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[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "Chapter 30 review. I'm not sure why it got deleted, it's not that long and it's one of my bad reviews ...

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Sella, I am sorry for the wait. My computer was being a butt and decided to rando..."

Heehee thanks! :D:D I love your reviews. About your questions ... he didn't go to school. The government tried to make him go to a foster home, but he ran away and evaded them. And about his cell phone ... um. I shall have to figure out a way for him to be able to pay his cell phone bills. Hehe. :P

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Sella wrote: "♫Krista♫ wrote: "Sella wrote: "Abbee and Krista would be even more awesome than they already are if they read and commented on the two new Outcast chappies. :P"

You cannot rush perfection. :P

Any..."

Noooo!!!! I love it! But that's just me, it makes it funny. :P And appeals to us immature people.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Sella wrote: "♫Krista♫ wrote: "Chapter 30 review. I'm not sure why it got deleted, it's not that long and it's one of my bad reviews ...

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Sella, I am sorry for the wait. My computer was being a butt and dec..."

Awww ok. Thank you very much for answering them. :D

[[deleted user]]

Anyone find it ridiculously amazing, I finally wrote a review long enough to be deleted. I'm about to write the review for Acacia right now. But here's my long-ish review for Outcast.


M'mk. Prepare yourself for the awesomest/longest review ever!!!!!!

AAAHH!!!! I'M SO FREAKING PISSED AT CALEB!!!!!! WHY MUST HE PULL AWAY FROM HER!?!?!?! HE *LOVES* HER. THE IDJIT.
Its so wierd to see them bonding! Like I'm still getting used to his transformation. *shakes head* But I love
him anyway. :) <3. Caleb's story makes it hard for me to not cry. Poor Julia and her family died from one
stupid mistake. "Caleb whistled through his teeth. “God, I was such an ass, wasn't I?” My reply right away after
reading this aloud. "Yes, yes so very much." It cracked me up!! Why doesn't Lav just tell him about hearing the
and curiousity where is Kahi?! Is he dead? Is he completely no-existent for the rest of the story??? BAH.

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! I ALMOST FORGOT THE PART WHERE I PRAISE YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING!!! I LOVE OUTCAST SO
MUCH!!!!!!!!! ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE KAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY
CANT HE COME TO LIFE?!?! :) HE'S SO MUCH AWESOMER THAN ALL THE BOYS AT MY SCHOOL!!!!!!!! xD!!!!

Okay, so I read the chapter title,"Hide and Seek." And my first reaction was pretty funny: "WHAT THE HECK?! ITS SO
GROSS!!! WHAT IS SELLA THINKING?!?!?! *giggling* Then I was smart, and read on. Actually, I read the first sentence
and had some funny gross thoughts. LOL. And I just saw that Lav hid behind an "Acacia" tree. Like our awesomely, awe-
some friend ACACIA. :) They were so cute together on the ground!! WHY DID CALED HAVE TO GO AND MESS IT ALL UP!!!!!
WHY CANT HE LOVE HER?!?! Btw, which Traders did they find? The illegal drug gang that somehow broke out of jail or
the stupid traders that come once a month, i think it is, to trade with the village? How did they find them if they
were so advanced? And why would they poison them? I just remembered all this sorry.

STUPID CALEB!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU HURT HER FEELINGS!!!!!!!?????!!!!!!!!!!!! MEAN BUTT!!!!!!!! UGH. AND LAV ALOMST
CRIED YOU DIMWIT.

End of my 2nd (?) long review that I kinda hope gets deleted kinda dont. xD

[Sella]

Haha, wow! Thanks! :P

[Acacia]

I still need to write a review long enough to be deleted. :P

[Acacia]

Three chapters of Letters to Ryan! I wrote some more, and I had another chapter all ready, and they're all very short, so that's why there's three. Anyway. Read them and stuff! Yay!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[Sella]

Ch. 86 of ltr got deleted. Here it is:


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And this is why IMS are my favorite part of this book.

