

Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments Name: Snowbird
Age: 6
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual

Tribe: Icewing Nightwing Hybrid
Role: Scout/Wanderer For both the Nightwings and Icewings.
Abilities: Ice breath

Backstory: She was born in a scouting family. Although he was unable to find peace with who he was. She left one day and never came back. She still is in contact with the queen of the Ice wings and Glory Queen of the Nightwings.

Personality: Always stressed and anxious but she is overall nice to be around and talk to. She is always looking over her shoulder. but she has a dark side she has underlying Issues that are never talked about.


Scales: Black with white and Silver scales on the underside of her wings.
Stature: built like an Icewing. She is Quite short but really thin.
Eyes: Icy Blue.

Family: Dusk (Brother) and Freeza(Mother)( I am making them but if anyone wants to make them just let me know) her father is dead.
Friends: Spike and shadow (Open)
Enemies: (open)
Crush: (Open)
Significant other: (open)


message 458: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
Alright so…

Can we have a bit more on the appearance?

It has also come to my attention that you already have two dragons with special abilities. So you’ll probably have to cross out the mind reading, as that counts as a special ability.


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments What's his name?


message 460: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
Oh thank god I don’t see it either bc on mobile some words aren’t always there for me 😅


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments Lol, just wondering!


message 462: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
I had just assumed it was gone bc of the whole mobile thing lol


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments That's really funny, I really like naming them, so I was trying to find it somewhere in the template, lol


message 464: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
Exactly lol


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments ✨Isabella✨ wrote: "Alright so…

Can we have a bit more on the appearance?

It has also come to my attention that you already have two dragons with special abilities. So you’ll probably have to cross out the mind read..."

oh ok thanks


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments is it ok now?


message 467: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
Hm, looks good to me. Unless any mod says otherwise, approved.

Never been this nervous at being a mod bf lol


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments lol i have but not a lot


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments and thanks


message 470: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
I might have different standers than most mods. I try to cut some slack though bc I am usually overly descriptive with my OCs, but sometimes I feel I cut too much- o-o


message 471: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (last edited Jan 29, 2024 07:12PM) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
You are doing very good Isabella. Thank you for handling the approval. ;)

The only thing I have to say is to please change your OC's name. Icicle is a canonically significant name, and it might be confusing for other RP-ers. Just a small change and you are good to go @Glam Bonnie :)


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments Nicoletta wrote: "You are doing very good Isabella. Thank you for handling the approval. ;)

The only thing I have to say is to please change your OC's name. Icicle is a canonically significant name, and it might be..."


oh ok thanks.


message 473: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Glam Bonnie: Flake Your character looks good, but the name Flake is also taken. Please choose another name.


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments ... Uhhhh


message 475: by Emalie (new)

Emalie Washington | 13 comments Name: statue
Age: six
Gender: Male
Rank: student (carver Aswell)
Wing: night-mud lives with his sibs (two of his clutch one older big wing)

Personality: skittish intelligent shy nervous caring Prone to feeling inadequate Cannot tolerate conflict, warm anxious sweat. He is exceedingly kind and loving to his friends and family and he HATES violence and fighting but... if pushed he will fight fearlessly to protect his friends and sibs. He has a large heart with room to fit even the meanest dragons once he gets to know them, but he can be quite anxious to talk to other dragons he is close friends with a scavenger named copper that he met when he and his sibs where alone and he is fluent in scavenger.
History: statue and his sibs where abandoned by their parents as young dragonets leaving their big wing and older half-sister saltwort to care for them when she came across the clutch hidden under an old cypress-willow tree hybrid Statute lived with saltwort and his sibs for most of his life until he was old enough to go to jade wing academy with his sister Phlox while basalt stayed behind to help saltwort with the shop. Statue is anxious around other tribes due to trauma from the time that he and his sibs were left alone left behind by there parents. although one day before saltwort found him, he met a leaf-sand hybrid named Astroloba who he fell in love with and visited daily until…. Astroloba disappeared without warning. he wonders if he will ever see his “best friend” again… he also met a young hive wing/ sky wing named damselfly.
Appearance: Statue is oddly small for either of his tribes with narrow wings that have small dots of stars scattered about in beautiful patterns. colors: Bistre (brown) coffee (brown) Beaver (brown) Cafe Noir brown) Granite (black) Abbey ( black) Pantone 448 C (brown) his blocky horns has stripes of scales he has two sliver eye tear drop shaped eye scales running zig zag across them his eyes are a soft brown/silverish.
Family: parents- unknown open (please ask) sibs- basalt (brother) Phlox (sister) and saltwort
Friends: Astroloba copper
Mate: none (open in future)
Crush: Astroloba ( ask for permission )
Dragonets: none (open in future)
Other: he wears a bracelet that helps with his mind reading headaches he gets he is also born from
A dragon blood egg which gives him fireproof scales. He also wears glasses to help him see better.

is this fine?


message 476: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Glam Bonnie: Snowbird Approved.

