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Sep 22, 2009 03:09PM

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ur better off not knowing just now....
message 354:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Does he leave her a widow, or does he die before then? Sad either way, but it's almost worse if he dies leaving her a widow. Not that she'll ever love anyone else, but still...
ull just have to see--eeee... :P

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


ok guys, can u pls read this short story i wrote and let me kno whether on not its gd enuf 2 turn into a proper story? http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
pls comment :]
Maryam_Music Lover wrote: "I'll be so sad....even of he does before the marriage or after.......Cat can you at least tell us WHAT IS WRONG WITH TEDDY!!??"
ummm i feel really bad about this but im not really sure, its just a teddy thing...? it goes along with the ending tho. it mostly has to do with him getting overworked, and overstressed, and then of course ecstatic because of the last chapter ;) and its just too much.....it made sense in my head maybe ill just google extreme fevers....but then its gotta go along with the-! there u guys go i almost spoiled it! no more! no more!
ummm i feel really bad about this but im not really sure, its just a teddy thing...? it goes along with the ending tho. it mostly has to do with him getting overworked, and overstressed, and then of course ecstatic because of the last chapter ;) and its just too much.....it made sense in my head maybe ill just google extreme fevers....but then its gotta go along with the-! there u guys go i almost spoiled it! no more! no more!
that was really good huneeya! did u get ur inspiration from the writers wrule topic?

You know what actually??We were gone on an engagement and they had these like balloons that they left in the air when they put on the ring...so that is where the story idea came from...but I THINK that the actual inspiration was from the topic.
o cool!! huh, coincidence.......lol
message 364:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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message 365:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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haha nice. im trying to plan out the next chapter of VS, but i dont wanna do it :'(

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
message 368:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Urgh, I need to catch up... I just had a sneeze attack. Recently, I think I've developed allergies. Wonderful. I've lived in Texas all my life and have never had them before, yet now, suddenly I do.
message 369:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Allergies suck... I get them EVERY winter and can't breathe for about three mounths out the year >.<
message 371:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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But ... but ... but I don't WANNA forgive him!!! NOOO!!! *whines*
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Because I still feel angry about the whole thing!! And I can't just stop feeling angry. Plus Ryder's too perfect. I want to be able to hate him!!! And I want to hate him because if he's going to die I don't want to feel sad about it!!
Sella wrote: "Holly wrote: "Because he's a guy and they always say stuff they don't mean."
But ... but ... but I don't WANNA forgive him!!! NOOO!!! *whines*"
But what did he really do? Why dont you want to forgive him?
But ... but ... but I don't WANNA forgive him!!! NOOO!!! *whines*"
But what did he really do? Why dont you want to forgive him?

But ... but ... but I don't WANNA forgive him!!! NOOO!!! *whines*"
But what did he really do? Why do..."
Look at message 380.
Sella wrote: "♥Jess♥ wrote: "Why don't you want to forgive him, Sella? It wasn't his fault."
Because I still feel angry about the whole thing!! And I can't just stop feeling angry. Plus Ryder's too perfect. I w..."
We're all going to be sad about Ryder! You can't just make up an excuse that way you don't have to be sad. . . I mean Ryder is perfect and then he's not. But you gotta love him, hate him (only for a short time) and miss him!
does that make any sense?
and HEY SELLA!!!!!
Because I still feel angry about the whole thing!! And I can't just stop feeling angry. Plus Ryder's too perfect. I w..."
We're all going to be sad about Ryder! You can't just make up an excuse that way you don't have to be sad. . . I mean Ryder is perfect and then he's not. But you gotta love him, hate him (only for a short time) and miss him!
does that make any sense?
and HEY SELLA!!!!!
message 381:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Wait. Ryder is going to die? HOL-LY!!! I tired of all this so-and-so-is-going-to-die-but-doesn't-nonsense! And if you kill Ryder, you kind of kill Morgan. And Merry. And whatever other child/children they may have. You can't just kill him, Hol. It'd be killing your story. And your fans would be REALLY mad at you. And most would probably call you evil again. You aren't, of course. But many would think so. You shouldn't toy with them, Holly. It's like Twilight and how James played with his food. It's not nice!
Actually if Holly does kill him I wont call her evil. I'll just be very very very sad, and only a tad bit mad. But hey, deaths always add drama and make the story better. Excpet for um *cough Hunted cough And-cough* I mean it helped the story but I was ticked, very ticked. And still am ticked.
message 383:
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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I don't know... The whole thing with Merry was pretty dramatic. Ryder dying, or almost dying, would be too much.
I know, but I've set my mind to the worst. So if it happens I wont be as angry but I'll probably be crying for hours.
haha i think if i made somebody cry with my writing i would count it as a success :P
ikr? thats what im aiming for in my story :P im really excited cuz im almost done!! eek!!
haha ive been working on it since like julyish maybe? i have 39 chapters so far and only about 2 left! the link is up at the top of the page if u ever have the time ^^ :)

Cool :D How many words is it?
Acacia wrote: "Hi, I'm randomly jumping into the conversation! I'm about halfway done with my story. :D"
which u need to write more on!!!!!
which u need to write more on!!!!!
idk how many words it is, when i finish it i want copy and paste it all into word and c how many pages and words it is!! im so excited ive never EVER finished anything b4!!


which u need to write more on!!!!!"
I'm doing that right now, okay?? XP
thanks! ya idk i edited a lot of the early chapters after i had written them so it doesnt say exactly when they were posted but it was around that time! im surprised ive stayed so like, good about it u knw? i havent stopped!