GAHHH. This is so powerful, and it's amazing how powerful you can make an IM chat. THIS IS SO REALISTIC. And I love the "dialogue", how Marlie figures out what's wrong with Ryan's blank, calm responses, how she can tell she's bothered because she's not pissed off. Which is ironic and awesome. And I LOVE how Ryan "hangs up" on her. SO cool. And Marlie's such a sweet friend. The quote totally fits too. I LOVE HOW YOU DEVELOP THIS.

You know what's odd? Ryan reminded me of Niki in this chapter for some reason. haha. Idk why.

Anyways. I am tired, so I apologize for the semi-lame review. Onto ranting to your characters.

Ryan: Look, I understand that you're going through a lot right now, but you need to get a grip, missy. Marlie is your best friend. She's there to help you. Stop pushing her away, dammit. Happiness and love and rainbows is the way to go. :)

Marlie: I get that you're worried about Ryan, but don't push her too much, okay? She needs some time alone to think. You're just annoying her and making her bury herself into her shell even more. So just back off until she's ready, or you're going to loose her. Oh wait, you're going to loose her anyway. Ah well. Still. Whatever. I don't know. I'm tired and I still have homework so platypus.

I love this because it reminds me of how I've felt at times. I can connect to it so well. It reminds me of how I've felt so depressed that I can't explain it or talk to other people about it. You capture it amazingly, miracle writer. You capture it so well, because you are so freaking amazing. Platypus numero dos. GASPAGENESS! WHERE DID NUMERO UNO GOOO???

... Told you I was tired. >.<

[Sella]

Deleted review for ch. 87:


HOLY CRAPMANIA.

!!!

ACACIA LEE ACKLES. GAHEOIDHTODHT STDHT DTHSDT. That's right. You heard me. YOU HEARD ME, WOMAN.

wHOAAA. SO AMAZING! GAH I jUST GET MORE AND MORE ASTOUNEDED AT YOUR TALENT AND SKILLAGE. Wow I'm so tired. Look how many typos i'm making. *yawn* Anyways ... what was I saying? It's midnight. I got four hours of sleep last night. No that wasn't what I was saying. Oh yeah. GAH. ACACIA! I don't believe you. HOW DO YOU DO THIS?!?! :P I love how you start this entry almost the same way Ryan started hers. XD And I like how Marlie's thinking. She cares so much for Ryan and even Michelle, it's amazing. I love her so much. And I love the last paragraph especially, how she shows how helpless she's feeling. I love how you show that. And it's great foreshadow, to show how Marlie will do what she's going to do. It's just so clever and amazing and I've felt like that before and it's amazing how you can make me connect to this and love the characters and -- *falls asleep in middle of sentence* *wakes up to read next chapter*

[Sella]

deleted review for ch 88"


I don't know what to say, Acacia Lee Ackles.

You. Are. Crazy. Amazing. And. Clever. And. Talented. And. I. Just. Don't. Know. Where. To. BEGIN!

ACACIA! GAHH!H!H!H!H!H!H!H!H!H! i LOVE how you're transitioning this and developing it, how you're changing Ryan and showing what's starting to happen. How you show her drawing away from Marlie and her mother and secluding to herself. How you show her falling into more and more depression and how she's breaking (i especially loved the paragraph where she describes how she broke crying and isn't sure if she still is - so POWERFUL). you're just so clever - everything you do is smart and has a purpose and it's so great and awesome and i can't believe you, daughter. its just like, "GAZOUNDHEIT THIS IS FRIGGING PHENOMENAL AND I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY."

"Everybody has a breaking point. What happens when I reach mine?" I LOVE THAT! SO OMINOUS AND FOREBODING AND CREEPY! XD I can't wait until what happens happens. Even though I'm going to cry. But it's going to be amazing. And this chapter totally shows HOW that's going to happen, which is frigging BRILLIANT.

