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message 2501: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Apparently I lied. I fnished writng all 8 poems for LTR, so please read them and comment and stuff. Yay!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2502: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin YAY ACACIA! ILL READ IT WHEN IM DONE TALKING ON THE PHONE WITH DAVID!


message 2503: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Chapter Thirty-Two of Outcast! MWA HA HA. I am evil. XD XD XD Bye bye Caleb. Teeheee. :P READ IT. And don't hate me. Because this is nothing compared to what's going to happen. And if you think I'm evil now ... just wait. BWA HA HA. Okay, enough teasing. Read and comment, please! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...


message 2504: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
I have a lot of stuff to read. Eepers.


message 2505: by Niki (new)

Niki Here's chapter 38 of WW. Read it and tell me what you think! The end is nearish, by the way. Like, 5 or 6 chapters away. But you totally have the amazing sequel that will be better than the first to look forward to!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 2506: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
EEEEPPP!!!!!!


message 2507: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Heeeyy after you read Acacia's, Sella's, and Niki's wonderful and awesome chapters you should read my new short story, My Guardian Angel. I would LOVE some feedback! Thanks!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2508: by [deleted user] (new)

Niki wrote: "Here's chapter 38 of WW. Read it and tell me what you think! The end is nearish, by the way. Like, 5 or 6 chapters away. But you totally have the amazing sequel that will be better than the firs..."

this is really cute i like the chapter ending


message 2509: by [deleted user] (new)

now its time to read krista's story


message 2510: by Niki (new)

Niki Silly Sella is too lazy to post her own link to chapter 33 of Outcast, so I'm doing it for her. Read it. Review it. And by God, you better love it or I will smoosh you gone.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...


message 2511: by [deleted user] (new)

LOL. I did love it...don't smoosh me. :P


message 2512: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin AHHHHHH! OMG!! OMG! OMG! O.M.G! O_O O_O O_O

So ... I posted two chapters to Outcast, Chapter 34 and Chapter 35. And ... and .. AHHHHHHHHHHhh. I told myself I wasn't going to cry. I thought I wasn't. But I cried anyway!! I actually cried at the end of Chapter 35, even though I said I wouldn't. GAHHH.

So ... ahhh. Read it and weep. >.< Meep ... and don't kill me! I had to do it! I'm sorry, I'm sorry! *hides behind army of platypi*

Please read both chapters and give me comments on both. And ... um ... don't hate me. *hides once more behind army of platypi*

Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...


message 2513: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (last edited Jan 18, 2010 06:05PM) (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Crap. I have to leave three long reviews and I have a ton of projects to do and I'm going to cry at the end. Just great ...


message 2514: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Three very...ah...revealing chapters of LTR. I'm so close to the end now. :D :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2515: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE read AND comment on chapter 64 of Hoping, Wishing, Wanting!!!!
*looks at Abbee and Jessi*

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2516: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) u guys are insane!!!


message 2517: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments and why is that?


message 2518: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) cuz look at all the things u write!! oh my gosh!! u have so many chapters!


message 2519: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. Huneeya. That cracked me up...of course I'll read it!!! :)


message 2520: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! Okay, so I added Chapter 36 and Chapter 37 to Outcast. AND GUESS WHAT!!! There are a lot of guess whats, actually. :D

First of all, BIG SECRET #3 REVEALED AT THE END OF CHAPTER 37!! Be prepared to hate me. This just happens to be the biggest - and cruelest - secret of the whole book. XD

And, secondly, TWO MORE CHAPTERS UNTIL THE END OF OUTCAST! OMG! *happydance* Plus an Epilogue too, but you know. That doesn't really count. ;)

ANNDDD ... Outcast is now 130,000 words!!! AND 257 PAGES!!!!! *triplehappydance* YAY YAY YAY YAY!! (P.S. Which means that Outcast is 10 thousand words longer than Hunted! YAY!)

Oh, and don't kill me for what I'm doing at the end of Chapter 37. :P

Please comment on both chapters, thanks! :D

Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...


message 2521: by Jayda (new)

Jayda REBEL, CHAPTER FIVE
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Please like and/or comment! :)
Let me know what you think!


message 2522: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Sella wrote: "OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! Okay, so I added Chapter 36 and Chapter 37 to Outcast. AND GUESS WHAT!!! There are a lot of guess whats, actually. :D

First of all, BIG SECRET #3 REVEALED AT THE END OF CHAPTER ..."


