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message 51: by [deleted user] (new)

I agree.


message 52: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) ….how did we get on this topic?


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

Its Meww


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

No other explanation is needed.


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

Its allieee


message 56: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) JAAADE


message 57: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) What's the quote in your name from?


message 58: by [deleted user] (new)

☯ Yoυ ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ ѕυιcιde? I ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ α wαr ☯ wrote: "Its allieee"

Mewwwwwww


message 59: by [deleted user] (new)

HERMESSSS

ALLIEEEE

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 60: by [deleted user] (new)

It Never Ends - Bring Me the Horizon :3


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

☯ Yoυ ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ ѕυιcιde? I ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ α wαr ☯ wrote: "HERMESSSS

ALLIEEEE

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


Yay! :)


message 62: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) During dance today I had this really depressing poem idea and I haven't written it yet because I'm scared to. But this is the teaser for it!

COMING SOON: Broken Mirrors, by J. E.


There you go :P


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "During dance today I had this really depressing poem idea and I haven't written it yet because I'm scared to. But this is the teaser for it!

COMING SOON: Broken Mirrors, by J. E.


There you go :P"


....*applauds and tears up*


message 64: by [deleted user] (new)

Ohhhh that sounds interestingggg


message 65: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) It's about a girl who commits suicide.


But the whole poem you think it's talking about another girl.


It's going to briefly mention "the girl in the glass".

And the main girl listens to the lies they say about at the girl in the glass, and starts to hate the girl, so eventually she kills the girl.

But later you find out she actually killed herself.


And it emphasizes how suicide is still murder.


message 66: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) I'm shaking just thinking about it. These things creep me out >.<


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "It's about a girl who commits suicide.


But the whole poem you think it's talking about another girl.


It's going to briefly mention "the girl in the glass".

And the main girl listens to the lie..."


Is the glass a mirror?


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

Like she hates her reflection?


message 69: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) Yes, exactly. She hates herself, but it's talking about her reflection in the mirror.


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

I can't wait!

Sounds really cool


message 71: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "Yes, exactly. She hates herself, but it's talking about her reflection in the mirror."

K. I was just making sure.


message 72: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) Meh idk if I can actually write it though. And people might think I'm depressed o.o


message 73: by [deleted user] (new)

So you think she's talking about someone else and she kills "the other person" and then the readers think for a second shes like a psychopathic murderer but then really she's talking about herself and killed herself?


message 74: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) ☯ Yoυ ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ ѕυιcιde? I ѕαy тнιѕ ιѕ α wαr ☯ wrote: "So you think she's talking about someone else and she kills "the other person" and then the readers think for a second shes like a psychopathic murderer but then really she's talking about herself ..."

Yup :P


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

AWESOME O.O


message 76: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) See, it sounds crazy that someone would kill someone else just because some people called her fat and stupid. But somehow people think suicide makes that reasonable.


message 77: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote a story about a girl jumping off a bridge yesterday @_@


message 78: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) That's…





Can I read it?


message 79: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote it in math class to un-bore myself :P

But sureee


message 80: by Justin (last edited Nov 14, 2014 08:16PM) (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) I mean…. bridges…





structures….









architecture……

















shapes…..




















geometry……..




































MATH!


message 81: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "I mean…. bridges…





structures….









architecture……

















shapes…..




















geometry……..




































MATH!"


Annabeth? Is that you?


message 82: by [deleted user] (new)

I. Have. To. Go. To sleep.
* crawls to bed*


message 83: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) @.@ Same


I'm falling asleep as I type thlkjnm'm/...


message 84: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "@.@ Same


I'm falling asleep as I type thlkjnm'm/..."


Haha.


message 85: by [deleted user] (new)

нerмeѕ wrote: "That's…





Can I read it?"


The rushing sound of water matched the speed of her pounding heart.

As she stumbled down the isolated bridge, the sun began to set. The sky - painted in brilliant shade of reds, orange, and pink, seemed to know exactly what Anna Chambers planned to do. The sky was giving her one last beautiful moment. Painting its canvas gorgeously for her one last time.

Anna's thin. wiry legs shook terribly as she cautiously climbed over the wide railing. Once she did so, the girl sat on the edge.

"Mom, i'm sorry." Her voice was easily drowned out by the howling wind and water, but still, she continued on. "I was a horrible daughter, and you deserved better." A single tear fell. Down, down, down her cheek. "Dad, wherever you are...i'm sorry too." The tears came freely and faster now, running down her pale cheeks. Anna began reciting every mean girl's name, every person who had back-stabbed her, and every bully's name. "You all got what you wanted." They told her to go kill herself, every day; and so she would.

Anna was done living. She was done pretending with a fake mask covering the real emotions. She was tired. So indescribably tired, that not even sleep could cure.

No more hot tears at two in the morning. No longer would Anna have to drag a gleaming across her wrist. No scars, no pain. No more, no more.

Maybe Anna was being selfish. Or maybe not. No one would care anyway, it didn't matter. Not one person needed her...not now, not ever.

Anna wanted to fly. She wanted to venture in to the unknown, and leave the known. The ugly, horrible world. The planet with dark hearted, malicious humans inhabiting it. Good riddance to you, earth. You won't be missed.

A man strolled down the bridge, oblivious to the fact that in approximately twenty-five seconds, he'd see an event that would haunt him for life. He'd see a girl poised to jump into the deep, deep water.

Anna rose to her feet slowly, balancing on the thick railing. She looked down at the waves and water. A deep breath, a silent goodbye, and-

"Hey, girl, wait!" The man ran as fast he could possibly go, eyes widened in fright.

The witness was far too late, however..for she was already flying.



message 86: by [deleted user] (new)

just know that i never edited it so there's proabbly a lot of mistaeks and stuff o_o


message 87: by [deleted user] (new)

mistaeks :3


message 88: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinekstrom01) You should call it "Flying"












It's so depressing…


















And I'm exhausted, so…. it made it even sadder. I think I'll go write Broken Mirrors now.


message 89: by [deleted user] (new)

It is called Flying :3

I just never put the title

*gasp* how'd you know?

Lawl sorry .-. Ohhh yay. Can't wait to read it :3


message 90: by s (new)

s (cherrybelugas) HI MEIIIIIII


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

HI SELIAAAAA


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