Emalie: Statue Approved.


message 477: by -Isabella- (new)

-Isabella- | 865 comments Mod
Can we have a little more appearance? Also, the name Scorpion is already taken. Thanks! <3


message 478: by B29ABN (last edited Feb 14, 2024 06:22AM) (new)

B29ABN | 438 comments Name: Lodestar
Age: 9 years
Tribe: Nightwing
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dark black scales with dark purple underscales and purple eyes, with small teardrop scales at the corner of each eye, similar to Fatespeaker. He is physically small, also never seen without his bag, slung across his back, in which he carries his most important items.
Personality: He can be shy at times, but likes making friends during his travels so he isn't completely alone. His passion is mapmaking and exploring, and he's currently trying to map the entire continent, with details about each location.
Rank: He's mostly just a wanderer, though he is known to help others find things and act as a guide if asked.
Abilities: he has decent empathy, though his parents, as well as himself, believe this is just weak mindreading. He is also good at remembering directions and finding his way.


Jamyie the Dragon lover | 2 comments Name: Patches
Age: 4
Gender: Female
Tribe: Nightwing-Icewing hybrid
Appearance: She looks like an Icewing with black patches that look like splatters of black paint on a white canvas. Her small, thin body helps her be very graceful and lithe. She has splatters of black around her eyes that look like a panda's.
Personality: She loves to be around others but can overthink things excessively. She likes to hide, and tries to see if she can fit into small spaces. She is incredibly observant to the smallest detail.
Backstory: Her father died before she was born. Her mother (a nightwing), was disappointed that she didn't have mindreading like herself so she taught her how to read people based on body language and tone of voice and stuff. Patches's training involved hiding in small spaces and watching dragons interact with her mother as her mother was a therapist. Her side hustle nowadays is a hired detective. She is a quite popular detective because she somehow knows the right place to be at the right time.
Rank: Hired detective/part-time JMA student.
Abilities: Very weak prophecy, (kinda her skill for noticing dragon's emotions)


message 480: by JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) (last edited May 22, 2024 08:49AM) (new)

JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments Trailblazer
Tribe )) Nightwing
Age )) 7 ½
Gender )) Female
Rank )) Trail maker
Appearance )) Trailblazer has pale purple-pink scales, as she has albinism. Her eyes are a bright teal and she has small wings. Her wing membranes are light pink with pale red stars, but they are shredded. She's small for her age. She has scars all over, but they're barely visible as she is nearly the same color her scars are.
Personality )) Trailblazer is a bit nervous and very quirky, and her claws shake when she's overwhelmed. She's very kind-hearted, but if she senses danger, it's every dragon for herself. She consistently has to remind herself that nobody's going to hurt her, but she can be distracted from her nerves easily by someone asking her about plants, trails or animals, which she could talk about for hours. She talks to herself, and has very high paranoia.
Backstory )) Trailblazer was hatched albino, and her parents were strict Nightwings, and so she was abandoned. Her wing membranes are very delicate, which is why they are shredded. She tromped around the Rainwing Kingdom and named herself what she was good at; Trailblazing.
Abilities )) Has weak fire-breathing, no Nightwing powers
Place of Residence )) Rainwing Kingdom
Likes )) Rain, collecting things, swimming
Dislikes )) Trees, climbing, being alone
One word to describe them as )) Nervous
Other )) Unable to fly


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments am i a mod?)


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments Nope i'm not lol I forgot.


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments Lol, I do that too


message 484: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (last edited Jun 03, 2024 05:35PM) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Skykid Abbyss: Lodestar You are off to a great start, but please add a backstory.

Jamyie the Dragon lover: Patches Approved

JustRae: Trailblazer Approved

Also, to everyone. I apologize for the late approvals of some of these characters. If your character has been posted and you haven't heard anything from the moderators for quite some time, please feel free to ask your character. Sometimes we miss something.

edit: I hadn't specified a time here (sorry, I was rushing to write this). If a week or more passes by (especially if other characters had been looked at/approved), please feel free to ask about the character.