One word for Ryan: *huggle*

*Ryan kills Sella* Ooops.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Noooo!!!! I have to go to school! Pssh! I;ll have to read them later!

[♫Huneeya♥]

AH! SO MANY LTR CHAPTERS 2 CATCH UP ON! I HAVE 2 FINISH MY HW FIRST!! AHH!! ><

[Acacia]

I love you Sella! You made my day again. :D

[Kim]

Chapter 1 of Change is up!!
Please read that and the prologue and comment!!!!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

do it... OR I KILL YOU!!

[[deleted user]]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Chapter 21 of Dawn of Darkness

[Sella]

Acacia wrote: "I love you Sella! You made my day again. :D"

YAY! :D That is my new goal. I must always make your day.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

I feel all bad, not one of my reviews were long enough to get deleted. :( Well, I havent typed up the one for the last chapter.

[Acacia]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "I feel all bad, not one of my reviews were long enough to get deleted. :( Well, I havent typed up the one for the last chapter."

Krista, your reviews are always awesome too. I can't stop smiling when I read them. :D

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

:] That makes me feel good.

Chapter 88 deleted review. You rock!

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I am on the verge to bursting into tears, here Acacia! I know Ryan is going to die, I know but but I just can't ... I can't accept the fact that she's going to die! And how she's slowly drifting apart and secluding herself, dear God ... Ryan I love you to death. You are the greatest and I really don't want you to die all by yourself. Please don't be all emo and depressed and suicidal. Please. Please. Please!

I really should talk about the chapter now, huh? Okay here it goes:
My favorite part was probably when she was looking in the mirror, that was just so, so emotional and heart wrenching. I could completely relate, and it's like one of those days. That paragraph was just so intense and it really touched me and now that I;m thinking about it, it's making me sad because I can't do a damn thing to help Ryan. 1) She's already dead as we read this. 2) She has a disease that can't be cured. 3) She's a fictional character.

And then the last paragraph. Oh my god, that was superb. Er second to last.

Everybody has a breaking point. What happens when I reach mine?

I stopped breathing. That was just breathtaking. Well, the way you worded it and everything, and the emotion. Okay, Acacia if we ever meet you will be hearing me talk non-stop about how great and fatastic and wonderful LTR is. And that is saying a lot because I hardly ever talk. I'm speechless. Utterly speechless.

Ryan I love you so much and when you die not only will Marlie, your mom, and everyone else in here be sad, I will be depressed for days! Possibly weeks! You're like a real person to me! And I just if you die it'll be like a part of me died too! I've gotten so attached to you and like I said before you are like a different version of my little sister!

ACACIA! I MUST CONGRADULATE YOU NOW! LOOK WHAT YOU HAVE DONE! YOU HAVE MADE ME BELIEVE THAT RYAN IS REAL AND YOU HAVE MADE US GET ATTACHED TO THE CHARACTERS SOOO MUCH! YOU ARE A MIRACLE, A GODDESS, YOU HAVE A TALENT THAT IS JUST SOO UNBELIEVABLE AND YOU. ARE. AMAZING.

I really hope Ryan gets out of this depressional state! I don't want her to die like this! Oh!!! RYAN I DO LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! L.Y.L.A.S. Sorry, me being a dork.

Anyhoo! ACK! ACACIA WRITE MORE SOON! I NEED TO KNOW MORE AND I WISH I CAN EXPLAIN EVERYTHING THAT I WANT TO SAY BUT OVER THE COMPUTER IT'S KIND OF HARD, THOUGH! AND I FAIL AT EXPLAINING THINGS LIKE THIS OR EXPRESSING WHAT I WANT TO SAY!!! ARGH!!!!

I LOVE THIS SO FREAKIN' MUCH AND IT HAS TO BE PUBLISHED BECAUSE IT IS AMAZING AND AWESOME AND I'M STILL FREAKING OUT THAT YOU ARE ONLY 13!!!!! JEEEEEEZZZZZ!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU ACACIA AND I LOVE LETTERS TO RYAN TO DEATH!!!!!!

[♫Huneeya♥]

goodreads deleted my review for chapter 81 which includes a lot of venting and getting mad at Kayla :P

ack!!!

HOW COULD KAYLA FREAKING DO THAT?!
HOW COULD SHE BE SO FREAKING MEAN?!?!
AND I THOUGHT KAYLA WAS A NICE PERSON! I THOUGHT SHE WOULD BE RYAN'S FRIEND SINCE MARLIE HAD LEFT!
AND I THOUGHT SHE WOULD ALWAYS BE THERE FOR RYAN! JUST LIKE MARLIE WAS!!! WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH KAYLA?!
I MEAN, SERIOUSLY?! DOES SHE NOT HAVE ANY COMMON SENSE?! WHEN YOUR FRIEND-IF THATS WHAT SHE IS TO YOU, KAYLA-FEELS 2 SICK 2 GET UP FROM HER BED AND ONTO HER WHEELCHAIR U DONT JUST UP AND LEAVE AND GO WELL IT WAS NICE BEING FRIENDS BUT NOW UR STUCK IN A BORING OLD WHEELCHAIR WHICH IS BORING AND SO NOW UR BORING AND TALKING 2 U IS PROBABLY GNA BE BORING SO I'M NOT GNA WASTE MY TIME WITH YOU ANYMORE, IT WAS NICE KNOWING YOU AND GOODBYE.

NA-UH. YOU'RE SUPPOSED 2 SIT BY THEIR SIDE AND TALK TO THEM AND COMFORT THEM AND TELL THEM EVERYTHINGS GOING TO BE OKAY(ALTHOUGH ADMITTEDLY RYAN MIGHT GET REALLY MAD AT THAT BECAUSE HER DISEASE IS IRREVERSIBLE ISNT IT, THERES NOT REALLY ANY CURE)

AND THE LAST THING KAYLA SAID, HOW COULD SHE FREAKING SAY THAT?!“Well, I’m sorry, I hope you feel better and all, so…I’ll see you later, Ryan, when you do.”

DOESNT SHE FREAKING REALIZE?! RYAN'S NOT GNA GET ANY FREAKING BETTER SO IF THATS WHAT UR GNA SAY U AINT GNA SEE RYAN EVER AGAIN EXCEPT FOR MAYBE AT HER FREAKING FUNERAL BY WHICH TIME U'LL BE ALL SAD AND SORRY THAT U DIDNT STAY FRIENDS WITH HER BUT BY THEN IT WONT MAKE A DIFFERENCE CAZ SHE'LL ALREADY BE DEAD. SO BASICALLY WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS THAT UR A HORRIBLE FRIEND, KAYLA.

U KNO WHAT?! MAYBE RYAN'S BETTER OFF WITHOUT U. I MEAN UR SUCH A SUCKISH FRIEND THAT SHE DOESNT EVEN NEED U. SHE HAS AWESOMER FRIENDS LIKE MARLIE AND....MARLIE...OKAY SHE NEEDS YOU!!! GET A BRAIN AND A LIFE AND AN APOLOGY AND GO BACK 2 RYAN CAZ UR LIKE THE ONLY FRIEND SHE HAS LEFT SO GET YOUR SORRY BUTT OFF OF UR COMFORTABLE SOFA AND SCOOCH IT OVER 2 RYAN'S ROOM AND THIS TIME DONT WALK OFF AFTER FIVE MINUTES, THIS TIME STAY IN THE ROOM AND TALK 2 HER AND MAKE HER LAUGH OR FEEL ANGRY OR AT LEAST MAK HER FEEL SOME EMOTION EVEN IF ALL SHE FEELS IS AN URGE TO HAVE REVENGE!!!

JEESH, KAYLA, I HATE YOU!!!

oh and acacia amazing and hearbreaking chapter which i love so so so so much because its amazing and hearbreaking :D i luv this story and i still feel so sorry for ryan because well, she's a loner now :'(

I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND RYAN!!! *hugs!!!*

[♫Huneeya♥]

i think it deleted my chapter review 4 81 as well tho it wasnt even that long:

ur absolutely right
its not fair
its not fair AT ALL
life isnt fair
nothing is fair
blah
why cant everything be fair?
wouldnt life be so much easier if everything was fair? there would be no poverty, no bullies or popular kids, no unfairness basically
but life is what it is and i guess marlie and ryan and michelle kinda have 2 deal with that
its completely unfair but theres not rly anyway u can change it is there?

and as for michelle..well...i guess she really does have a tough life
i mean having to live with that since you were eleven years old?
your dad was an asshole and left/got thrown out and ur mom turned into an alcoholic (and a druggie?)and wow that must have been a really tough life
and especially when she didnt have a best friend or anyone that she could tell
she didnt have a single person
and now seven years later she found marlie and wow she must feel so much better!
altho i never did think about it that way
now instead of it being a burden on michelle's shoulders its a burden on marlie's shoulders 2 kno such a huge secret and not be able 2 tell anyone else

wow. life is so hard.

[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: ":] That makes me feel good.

Chapter 88 deleted review. You rock!

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I am on the verge to bursting into tears, here Acacia! I know Ryan is going to die, I know but but I just can't ... I ..."

STOP BEATING ME! >:[ JK. I LOVE YOU.

[Acacia]

*hughughughughug*

[Acacia]

Two short little chapters of LTR. *yawn* I'm tired. Good night!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[♫Huneeya♥]

Chapter 90 deleted review:

oh ryan
oh ryan ryan ryan
marlie's probably not sorry about it you know
maybe its better for you to have been her friend and gone then for her to not have experienced ur amazingess and wisdom at all

i still cant believe that you're thinking about suicide, ryan
still still still cant believe it

look at how much you have to live for, ryan. look all around you. look at the people you're going to hurt and think about them. marlie would probably fail college because she would be so depressed. and thats probably not going 2 land her with a very good job. she might even end up being homeless

so ur gna commit suicide and leave your best friend alone to become homeless?! okay a little extreme, i kno, but it cud happen
just think about it

ACACIA:
ur seriously scaring me now
this is probably like the tenth time ive said that or something
this chapter was so freaking good
i love how ryan's admitting everything to marlie but she doesn't have enough courage to press SEND
i love how she's so thoughtful all of a sudden and thinks about other people and thinks about how much it would hurt them so she decides to keep it inside herself instead
i love how your slowly and gradually making the reader get more and more used to the idea of ryan comitting suicide
i hope it never happens
and i'll cry so hard if it does

WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW CAZ I NEED 2 FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Hey Sella, looks like we have some competition. Hehe. XP

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Acacia wrote: "Two short little chapters of LTR. *yawn* I'm tired. Good night!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."

I ♥ you!

[[deleted user]]

OMG. I love you, Acacia!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG. I'm-ugh-out of words.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Acacia wrote: "Two short little chapters of LTR. *yawn* I'm tired. Good night!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."

My review for the deleted email:

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HOLY JEBUS!!!!!!!! RYAN YOU ARE KIDDING ME. YOU MUST BE JOKING. YOU DID NOT JUST NOT SEND THAT?! YOU MUST SEND THAT! RYAN YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO YOURSELF! YOU CANNOT! I FORBID IT! PLEASE RYAN! I'M ON MY KNEES BEGGING YOU TO SEND THE DARN EMAIL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! YOU CAN'T KILL YOURSELF! YOU CAN'T GO SUICIDAL ON ME! THAT WOULD TEAR ME APART INTO ITTY BITTY TEENY WEENY SHREDS!!! YOU. CAN. NOT. DO. THIS. TO. ANYONE. YOU. CANNOT. KILL. YOURSELF.

PLEASE RYAN CHEER UP!!!!!!

Oh God, I'm freaking crying again. RYAN I HATE IT WHEN I CRY! AND YOU HAVE BEEN MAKING ME CRY LIKE ALMOST EVERYONE SINGLE CHAPTER LETTER EMAIL DIARY EVERY SINGLE TIME!!! I HATE IT WHEN YOU'RE SAD, IT HURTS ME AND MAKES ME SAD AND RYAN!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! PLEASE YOU NEED A HUG AND AND I DON'T CARE IF YOU ARE NOT REAL AND I'M JUST YELLING AT A COMPUTER SCREEN OVER A STORY, YOU ARE REAL TO ME!

THIS MAKES THE TOP 10 OF MY FAVORITE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO SWEET, SAD, NERVE WRACKING, DEPRESSING, DEEP, INTENSE, EMOTIONAL, AND JUST MAGNIFICENT!!!

I love how she is asking for help. It really hit me too, Ryan is in serious trouble and God. I can't explain what I want to say, I'm at a loss for words!!!

AND RYAN DO NOT REGRET OR DARE SAY SORRY ABOUT BEING MARLIE'S FRIEND!!! OR ANY OF THAT! YOU ARE AMAZING, YOU ARE GREAT, AND YOU HAVE FREAKIN' TOUCHED OUR LIVES! NO, NOT ONLY MARLIE'S BUT EACH AND EVERY PERSON WHO IS READING THIS! BECAUSE YOU SURE HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART AND HAVE LEFT A PERMANENT MARK!!!!!!!

PLEASE RYAN DON'T SAY SORRY!!! I'M CRYING EVEN MORE NOW BECAUSE THIS SEEM LIKE A GOODBYE! AND YOU CANNOT SAY GOODBYE!!! RYAN I LOVE YOU, DON'T DIE!!!!!

Okay, that's inevitable, but still. *sigh*

ACACIA WRITE MORE NOW I AM FREAKING OUT!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO RYAN, BECAUSE I REALLY DON'T WANT HER TO DIE, AND HOW DOES MARLIE GO TO JAIL AND I JUST NEED TO KNOW BUT I DONT WANT YOU TO FINISH LTR BECAUSE THEN I'M GOING TO MISS IT SO MUCH AND THEN I'M GOING TO CRY MY HEAD OFF BUT YOU CANT KEEP GOING ON FORVER AND I'M JUST RAMBLING BECAUSE I'M HYSTERICAL AND GOING INSANE AND NOW I'M ALL SAD BECAUSE I REMEMBERED NO MATTER WHAT RYAN DIES AND JUST ...

Okay, I really need to stop talking. I'm making me feel worse. Great job, Acacia! You are brilliant!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Wow. I sound like a crazy person.

[Acacia]

Krista. *hug*

[Acacia]

Four more chapters of LTR, in which I am not very nice to Ryan. But when am I ever? ;) Read them, please! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[♫Huneeya♥]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "Hey Sella, looks like we have some competition. Hehe. XP"

naaaa, my reviews could never be as awesome as yours and Sella's :P

[♫Huneeya♥]

Acacia wrote: "Four more chapters of LTR, in which I am not very nice to Ryan. But when am I ever? ;) Read them, please! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."

i'm almost scared 2 read them... :'(

[♫Huneeya♥]

chapter 91 review:

....
.....
*explodes*
RYAN!!!!!! RYAN RYAN RYAN!!!!!! YOU CANT DO THIS TO YOURSELF YOU JUST FREAKING CANT ITS NOT RIGHT AND YOUR NOT ALLOWED AND I FORBID YOU RYAN!!! YOU HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME YOU CANT COMMIT SUICIDE YOU CANT YOU CANT YOU CANT CANT CANNNTTTT!!!! DONT DO THIS TO YOURSELF!! DONT DO THIS TO MARLIE!!! DONT DO THIS TO YOUR MOM!!! AND I KNO THIS IS GOING TO SEEM REALLY SELFISH, BUT MOST OF ALL DONT DO THIS TO ME!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
YOU NEED TO WAKE UP AND LOOK AT THE WORLD AROUND YOU!!!!!
DO YOU REALLY WANT TO LEAVE IT?! ISNT THERE SOMETHING YOUVE ALWAYS WANTED TO DO BEFORE YOU DIED?! ISNT THERE?! DONT YOU THINK YOU SHOULD ACTUALLY THINK ABOUT HOW PRECIOUS LIFE IS?!
I KNOW YOU DONT HAVE MUCH TO LIVE FOR BECAUSE YOU'RE ALMOST A FREAKING STATUE BUT THINK ABOUT THE THINGS THAT YOU DO HAVE, RYAN, DO YOU REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO LEAVE THIS WORLD SO BADLY?!

RYAN. RYAN RYAN RYAN I FEEL LIKE A PARROT REPEATING THIS BUT DONT DO THIS RYAN!!!!!

Acacia:
this chapter made me cry :'(
the story just keeps getting better and better and better and better and it never stops and it seems like you're kind of close to the end except i still have NO idea how Marlie's gna end up in jail because the chances of that seem kinda impossible at the moment, don't they?
i know ryan's going to die but i'm going to beg you not to kill her anyways. please please please dont kill her!!!
and i love the part where ryan's wondering what she's living for
but there's one thing she's wrong about: her mom and marlie would be much sadder if she killed herself then if the disease killed her
they would always think there was something they could have done to stop her. and truthfully there is. if marlie just drove over there, ryan might cheer up a bit
but apparently she's not going to unti it's too late
why is everything so freaking sad?

[♫Huneeya♥]

chapter 92 review:

NOOO NO NO NO NO NONONNONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONOONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONOONNOONONONONNONONONOON!!!!!!! BUT BUT BUT HER LETTER SAID, IT SAID THAT WHEN SHE WENT DOWN TO SEE RYAN IT WAS TOO LATE! BUT I DONT WANT IT TO BE TOO LATE! YOU CANT KILL RYAN THIS QUICKLY, ACACIA, YOU CANT YOU CANT YOU CANT!!! AND MARLIE, DID YOU REALLY HAVE TO TELL RYAN YOU WERE COMING? MAYBE SHE WANTED TO GET IT OVER AND DONE WITH MORE QUICKLY CAZ SHE DIDNT WANT YOU TO SEE HOW DEPRESSED AND SUICIDAL SHE WAS!!! OR MAYBE EVEN IF YOU DIDNT TELL HER SHE WOULD HAVE COMMITED SUICIDE ANYWAYS...GAH I DONT KNOW! THIS IS SO COMPLICATED!!! I READ SOMEWHERE THAT GOING TO SLEEP EARLY KEEPS TEENAGERS FROM THINKING DEPRESSING AND SUICIDAL THOUGHTS!!! RYAN SHOULD START GOING TO SLEEP EARLY!!! DID YOU HEAR ME RYAN?! GO TO SLEEP EARLY!!!!! DO IT!!! NOW!!! I DONT CARE IF YOU DONT WANT TO, JUST DO IT!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS WILL THAT BE RYAN'S LAST DIARY ENTRY? NO NO NO!!! IT CANT BE!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Acacia]

I love you Huneeya! *hug*

[Acacia]

Okay, so my friend Jordan and I wrote this prologue to this one really awesome story idea she dreamt up. Literally. Anyway, here's the link! Read it and tell me what you think.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[Krys]

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE READ AND LEAVE A COMMENT! Chapter Thirty for The Seventh Dimension, and I'm only like three comments away from having 100, which has never happened before for me :P This is also my longest chapter in the entire book, and things start to get sad here... So please read and leave a comment!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[♫Huneeya♥]

Acacia wrote: "I love you Huneeya! *hug*"

i love you too! :D

[Niki]

Here's chapter 37 of Adventures of a Wayward Witch... Sorry I haven't written for a while. : ) But please read and comment!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[[deleted user]]

isnt that 38?
great job as usual
BWAHAhAHHAH i knew it there going to come to life again!!!!!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Niki doesn't count the prologue. And great chapter!

[[deleted user]]

ohh...ok

[Jayda]

REBEL, CHAPTER FOUR!!!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

AHHH! I GOT THROUGH MY WRITER'S BLOCK! :D
Okay, please like and/or comment!
Let me know what you think! :)

[Acacia]

Here's the next chapter of LTR! This is going to be the next one for a few days, because I'm going to write a bunch of poems and then post them all at once. So...yeah. Yay!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[[deleted user]]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Please read this! I would love feedback.

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Be warned, this is my review for chapter 85-94!! ☺ Haha, Acacia it was deleted lol. :)


Ryan, Ryan, Ryan, WHY ON EARTH ARE YOU THAT DEPRESSED ALL OF A SUDDEN!?!?!?!?!?!?! AND I HAVE TO SAY, we already knew there was something wrong from the start. I can’t believe you even tried to drown yourself. You have got to live!!! You need to live while you can!!! No pills, no freaking wayyy!!!! :P Get some help, yo! You really really need it!!!!!

Eeeuurrgghh! Let Marlie, in Ryan!!!!!!! WHY AREN’T YOU??!?!!! YOU FRUSTRATE ME, BUT I LOVE YOU AND DON’T WANT YOU TO DIE AND SHE’S YOUR BEST FRIEND!!!!!!!! BE NICE TO UR BEST FRIEND!!!!!!! ITS NO BUSINESS MEETING SHE WANTS TO HELP YOU LET HER!!!!!!!!!

Erm, Marlie, we already know there’s something wrong. And I understand you like fixing things, but maybe you should just concentrate on being a good friend and not just a fixer-upper. Yah, a lot of ppl have shit in their lives but you can’t fix everything, just being there for them is pretty much all u can do sometimes. :(

STAY IN THERE RYAN!!!!!!! MARLIE REALLY WANTS TO HELP!!!!!!! AND YOU CAN TALK TO HER, I JUST KNOW YOU CAN. MAYBE CRYING IS JUST YOUR BREAK THROUGH YOU KNOW? Just keep holding it in, your best friend is coming. :P I dunno how your life has gotten so bad, I’m real sorry, but I can’t fix anything and that freaking sucks for me and Marlie.

Awww!!! Marlie is just so freaking sorry and I’m pretty sure this is set in the dim future. And I want to cry so bad. :’(


Why couldn’t you have sent the message, why did you discard. Why? You can trust Marlie she cud help you. Ugh, being depressed sucks. ☹ Just tell her. And your not gonna turn to stone, you just cant. :P

I have to say, I really love the quote for this chapter. Its really helped me think of how ryan’s journal entry was going to be. Keep living ryan its really worth it believe me. And it makes me so sad to think of u dying even sooner than u already are gonna. :’(

Ya, I know it sucks Marlie. U didn’t have any say….and now all u can do is be a good friend. Michelle is right, u do need a break sorta. :P and GO SEE RYAN THIS MINUTE!!! BEFORE ANYTHING BAD HAPPENS!!!!!!! Hmm, had to get that out of my system. GO GO GO GO GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh noes, another bad thing. U make it funny and sad acacia how do u do that. Ugh, I’m combining the next three chapter. I cant believe she fell and the flare ups…that sucks. ☹ I don’t like this disease I really wish it was fake even tho it isn’t. ☹ I guess Ryan has a point with her whole I wish it was over already thingy. Hmmm, I didn’t think that she wrote poetry…

ACACIA U ARE AMAZING AND GOOD AT SHOW NOT TELL!!!!!!!! ☺ LTR IS AMAZING AND I WISH THAT IT WAS A PUBLISHED BOOK ITS THAT GOOD!!!!!!!!!

wierd, im the 999 person to vote on LTR. :)

[Acacia]

*hug* :D I love you Abbee.

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*hugs backs* Love you too. :)