SSSEEEEEELLLLAAAA I AM MAD AT YOU! I STILL HAVE TO READ THE LTR CHAPTERS AND STUDY FOR FINALS!!!!!!!!


message 2523: by [deleted user] (new)

;FJLDLSNBKLF;AEHGUILHAJKNLBF;AEHDJ;!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME SELLA!!! I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING OFF ABOUT THAT DUDE!!!!!!!! I HATE HIM SO F****** MUCHHH!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!!!!!

*goes off to write a nice long review for Sella deary* :)


message 2524: by Hannah (new)

Hannah CHAPTER TWO OF REVIVED! Pretty please read and review?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5726...


message 2525: by Jenny (new)

Jenny (jentimonera) | 3 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

This is a story about a girl named Jane Harley. When she was a baby, she acquired an incurable disease. She lived in a enchanted world named Incantre where magic is possible, where every mortal knows how to use magic, when every spot is enchanted. But neither mortal doctors or magical warlocks can heal her. Then the dark witch Neona made a bargain with her parents that she can give cure to her in one condition. Her life at the age of eighteen. Her parents thought that in time, they could take the spell off Jane as she grow up but the spell was. strong. She grew up knowing the truth about herself. She was a great child and have a positive outlook in life. She knew eventually, her life will be taken away. All these she have accepted. Not until Gabrielle show up and told him that she was one of the Aislinn guardians. She was bound to protect the princess's life for she to be able to summon Vega. But how is that possible when her life will be over a few months later? How is that possible when she cannot even fought for her own life?

hi! I hope someone could give me some constructive criticism? Thanks so much! :-D


message 2526: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Okay so I have 4 more chapters of LTR and holy crap I'm almost done! Read and comment on them and all that stuff that you guys do so awesomely. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2527: by Jenny (new)

Jenny (jentimonera) | 3 comments ♫♫can someone critique my storyyy? :-)♫


message 2528: by [deleted user] (new)

can someone plssssssssssssssssss read my story too?
its new, so its only 2 chapters
it wont take you too long
plsssssssssssssssssssss
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
i'd love you forever and ever of u do :)


message 2529: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Here's the next chapter of Letters to Ryan! And - get ready for this - I actually cried when I wrote it. Le gasp! Anyway, read it, please. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


message 2530: by Jayda (new)

Jayda CHAPTER SIX OF REBEL!!!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Please like and/or comment!
Let me know what you think! :)


message 2531: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Acacia wrote: "Here's the next chapter of Letters to Ryan! And - get ready for this - I actually cried when I wrote it. Le gasp! Anyway, read it, please. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."


My eyes are all puffy and swollen from cryting all night! I don't want to cry anymore!!!! But gah, I must read the new chapters ...


message 2532: by [deleted user] (new)

*SCREAMS* *crying* Omg, Acacia. :P Ryan died on my birthday...that is so freaking depressing!!! :P Oh god.
*looks behind me* My brother is crying too...I didn't realize he read LTR too.

Brother: You write very good whoever you are, Acacia. You made me cry...and I rarely cry. Good writing.

Me again....OH god. I'm not going to give anything away..so...I'm going to go now...


message 2533: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Aww, Krista, why were you crying?? *hug* And thanks you guys. Sorry about the birthday, Abbee. Total coincidence. :D


message 2534: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
I watched Up. Not the greatest idea to do at 2 in the morning.


message 2535: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Oh and Acacia, those chapters were just gah!!!! So touching and awesome!


message 2536: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Oh no. :'( Up is sooo sad.

And thank you so much Krista! *huggle*


message 2537: by ♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P (new)

♫Krista♫ (kristabobista) | 1754 comments Mod
Mmhm.

And you're welcome. :]


message 2538: by [deleted user] (new)

Chapter 24 of Dawn of Darkness. Please read! I would love comments...XD

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 2539: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin OMG OMG OMG GUESS WHAT EVERYBODY!!! GUESS WHAT!!! I FINISHED OUTCAST!!! AHHHH!!!!! I FINISHED MY SECOND NOVEL EVER!!!! AHHHH!!!! OMG I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!! I COULD BOUNCE OFF THE WALLS IF I WASN'T EXTREMELY TIRED BECAUSE I PULLED AN ALL-NIGHTER FINISHING OUTCAST!!! BUT OMG!!! I FINISHED OUTCAST!!! I FINISHED OUTCAST, DAMMIT!! AND I AM SO. FREAKING. HAPPY!!!!