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments Thank you! ^^


*.~Nova Yagi {Kawaii version}ᥫ᭡ | 4 comments Name )) Mako
Age )) 8
Gender )) Female
Tribe )) Seawings
Appearance ))
Sailfish the seawing (OC) - Wattpad
Personality )) Adventurous and stubborn, this spunky female loves to explore. She hates being pushed around and told what to do by others, which leads to many burnt bridges. She loves Salmon and starfruit, but hates eel for some reason and she wont say why.
Backstory )) Her whole life, Mako has grown up in the kingdom of sea. She remembers the old summer palace and taking trips there whenever she could. After it got destroyed though, she was saddened by the matter. Her mother died when she was around 4 years old and she still has no clue where her father is or who he is. She never really had any friends growing up so now she tries to make as many possible.
Rank )) ?
Abilities )) Glowing scales. She also has fire somehow (Most likely from her father *dun dun DUN*)


*.~Nova Yagi {Kawaii version}ᥫ᭡ | 4 comments *.~Nova Yagi {Kawaii version}ᥫ᭡ wrote: "Name )) Mako
Age )) 8
Gender )) Female
Tribe )) Seawings
Appearance ))

Personality )) Adventurous and stubborn, this spunky female loves to explore. She hates being pushed around and told what to ..."


Sorry, erm- Am I approved? Just curious ^^'


Rambly~why do I exist~ On and off  | 739 comments The mods will approve it when they're on. So not at the moment.


message 489: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
Nova Yagi: Mako Seawings generally do not have fire, so if you want her to have fire, you should make her a hybrid.

The RP in this universe takes place 8 years after the events of the final book, which means that the events of the first arc would have taken place 9 years ago. Given her current age, she wouldn't have been alive for the destruction of the summer palace.

Also, rank is equivalent to what they do (occupation, student, etc.) Other than that, you are good to go.


message 490: by [deleted user] (new)

this is my first OC, Stingray. I welcome criticism about her, so feel free!

Name: Stingray
Nicname(s): Sting(most often used)/Ray (rarely used)
Gender: Female
Pronouns: she/her
Age: 30
Tribe(s): SeaWing/HiveWing
Description: four wings adapted for swimming, in place of the black scales on a hivewing, its emarald green scales, and in place of the yellow scales, aqua blue scales. Along her sides are the bioluminecent scales of the seawings. She is fairly plump. Her body shape is a mix of the two tribes she is a member of. She has a tail stinger, witch is where she got her name.
Mother: Cricket
Father: Turtle
Backstory: the 5th of 7 children, Stingray was the only one to inherit her fathers animus powers. The first use of her powers, other than the test to find out she had animus powers, was to protect her soul from it. That has been the only use of her powers so far. At the moment she is actively pregnant with at least 4 eggs.
Relationships: related to the seawing royal family, and crickets family (witch is kinda a scattered mess to be honest)
likes/dislikes: Stingray LOVES books, her husband, and the sea. She dislikes her animus powers, and her relathionship with tsunami.
Personalty: shy, but at times her relathion to tsunami shows bright and clear. She’s a BIG bookworm, like her mother. She is a GIANT sweetheart though.

I'm working on a story right now, so no story yet. once it's done I'll post it to my feed.


message 491: by [deleted user] (new)

this is my main OC, Eclipse! I think she meets all the requirements. if not, tell me and i'll fix it!


Name: Eclipse
Nickname(s): none
Rank: Princess (secret that she dont know about)
Gender: Female
Pronouns: she/her
Last known location: bouncing around Pyrrhia
Age: 20
Tribe(s): Nightwing
Description: she’s an avarage nightwing, but she has mindreading powers.
Mother: ???
Father: ???
Backstory: raised in the rainwing/nightwing kingdom, she has lived a normal modern nightwing life so far.
Powers: Mindreading
Likes/dislikes: she is a big bookworm. She doesn't really like fighting, but when she does, she fights VICIOUSLY.
Personalty: a kind, energetic sort of dragon.


message 492: by B29ABN (new)

B29ABN | 438 comments Name: Lodestar
Age: 9 years
Tribe: Nightwing
Rank: Mapmaker/explorer
Appearance: Dark black scales with purple underscales, he is physically small for his age, and is never seen without his map bag slung across his back.
Personality: Lodestar is a shy dragon, but still tries his best to make friends during his travels across the continents. He studied at JMA for most of his life as a dragonet, learning cartography and astronomy.
Abilities: can easily find his way through the continents, due to his time spent mapping them.


