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[Sella]

GASPAGENESS!! TWO SHOCKING CHAPTERS FOR OUTCAST!! Hahaha. XD Caleb's mysterious secret is revealed ... mwa ha ha! And then more mooching. Heehee. XD Read it and gasp with gaspageness. Okay I'm done now. :P Please leave a comment on both chapters, I really want feedback! Thanks.

BTW, Outcast reached page 222! I AM SO HAPPY!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

My review to the last chapter because it got deleted. Now, sleep is waiting for me!
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OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD.OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. EFFING. GOD.

CALEB YOU ARE THE GREATEST PERSON EVER! YOU ARE SO SWEET AND KIND AND I JUST LOVE YOU AND WANT TO SMOTHER YOU WITH KISSES AND HUGS AND AHHHH!!! I AM SO GOING TO MAKE A SHIRT THAT SAYS "I ♥ CALEB RYDER!" AND WEAR IT TO SCHOOL BECAUSE YOU ARE JUST ... YOU DEFY DESCRIPTION YOUNG MAN!!! I LOVE YOU!

I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER! I ♥ CALEB RYDER!

GAWWWD!!! I AM SOOOOO JEALOUS OF LAVENDER RIGHT NOW!!!!! I WANT CALEB!!! HE IS BEASTLY!!!! I WANT TO HOLD HIM AND COMFORT HIM! OMG! I'M CRYING! SELLA YOU'RE MAKING ME CRY!!!

I'm so sorry for Caleb. Not only his parents, but the girl he loved too! That's just so icky. The Traders need to die. I hate them so very, very much. DIIIIEEEEE TRADERS!!!! I love Caleb even more because he is so sweet and the vow! Awww that just made me smile because that is sooo sweet and nice and loyal and damnation! Julia never knew! That makes me even more sad and depressed. Ah crap, it's almost midnight and school ...

Screw school. Reading is educational and Outcast is freaking AMAZING!!!

Sella. You. Are. Brilliant. Genuis. A smartie pants.
GGGGAAAAHHHH!!! THAT IS LIKE THE COOLEST TWIST OR A DEATH POSSIBLE! LIKE THE WHOLE CONCEPT AND JUST EEEEKKKKK!!!!!

AND I'M STILL SMILING BECAUSE OF HOW GENTLE CALEB REALLY IS, I'M STILL CRYING BECAUSE OF HIS HISTORY, AND I'M TICKED OFF BECAUSE I CAN'T EVEN EXPRESS WHAT I FEEL!!!

Like I said to Brigid, if I ever talk to you put ear plugs in. You will need them. Maybe even a sound proof room ...

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! I'M DYING HERE! AND DID I MENTION I WANT LAVENDER TO MOVE OUT OF THE PICTURE THAT WAY I CAN HAVE CALEB ALL TO MYSELF!?!?!!?!?

I LOVE YOU CALEB! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AND YOU ROCK! AND I TAKE BACK ANYTHING MEAN I HAVE EVER SAID TO YOU! BECAUSE NOW I KNOW YOU WERE JUST HIDING YOUR FEELINGS!!!

CALEB WHY AREN'T YOU REAL?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!!?

I LOVE OUTCAST MORE THAN ANYBODY!!!! ESPESCIALLY THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE OF EVERYTHING I JUST SAID!!!

SELLA YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sella]

XD XD XD KRISTA I LOVE YOU SO MUCHLY! XD Your review makes me so so so happy. :P

[[deleted user]]

Blah. Hahaha. Krista that was an amazing review. :) I agree. But I wanna love it third most becuz I'm guessing Brigid is gonna want custody too. :) lol.

My review is waaay shorter..because I'm kind of in a stupor:

Thats so freaking sad. And bad. And UGH!!! Why are you making me suddenly like Caleb?!?!?! He's so ugh!!!! :P Poor him...making his mask and hiding. That freakin' sucks!!!! I'm so speechless, I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!! OUTCAST IS SOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!! I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!!!!!! :) WRITE MORE....SOON!!!!!!!

[Hannah]

I feel guilty that I keep posting this link over and over and over again...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Read and review, please?

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Hey you guys! I just wrote something for a story idea and I would love some feedback before I actually start writing and begin it. It's called Meet Allison, but I'm not so sure "Allison" should be the girls name. It seems so boring and common. So if you know a better name or something that would fit instead of Allison, please tell me! Thank you!

Here's the excerpt:

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Every person you meet has an impact on your life. They’re supposed to change it drastically one way or another. I never believed in that, though. It doesn’t make any sense. I pass a kid in the hall; we’ve traded names, if I never met him would I be a different person? Would my life be completely different just because of one kid who I barely know?

Maybe. Maybe not. I will never know, will I?

I do know, though that if I never met her I probably would not be here. The girl who lurks in my dreams every night hidden by the thick clouds, the one person who at first glance I thought I would never talk to, had to go off and save my life.

Allison Marcie Lockwood.

She had a heart of gold, although chipped and heavy it was. She had the mind as open as a wide flat prairie. She had the voice as sweet and fair as the ocean’s soft music and the melodic tone of an angel. She had features that were so delicate that you thought she might just break if held on too tight.

And that’s what she was delicate, fragile. Yet she didn’t show it. At first sight you would think her as a normal girl who just was a little clumsy and a know it all, but if you were to get to know her she would show you wonders.

Allison saw a world that was right before us, a world that we took for granted. She saw the beauties in the simplest of things. Allison could even point out details about yourself that you never even realized was there. Sometimes I swear she was a fallen angel. The way she spoke to you, soft and gentle. The way she made you feel, happy, and cared for. Allison was a like a guardian angel, specifically mine.

If only I knew how much she would mean to me when I first gazed into her soft light periwinkle eyes. If only I hadn’t broken her. If only she knew that I thought of her as the most precious person in my world.

If only….

[[deleted user]]

I think it is...AN AWESOME IDEA KRISTA!!!!!!!!! AND THAT YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY START WRITING!!!!! AND DEVELOP THE PLOT AND ALL THAT GOOD STUFF!!!!!!!!!!

(I'm curious to who the narrator is...)

[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "Hey you guys! I just wrote something for a story idea and I would love some feedback before I actually start writing and begin it. It's called Meet Allison, but I'm not so sure "Allison" should be ..."

WOW! That sounds so cool! :D And I LOVE the title. I don't think there's anything wrong with the name Allison, it's pretty ... but maybe you should spell it a cooler way? Like, Alyson? :) YOU NEED TO WRITE THIS STORY! :D

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Oh, that is a cool wat to spell it! Thanks you two! The narrator is a boy named Davis something ... I'm still trying tpo figure out what his last name should be.

[Acacia]

LAST! TWO! CHAPTERS! OF! GUINEA! PIGS!!!

I'M DONE!! WOOO!!

Oh, and I apologize in advance for the cheesiness of the epilogue.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[[deleted user]]

Oh noes...I'm kind of scared to read it Acacia. :P

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Wow!!!!! IT WAS SUCH AN AMAZING ENDING AND UGH!!! YOU JUST FINISHED YOUR (?) FIRST NOVEL?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Acacia wrote: "LAST! TWO! CHAPTERS! OF! GUINEA! PIGS!!!

I'M DONE!! WOOO!!

Oh, and I apologize in advance for the cheesiness of the epilogue.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."

*gulp* This scares me. BUT CONGRATS YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL!!!!! I'll have to read it later, though. I'm visiting with family and my new baby cousin!!

[Brigid ✩]

Acacia wrote: "LAST! TWO! CHAPTERS! OF! GUINEA! PIGS!!!

I'M DONE!! WOOO!!

Oh, and I apologize in advance for the cheesiness of the epilogue.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."

OHMIGOD ACACIA!!! CONGRATS!!! I'M SO PROUD OF YOOUUUUU!!! :D :D :D

… Now I actually need to read it. O_o haha!

[Sella]

Acacia wrote: "LAST! TWO! CHAPTERS! OF! GUINEA! PIGS!!!

I'M DONE!! WOOO!!

Oh, and I apologize in advance for the cheesiness of the epilogue.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."

OH MY GOD ACACIA! YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL! I AM SO FREAKING PROUD OF YOU, DAUGHTER!

[Sella]

I wrote a huge-ass review for the end of Guinea Pigs that got deleted. In fact, it is the longest review I have ever written in my life for a story. That makes you special.

Prepare yourself for mind-blowing insanity in the following review.

*gets water balloon and army of platypuses ready*

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOLY SHIT! HOLY SHIT! HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OHMYEFFINGGOD!

ACACIA! I'M STUNNED SPEECHLESS! I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN!

gaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. This. Is. So. Freaking. Perfect. I LOVE IT. I love the epilogue! It's so perfect. It wraps everything up so amazingly and I love how you show how things have changed. And I love how even though so much time has passed, Caitlin and Zachary are still so in love, more so maybe. I love how there's still chemistry between them, and they still have funny lines together. And I can't wait to meet Genesis in the sequel.

The sequel. AHH!! I AM SO FREAKING EXCITED FOR THE SEQUEL!! IT WILL BE AWESOME BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME!!

THIS WAS SO PERFECT!! I still can't get over that. It's sweet and awesome, and it makes GP have an awesome ending - sad because Jasmyn's dead, but happy because of this.

But wasn't the last line going to be "I'll snap your neck" ? I liked that. Why didn't you use it? :P

And how are Zach and Caitlin finding homes for everyone? Won't they kill their home people? Haha.

Anyways. HOLY GASPAGENESS ACACIA. YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL! OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD YOU FINISHED! YOU. FINISHED! JESUS CHRIST WOMAN! YOU HAVE FINISHED YOUR FIRST EVER NOVEL AND YOU ARE ONLY THIRTEEN! YOU KNOW HOW FREAKING JEALOUS I AM????? I FINISHED MY FIRST NOVEL WHEN I WAS FOURTEEN. GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! AND YOU KNOW WHAT? THE ONLY PERSON YOU'VE FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL LATER THAN IS BRIGID, WHO FINISHED AT TWELVE. BUT YOU FINISHED AT THIRTEEN, AND THAT'S FREAKING AMAZING!! I AM SO JEALOUS BUT ALSO SO PROUD OF YOU AT THE SAME TIME!!! GAHGHAGHAGHAGHAHG!!!!!

ACACIA MY DAUGHTER. ACACIA LOVEY DEAR! YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL! EVER! YOU. FINISHED. YOUR. FIRST. NOVEL. I AM BOUNCING OFF THE WALLS RIGHT NOW. I AM SCREAMING. I AM SO, SO HAPPY AND SO PROUD OF YOU. MY DEAR ACACIA, YOU ARE SO, SO UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING, DO YOU KNOW THAT? WELL IF YOU DON'T, YOU BETTER KNOW THAT NOW! AND YOU KNOW WHAT? I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY, THAT'S HOW AMAZING YOU ARE!

YOU. FINISHED. YOUR. FIRST. NOVEL. AND. IT. WAS. SO. AMAZING. GAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*CRIES* *WIPES TEAR* MY LITTLE BABY DAUGHTER IS GROWING UP. *SNIFFLE* AND I LOVE HER SO MUCH!

ACACIA LEE ACKLES! YOU ARE A MIRACLE WRITER AND YOU ARE THE GREATEST MIRACLE WRITER THERE EVER WAS! YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY, SO MAGICALLY, SO CRAZILY CRAZY THAT I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE IT. YOU ARE THE MIRACLE WRITER AND THE WRITING GODDESS AND MY DAUGHTER AND YOU HAVE PROVED ALL OF THOSE BY FINISHING THIS BOOK IN SUCH AN AMAZING WAY. I CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T BELIEVE THIS BUT YET I CAN BECAUSE YOU ARE ACACIA AND YOU ARE AWESOME AND YOU ARE AMAZING.

GAHHH. GAHH. AND I LOVE THE LAST LINE, SO AMAZING AND AWESOME AND COOL. BUT YOU SHOULD CHANGE IT TO "I'LL SNAP YOUR NECK." BUT IT'S STILL AMAZING!

ACACIA YOU ARE SO AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING VAMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING

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I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACACIA! YOU ROCK MY WORLD AND YOU ARE AMAZING BEYOND THE WORD! AND YOU WORLD MY ROCK! GAH!!!!!!!!!

YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST NOVEL! YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST FREAKING NOVEL! THAT MAKES YOU SO EXPERIENCED AND AMAZING AND POWERFUL AND AWESOME.

I AM SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS, THAT I HAVE TO RANT AND RAMBLE FOREVER IN A REVIEW, AND I KEEP REPEATING MYSELF BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO END MY REVIEW.

SODHTIODSHTOISHDTIODHSTOIDSHTOISDHTIDHT!!!!!!! OISHDT OIDHSTI !!!!!! SDHITOD TOISHDTOIS DHTIOD T!!!!!!! OISHD TOIDSHTIDT!!!!1

TO END THIS REVIEW, I WILL STATE OUR CATCHPHRASES.

"GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE. INSANE MINDS THINK THE SAME. BUT WRITER MINDS HAVE FREAKING TELEPATHIC POWERS."

AND

"SUMMON YOUR VAMPIRES. It's BOFCTLAKTB time."

AND

THAT REALLY COOL THING YOU SAID IN SKYPE CHAT LAST NIGHT THAT I WAS LIKE "OMG THAT SHOULD ALSO BE OUR CATCHPHRASE" AND YOU WERE LIKE "SURE" BUT FOR THE LIFE OF ME I CAN'T REMEMBER WHAT IT WAS NOW. HELP ME OUT HERE, ACACIA.

I THINK THIS IS PROBABLY THE LONGEST REVIEW I HAVE EVER WRITTEN IN MY LIFE, AND THAT MEANS YOU ARE AMAZING, ACACIA.

YOU. JUST. DID. IT.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE END.

P.S. I DEFINITELY BEAT KRISTA IN THE REVIEW CONTEST. THIS REVIEW KICKS HER REVIEW'S ASS. (NO OFFENSE KRISTA HONEY DAUGHTER). IN FACT, THIS REVIEW KICKS EVERYONE ELSE'S ASS. INCLUDING CAITLINS.

THIS BOOK HAS BEEN AN AMAZING JOURNEY FOR BOTH OF US. I HAVE FORCED YOU TO WRITE GP THROUGH BLACKMAIL AND THREATS, RISKING MY OWN NECK TO DRAG YOU OUT OF THE DANGEROUS WATERS OF DAMN BEAVERS, MINDLESS ZOMBIE GAMES, PROCRASTINATION, LETHARGICNESS, IDIOCY, AND MEEPNESS. AND I HAVE WON, BECAUSE YOU HAVE FINISHED THIS BOOK. SO KUDOS TO US, BUT MOSTLY TO YOU. BECAUSE YOU'RE THE ONE WHO WROTE THE DAMN BOOK. I'M JUST THE ONE WHO MADE YOU DO IT AND PREPPED AND PREPPED YOU AND FED YOU PEPPERS AND THREW YOU INTO THE WAVES AND KICKED YOUR FEET OUT FROM UNDER YOU AND ATE YOU 39359385935 MILLION TIMES.

I LOVE YOU TO SHREDS, ACACIA ACKLES. MAY YOU AWESOMEIFIZE FOREVER.

AMEN.

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0_0 heehee.

[Acacia]

*HUGSQUEE*

[Sella]

*HUGDEATH*

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

:O That is a long ass review and blows mine out of the water! But everything in it is true!

Now, I believe we should have a party celebrating Acacia's first novel being finished.

[[deleted user]]

Agreed Krista, that seems about right. :)

[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: ":O That is a long ass review and blows mine out of the water! But everything in it is true!

Now, I believe we should have a party celebrating Acacia's first novel being finished."

*blushes* Why thank you.

YES! PARTY PARTY! XD

[Acacia]

Aww, you guys. XD You don't have to do that.

In related news, due to the combined miracles of a writing spree and previously written chapters, here are 5 shiny new chapters of Letters to Ryan! This story is closer to the end than I thought...I hopefully might finish it soon. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Last chapter review:

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NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO!

KAYLA CAN'T LEAVE! THAT WAS RYAN'S FRIEND SINCE MARLIE!!! NOOOO!!! I LIKED KAYLA!!! I'M GLAD SHE'S BETTER AND GETTING TO GO BACK HOME FOR A NORMAL LIFE AND ALL BUT STILL!!! SHE'S LEAVING RYAN AND GAH!!!!!

She said, “Look, Ryan. Just because you’re dying for sure doesn’t mean I am.” That is probably my favorite line of the chapter besides the last paragraph. I can't exactly explain why I liked it, but it had so much emotion packed in that little sentence! I guess, I'm not sure I can't explain it! Gah! And it's driving me crazy!!! Anyways, that was soooo good! I'm going to miss Kayla and Ryan just ... Oh I want to give her a hug sooooooooooooooo badly!!!!

Ryan seems to be getting more and more upset! Awww it's making me sad!!!!! RYAN I LOVE YOU AND I WISH I COULD BE THERE FOR YOU AND I REALLY REALLY WISH THAT YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE!!!!! BECAUSE YOU ARE SOOOO AWESOME AND I LOVE YOU AND JUST AAAAHHHH!!! ACACIA YOU'RE MAKING ME GET UPSET AGAIN BECAUSE NOW I'M REMEMBERING THAT SHE HAS TO DIE!!!!! AAAAHHHH NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

AND AAACCCCKKK!!!! YOU ARE ALMOST DONE AND THAT MEANS RYAN IS GOING TO DIE SOON AND MARLIE IS GOING TO GO TO JAIL SOON!!! OMG!!! GAH! NO NO NO NO!!!!! I DON'T WANT THIS TO END, I DON'T WANT MARLIE TO GO TO JAIL, I DON'T WANT RYAN TO DIEEE!!!!! NOOOO!!!

I sound all repetitive but it's true!!! Aah! What does Marlie do that makes her go to jail?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! gahagahgahgahaghagahgahagahgahagahgahagahgahagahgahaghagahaghagahaghagahaghagahgahagahgahagha!!!!!!!

ACACIA YOU ARE A GODDESS AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!

[Acacia]

I love you Krista. :D :D

[[deleted user]]

Humph. I have got to learn or have the patience to write that long of a review. GO KRISTA/SELLA! Lol. :)

[Acacia]

Thanks to more writing/already written combinations, here are the next two chapters of LTR. Please read and comment and stuff! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

[Sella]

Two more chapters of Outcast, Ch. 30 and Ch. 31! Hehe. Developing Caleb and Lavender's relationship is fun. AND YAY! FINALLY OUTCAST IS GETTING INTO THE MAIN PLOT AGAIN! Traders, here I come! XD Hehe. Please comment on both! Thanks. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

YOU GUYS!!! I WANT TO HUG AND STRANGLE YOU!!!! I HAVE HOMEWORK TO FINISH UP AND IT'S LATE BUT I WANT TO READ THEM SOOOOO BADLY!!!!!

[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "YOU GUYS!!! I WANT TO HUG AND STRANGLE YOU!!!! I HAVE HOMEWORK TO FINISH UP AND IT'S LATE BUT I WANT TO READ THEM SOOOOO BADLY!!!!!"

Aww. I'm sorry Krista! :(

[Sella]

Acacia wrote: "Thanks to more writing/already written combinations, here are the next two chapters of LTR. Please read and comment and stuff! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."

MY REVIEW GOT DELETED FOR CHAPTER 81.


WOW!

I LOVE THIS.

I love how you had the quote tied in with this. You thought you'd use it for Marlie's old friends, but you managed to make it fit for Ryan, and that's awesome! I loove how you show us that Kayla really isn't that great of a friend. And the quote fits - she's with Ryan when everything's fine, but as soon as it gets icky, she leaves.

Okay. Now for character ranting. Ahem. *clears throat* I can't do this as well as you can, but I can try.

Ryan, lighten up. You're going to die, and there's nothing you can do about that. So just chill, okay? Make friends. Live your moment to the last. Go on dates. ... Okay, maybe that wouldn't work out that well. But still, you can get crushes, can't you? You're twelve. Haven't you ... oh right, Jonathan. Sorry. Erm ...

Marlie: Visit Ryan already, dammit. What are you doing, just sitting around in college? Your best friend needs you!

Kayla: You little brat. You don't walk away when your friend is depressed! You comfort her! Sheeshes.

See? Gahh. I suck at ranting at characters, Acacia. I make it totally boring and serious and not hilarious and witty like you do. I'll just shut up now.

[Sella]

Deleted review for ch. 82:

HOLY WOW!

WOW WOW WOW. AMAZING! :D

I love the backstory you created for Michelle. It really gives her so much life and it's amazing and makes her rounder and more complex. XD And I love how Marlie's like, "What do I /say/ to that?" And then how later she's like "Everyone has screwed up lives but not me, how is that fair!" XD And how she considers Michelle her friend now. :P

Now ranting to characters. Hopefully this will go better than last time.

Michelle: Aw, I'm so sorry about your past. *huggles* You deserve some chocolate cake and a smoothie. Hehe. Your mommy was like Jonah's mommy. And your daddy was like Jonah's daddy. HEY! YOU AND JONAH SHOULD GET TOGETHER AND CABOODLE AND YOU CAN HAVE A LITTLE PITY PARTY! ... No. You shouldn't. Because Jonah is Casey's. HOW DARE YOU TRY TO STEAL HIM AWAY! You horrible girl! *eats Michelle*

Marlie: I am not going to attempt to say anything to you because it will just be lame. So I will settle for: You are awesome. You are awesome, so just continue to be awesome, alrighty? Alrighty.

THIS IS MAAZING MIRACLE WRITER!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Those beat my reviews. Haha, the last one made me laugh!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Sella wrote: "♫Krista♫ wrote: "YOU GUYS!!! I WANT TO HUG AND STRANGLE YOU!!!! I HAVE HOMEWORK TO FINISH UP AND IT'S LATE BUT I WANT TO READ THEM SOOOOO BADLY!!!!!"

Aww. I'm sorry Krista! :("

It's fine.

[Sella]

Deleted review for ch 84:

HAHAHA.

WOW!

Acacia Lee Ackles. Only YOU would be able to make a chapter both depressing and deep and sad AND hilarious and funny at the same time. XD Only you have that talent.

YOU ARE SO FREAKING AMAZING. XDDD Chandler is hilarious. I was cracking up the whole time. All this comments ... ahahaha. And Marlie ... aww. I LOVE how she's developing. She's becoming emo and depressed and that's freaking AWESOME. XD And aww! Chandler is so supportive! I think I'm almost in love with him. Kinda. He's still kinda grossish, but I love him. XD

I love IM chats. Best part of this I think, besides Marlie's letters to dead Ryan. I love the IM chats because they're so realistic and funny and awesome. :D

Marlie: Aww, I'm sorry. *huggle* Don't be so depressed. Life is screwy, but you are awesome. You are awesome and Ryan is awesome and Chandler is awesome. That should make you happier. :P

Chandler: I love you, kiddo. You are so hilarious yet sweet and supportive and you just ROCK. Except for stealing 50 bucks. That was not cool. Yet ... I may or may not be in love with you. You did not hear me say that. SHUT UP. NO I WILL NOT FEATHER WITH YOU. I AM NOT A FEATHER GIRL LIKE BRIGID. And if I would feather with any of Acacia's characters, it would be Zach. So back off.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

What Sella said. XP

[Sella]

Deleted review for ch 85:

HOLY ShIT SHIT shIT YAY YAY YAAY.

XDXD XD XD XD XD

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!

AHAHTOH!!!!

Acacia Lee Ackles, I love you to death. XD

GAHH. YOU DO THIS SO FREAKING AMAZINGLY. I LOOOOVEEEE how you start showing how Ryan's becoming emo and depressed and suicidal. And this is such a cool way to introduce it, by the bath. WOW! HAha. Heehee Acacia, you know, you're not supposed to breath underwater. Remember that, will you? ;) HEHEE.

GAHGHAHGAGAGHAG. I love Ryan's thought process here, so amazing! :D:D:D:D AND THIS IS AWESOME FORESHADOW FOR YOU KNOW WHAT! (No, not for Ryan's death, silly. For that other big thing. XD) GAHH!! AMAZING!! :P

Miracle writer, you have done it again. You have done it again and again and again and you keep doing it and I'm just so proud of you and I just don't believe you because NO ONE CAN BE THIS FREAKING AMAZING. BUT YOU ARE. YOU ARE AND YOU ARE AND ITS INSANE. XDDDDD

Btw, I love the quote. SO FITTING. And true. And awesome. AND FORESHADOWING. (Sheesh, am I obsessed with foreshadow or something? XD)

Ryan: Aww, come're. Gimme a hug. No? FINE. But listen. Ryan, don't be like that. Sure, your life is horrible, but you should live it out until the end! