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CHAPTER EIGHT OF REBEL!!! :Dhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
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Let me know what you think!
You know you want to read it :)
I left a comment Huneeya! :) and Nermeen, I'm pretty sure I read your story before you told me to, and I left a comment :)
Hmm... Here's chapter one to Eternal Eclipse, also there is already a posted prologue an whatnot... Mind you that this is the first time I've written in first person for a story in over a year, so please tell me what you think and if my first person is alright... Anyhoo, I'd love comments and feedback on it, please :Dhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Abbee wrote: "I left a comment Huneeya! :) and Nermeen, I'm pretty sure I read your story before you told me to, and I left a comment :)"i love you abbee :) thanks
Welcome, Huneeya..
Kriss, I'm going to read that when I have time, I'm crazily busy right now, sorry.
Kriss, I'm going to read that when I have time, I'm crazily busy right now, sorry.
Here's a poem I wrote called Watching You... Please read and leave a comment:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
REBEL, chapter nine!!! :Dhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
You know you want to read it! So do!
Please like and/or review! :)
Let me know what you think!
I POSTED CHAPTER THREE OF REVIVED! YAYYY! It took me forever to edit it...http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Please, please, please read it? My non-existent pet Panda begs you to read it, also.
Chapter ten of Rebel!!!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
You know you want to read it :) Please do!
Please comment and/or like the chapter!
Let me know what you think!
XD Okay, so if any of you all wanna read it, heres chapter one for Painless:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
I REALLY need to start reading your stuff, Kriss. Seriously. I started and then I got so caught up in my writing that I've lost track!!! I'll read this :) And I'll try to catch up on your other stuff too! Eventually... ;D Haha.
Haha, alright... But note that this isn't my normaly style of writing. I normally write in third person, and this is first so more likely than not it'll suck :/
I love books in first person the most :) I can't write in third person unless it's a short story or a role play, honestly. I prefer first person. I feel like it connects the reader with the main character more, or something?Anyway, I'm going to read it once I write about 4,000 more words ^_^
Yeah, I think it kinda depends on the style of third person and how the author writes it. Sometimes stories are better in first and sometimes in third. It also depends on the story... Haha, I'm pretty horrid at writing in first person I think... And there might be a few her's and she's instead of I's and me's XDLol, alrighty :)
I agree with that. Twilight is best if first person, where as Harry Potter is best in third :) Hehe. Oh my xD That's funny xD
Indeed... Romances are usually better in first person, but sometimes they're better in third. I really kinda think it depends on how the author writes. XD
I definitely agree. I've found that I write MUCH better in first then in third. I've never understood second, though... I get confused with that one. I don't understand how it works? o.O Anyway, I totally get what you mean.
Yeah... I think I probably write better in third, but it's kinda fun to write in first too sometimes... I don't get second at all >< lol, I'm not even trying it.
I think it's funnest (and easiest, in my opinion) to write in first... It's funny, because before I read Twilight I'd never really read any books in first, so I was all excited to try writing that way... And it worked! :D Hahaha. I still need to read more of Seventh Dimension... But I need to read Painless, too :) Haha. And I need to write! Urgh! So busy! xD Hahaha.
XD Really? I think it's easy to write in both... Sorta. I've been writing in third for way longer though, so that's more natural to me. And Twilight was the frist, first person book I read too :P Ironic, haha... Also, you do indeed need to read The Seventh Dimension... Painless is a much quicker read though, considering it's still really short o.o
I can write in third person. It's automatic for me when I'm role playing. I just really prefer first person when I'm writing a story. I don't know what it is, it's just more... appeaking, I guess, to me? Haha, yes, ironic xD Then I find all of these other books in first person and I was like "Whoa... I thought Stephenie Meyer was one of the few who did that" xD Haha. Yes, I do. Yeah xD That's why I'm going to start with Painless...The internet keeps distracting me xD Hahahahaha.
XD I learned to write, originally from role playing, so that's why it's easier for me to write in third I suppose, then in first. And it's also why most of the time I use so much discription, haha. Indeed... The Seventh Dimension is one of my longest stories... It's over 200 pages, I think.XD yes... Internet tends to do that sometimes, unfortunetly.