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments I adopted this one; she's mine now! ^^

Name: Crystal
Age: 5
Gender: Female
Tribe: Icewing
Appearance: Pure white scales with an almost see-through iridescence, wings with a iridescent to metallic blue gradient, shiny white spines, dark blue eyes, silvery, dull claws and smaller than normal for her age
Accessories: Silver necklace with a crystal on it
Abilities: No ice
History: Crystal was born without ice. Her parents, disgusted by her and her sister, shoved them on a small iceberg as soon as they had hatched. But Snowdrop, her sister, froze the water around them until they made it back to the Ice kingdom. Crystal and Snowdrop hid in a cave until they turned four, then Snowdrop went to the Icewing palace (her parents were servants) and killed Beluga and Shard.
Family:
Father-Beluga-Deceased
Mother-Shard-Deceased
Sister-Snowdrop-Alive
Personality: Timid, adores her sister, clingy


message 494: by [deleted user] (new)

think she's already approved...


JustRae ((Contraptional Hiatus)) | 892 comments Yep! They have to go through it again, just so it's easily tracked, I believe.


message 496: by Nicoletta, When you finally figure out titles :) (new)

Nicoletta | 1620 comments Mod
FFoens: Lodestar Your character looks good, but please add a backstory :)

TalonsAndTails: Starchaser Your character looks good. For the sake of preventing confusion, we would like it if we didn't have characters closely related to cannon characters. Also, could you water down your hybrid abilities a little bit (have cold silk but can only produce a little bit at a time, antennae have a shorter range, or smth?). Other than that, your character is good to go.


message 497: by Emalie (new)

Emalie Washington | 13 comments Name kelp (unless taken)
Age about four or five
Gender gender fluid (bio male)
Tribe sea-silk
Appearance – a smally build dragon with wide wings that look like they were splashed by purple paint horns are thin and short. His scales are mostly shades of blue like the seas where he was born but some are purple, and a few are sliver he is freckled his antennae are a light purple bleeding into blue. His glow scales are colored sliver purple. His markings are the royal sea wings they have four wings like their silk wing parent.
Personality nervous intelligent gentle thoughtful artistry doesn’t like fights loves reading and writting
Backstory )) kelp is a royal child of the sea wing kingdom that was lost as a egg.. he was found by a silk wing and a leaf wing who took him in gently teaching and helping them they were born with extra talons and twisted wings which makes it very hard to fly and harder to swim they made three friends a leaf wing named thistle a rain-night named night lilly and a silk wing named spider web
Rank lost prince student and writter
Abilities silk being able to breath under water for a few days (unsure) animus (if ok)

Id like perm to do a side story like the lost aire.


message 498: by Emalie (new)

Emalie Washington | 13 comments Emalie wrote: "Name kelp (unless taken)
Age about four or five
Gender gender fluid (bio male)
Tribe sea-silk
Appearance – a smally build dragon with wide wings that look like they were splashed by purple paint h..."


also im not listing fam cuz well yea XD


message 499: by Eclipse (last edited Sep 04, 2024 02:26PM) (new)

Eclipse the Nightwing | 84 comments adopted, just re approving her

Name: Snowdrop
Age: 5
Gender: Female
Tribe: Icewing
Appearance: Pure white scales, glimmering white wings, blue-tinted white spikes, icy blue eyes
Accessories: a silver bracelet that is enchanted to stop her icescales, though she rarely uses it
Abilities: Icescales
History: Snowdrop was born with too much ice, making her an icescales. Her parents, disgusted by her and her sister, shoved them on a small iceberg as soon as they had hatched. But Snowdrop froze the water around them until they made it back to the Ice kingdom. Crystal and Snowdrop hid in a cave until they turned four, then went to the Icewing palace (her parents were servants) and killed Beluga and Shard.
Family:
Father-Beluga-Deceased
Mother-Shard-Deceased
Sister-Crystal-Alive
Personality: A bit crazy, but mostly haughty and arrogant


message 500: by Eclipse (new)

Eclipse the Nightwing | 84 comments Name: Atla
Nickname(s): none
Rank: JMA student
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/her
Last known location: JMA
Age: 9
Tribe(s): Sea/Rain/Silk
Description: electric blue scales, except for a few color shifting patches on her snout, sides, and tail. Her light up scales also change, so she can better describe her feelings in Aquatic. has six gills, instead of eight. Four wings with adaptations for swimming, prehensile tail. Body shape is a mix.
Mother: Auklet
Father: Mantis(rain/silk)
Siblings(if any): none
Backstory: she was raised in the rainforest, with her mother and father. They lived by the shoreline, so she could go swimming every day, up until she was 5, when they sent her to JMA.
Powers: some color changing scales, “Magical Death Spit”
Likes/Dislikes: bananas, some types of meat, fish, ect. She dislikes bullies, and dragons being mean to each other.
Personalty: nice, friendly, a bit bouncy, and appears to be somewhat related to Tsunami (sarcastic/snarky).


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