ANYWAYS. PLEASE READ ALL FOUR NEW CHAPTERS AND COMMENT ON ALL OF THEM, PLEASE!! THESE ARE FOUR REALLY INTENSE CHAPTERS, AND THEY'RE THE LAST FOUR CHAPTERS OF OUTCAST, SO CAN YOU PLEASE COMMENT ON ALL FOUR OF THEM? THANKS!!!!!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...

OMG I AM SO SO SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!! *HAPPY DANCE X 10000000* YAYYAYAYYAYAY YA YAY AYAYAYYAY!!!! XD XD XD XD I LOVE YOU ALL!!!

I. JUST. FINISHED. MY. SECOND. NOVEL. EVER. XD YES!


message 2540: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) AAAAHHHHHH I FINISHED MY BOOOOKKKKK.

YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!

Here's the last two chapters, one of which is both the speediest and most inaccurate court transcript in the history of speedy and inaccurate court transcripts. AGGHHH I BE SO HAPPY.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

And now for the part where I have to edit it all before or shortly after midnight. O.O


message 2541: by Hannah (new)

Hannah OMG! OMG! OMG!

I am going to read it right this moment.


message 2542: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments Acacia wrote: "AAAAHHHHHH I FINISHED MY BOOOOKKKKK.

YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!

Here's the last two chapters, one of which is both the speediest and most inaccurate court transcript in the history of speedy and inaccurate..."


OHMYFREAKINGGOSH ACACIA YOU JUST FINISHED YOUR SECOND NOVEL AND YOUR ONLY THIRTEEN YAYYYY!!! NOW I NEED TO GO READ THE LAST CHAPTERS! :P


message 2543: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments Acacia, you are awesome, here is your review for chapter 113:

ohmygod
oh my god oh my god oh my god

that was so freaking amazing
that was so incredibly freaking amazing and i'm not even kidding Acacia that was mind blowing and amazing and incredible and GAH that was just so incredibly good

i love how before it was always really awesome to have a chapter which was a letter because it was from the future and now at the end, the letter is what ties it all together and finishes it up and it's in the present now instead.

overall, the whole story was so freaking amazing. it was so sad and depressing and touching and heartbreaking and it made me cry but it was also so hilarious and funny and it made me smile and it made me crack up.

you are really really really talented. and amazing. and if LTR doesn't get published i might have to fly over to all the different publishers and murder them personally. any publisher who doesn't publish LTR is out of their mind because they should jump at the chance, one day it's going to be a bestseller

i should get onto the review for the actual chapter instead of all my pointless rambling:
it was freaking amazing like i already said. it tied everything up so perfectly and it was really bittersweet and it was really happy but at the same time really sad.
Ryan's dead :'( but Marlie doesn't regret it and it's okay and she's happy and it's all okay because we can all be happy again because she got over Ryan's death! Yay!

and i absolutely love the last line. it just ties everything up so perfectly. Marlie doesn't regret it because it made Ryan happy. she is an amazing friend.
this story is amazing

and one day it will be published

oh and one thing i was wondering, i don't know how you could slip this into the story but: how does marlie's mother feel about this? and what about ryan's mother?

anyways, you are awesome for finishing this awesome story which will one day be in an awesome bookshop because its so awesome and will also be in my awesome room on my awesome bookshelf


message 2544: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments Sella wrote: "OMG OMG OMG GUESS WHAT EVERYBODY!!! GUESS WHAT!!! I FINISHED OUTCAST!!! AHHHH!!!!! I FINISHED MY SECOND NOVEL EVER!!!! AHHHH!!!! OMG I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!! I COULD BOUNCE OFF THE WALLS IF I WA..."

congratulations :D


message 2545: by Jayda (new)

Jayda CHAPTER SEVEN OF REBEL!!! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Please like and/or comment!!!
Let me know what you think! ^_^


message 2546: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments chapter 65 of Hoping, Wishing, Wanting!!!
warning: the beginning's kinda messed up
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE READ AND COMMENT


message 2547: by [deleted user] (new)

This is my new story Blink
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
PLEASE PLEASE READ AND COMMENT I'D RLY APPRECIATE IT!


message 2548: by [deleted user] (new)

I started a new random short stories and thoughts that I have for the new year: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Ik, I posted this but since I posted it in the new year, I moved it to this.


message 2549: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 687 comments Abbee wrote: "I started a new random short stories and thoughts that I have for the new year: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Ik, I posted this but since I ..."


Abbee cud u read my new chapter? i posted the link above


message 2550: by [deleted user] (new)

ooh Abbee i kno ur like reading Huneeya's story already but if u wouldnt mind please read mine
i'll read urs too!
and huneeya is that the chap i've already read?


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