No way, me too! xD Haha. Except, my role playing back then was CRAPOLA. Horrible. I mean, one-liners... and illiteracy as all get out. It makes me sad thinking about it xD That's probably why I never wrote a book back then. But I was twelve and thirteen, so... Haha :) Fourteen was my peak age. That was when I wrote my first novel ^_^ I try not to use description much. I describe characters, maybe the chaos, but I try to stay away from that. I was scarred for life by books that described WAYYYY too much when I was younger. Now I just skip and skim over description xD Haha. Wow, nicely done! :DYes, it does :(
Haha, awesome.... Ah... I sucked majorly back then too >< Twas a oneliner and everything... Goddness I've come quite a way from then, I think... I was actually writting a book before I started role playing, but it was utterly horrible. I love discription too much to stay away from it, haha. I love describing things and reading descriptions. Yes. XD I don't know how many times it's destracted me..
Holy crap. We are sooo alike. I was trying to write a book, as well (total fantasy, as in its own world and everything x.x) and I couldn't get through it. It's crap xD Haha. I'm not terrible at describing, I just don't enjoy it. Probably because I don't like to read it, so I don't want to put my readers through it xD I've been trying to figure out a way to keep the story flowing while describing and a published author suggested I put description into actions... Like: "She moved her blonde hair from her hazel eyes and looked at me, wiping her pale skin before saying,..." that sort of thing. When I go back to edit Rebel I'm going to redo that so it flows more.It was horrible during NaNo, too xD
I know, haha... Mine was my only realistic one ever... Sorta... It was about a girl who ran away into the wilderness of africa >< majorly sucked. My chapters were like, three hundred words long and the writing was horrible. I love describing for some reason. Mostly expressions and eyes, along with appearances. It's interesting describing weapons too, and I'm partly addicted to describing fighting scenes. Those are some of my favorites, haha. And I know what you mean by the descriptions into actions... Most of my descriptions are in actions or in the change of expression someone takes on with a shift in emotion.I actually wasn't that bad in NaNo, suprisingly o.o
Hahaha xD Nice idea! :) I don't know how long my chapters were... They weren't short, considering how ridiculous I was at writing, and back then I described a LOT, but it was just baddddd. Well, I actually just found the document... The first chapter was about 2,500 words long! I'm surprised xD Haha. I LOVE describing fight scenes ♥ I just find that, out of pure habit, I describe at a very minimum. That's the best kind of description! :) It helps things flow, I think!Really? I was horrible! xD It doesn't help that I'd gotten a facebook about two months befoer that xDDD
xD Except it was completely unrealistic and the writing was horrid... Really? Mine were little migit chapters! Haha, I only started writing like a year and a half ago though, so I think I've made it pretty far since then, considering my writing is actually . . . Um readible... Most of the time XD I didn't use to describe all that much, and what I did was HORRIBLE. It was absolutly terrible, I'd look mine up but I'm not on my other computer right now... Actually, I might have deleted it by now o.o The way I see it though, is that we all have to start somewhere or another. Fighting scenes are some of the funnest. I love doing the research of moves and weapons and such.. Oh, and sword techniques. I love researching on how to use swords, me and my friend have even gone as far as messing around with long wooden sticks and wacking each other with them :/ Yep. I kinda also think it depends on how well the author writes description and if the description is good, or doesn't have anything to do with anything like. "Mary was walking in the dark. She loved the grass and it's delicate way of flowing green around her. She loved the velveteen expanse of sky above. Her mind wandered to these beautiful things as Jack rambled on about something that was probably relevent, and much more important than the emerald grass at her feet and the black sky above, dotted with crystalline slivers of stars." Like that.. I think for it to work you'd have to have it be apart of what was actually happening, instead of rambling on about something that doesn't matter. I've read books where authors have done that before, and that kind of description sucks :/Haha really? I was actually not that bad o.o I wrote at least 3000 words a dea, usually.
Anyhoo... Here's the next chapter for Painless... This one is almost 5000 words long too, oh and I think I'm falling in love with Keller already <3
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Can someone please read and review Revived? I have the third chapter up and the fourth chapter ready, but I told myself I wouldn't post it until I got at least 3-5 reviews of chapter three... Constructive criticism would be great!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
I was once a dead person, but ever since I drank green tea and read sad words regarding death, I was reincarnated; and now the flesh re-attaches to my bones via magical hope.
Hey everyone, Outcast is currently a finished novel sitting on Goodreads, so I'm going to delete it this weekend. If you haven't finished reading Outcast, you have until this coming Sunday to read it before it gets taken off. So please read it and leave comments until the end! Thanks. :)Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
~Sella :D
REBEL, chapter eleven!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
You soooo want to read this :) So please do!
Please like and/or comment on it!
Let me know what you think!!!
I started a new story! It's called Shards and it's my second realistic fiction novel ever. Haha. :) Please check it out and leave me a comment!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Here's what it's about:
Dustin and Miley have been friends all their lives. They've shared jokes, wild times, and deep secrets. Even though they've always lived half an hour away from each other, they have still managed to keep up a close relationship – until they turn fifteen and enter high school.
Then the crazy, chaotic world of high school changes everything.
Dustin and Miley don't go to the same high school. Both of them get so busy that they don't see each other for the whole semester.
When Miley sees Dustin for the first time in five months, he's not the same person anymore. He is a different Dustin than the one Miley knew all her life. Miley begins to wish she could turn back time and stop the transformation from the kind, sensitive boy she once knew to the cold, indifferent person he has turned into. She doesn't know who he has become, and she's scared of the change in him.
And soon Miley realizes that she can't recognize the person standing inside her own skin anymore.
Shards is a story about change, growing up, and the tearing apart of friendship.
REBEL, chapter twelve!!!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
You know you want to read it :) Please do!
Anyway, please like and/or comment!
Let me know what you think! ^_^
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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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Oh the description is rather suckish, I'm still working on it. :P
Meet Alyson
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...
I have not been on for what feels like FOREVER. :) Catching up on links :)
I posted Chapter Fifteen of Life in D Minor! Please read and comment. The next two chapters are on their way as fast as possible. :Dhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
EVERYONE!!! EVERYONE!!! EVERYONE!!! I FINALLY FINISHED CHAPTER THIRTY TWO FOR THE SEVENTH DIMENSION! PLEASE READ AND COMMENT! PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE! Here's the link... Click it.. ALL OF YOU XDhttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
[Note: I actually cried writing the conversation between Dae and Eolande... I don't know why either]
CHAPTER THIRTEEN OF REBEL!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
MWAHAHAHA. This is a long one and it is so awesome and Jason and Sarai... -sigh- :) Hehe.
READ IT! FOR REAL!
Please like and/or comment! :)
Let me know what you think!
I posted four chapters to Shards - chapters 2, 3, 4, and 5! They're all pretty short, only about two pages each. :D Please read them and comment on all of them! I'm really excited for this story. XD Thanks!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
FOURTH CHAPTER OF REVIVED... Please read and review, anyone? Pretty please? I'm currently working on the next chapter, and that's when Rayne finds out something pretty important...http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
I added Chapter 6 and Chapter 7 of Shards! Please read and comment :)http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Wow... I haven't posted in... don't ask me how long. I just started a story a little while ago, called Afterlife. The general summary is in the link.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
So far I think the main character (Brynna) is going to fail a mission, or have to see someone die as her first assignment as a guardian angel. Then she is given her murderer to protect, but for some reason she can't remember him except for his last words to her. The story is about her attempting to find out who her murderer really was, and her avenging herself, but at the end she is toying with the life of the person she wishes to kill all along. I was thinking, that for a little extra twist, Brynna falls in love again with the guy (since they were originally dating when he killed her).
What do you guys think? XD
COMMENT!!!!! :)
Hey, look! It's a new story!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...
This first chapter was an official pain in the ass to write. I don't like first chapters. But I do very much like this story. So, read it, please! Yay!
I just wrote and posted Chapter Eight of Shards! Yay, Shards is 7 thousand words now! :D Aaaand this is the longest chapter I've written so far in this book. All the others have been half pages minimum, 2.5 pages max, but this chapter turned out to be almost 7 pages. O_O I have NO idea how that happened. Haha! :P But anyways, this was a fun chapter to write so you should read it and leave me a big, fat, juicy comment! :)http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Catch Me, I'm Falling Too Fast UPDATE!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
I posted the rest of Catch Me. At the moment it's a completed manuscript, but I doubt I'll ever have the guts to publish it since it is based on a true story and everything... Maybe someday!
I bet I'll keep adding to it, though :)
Anyway, PLEASE like and/or comment, and let me know what you think!
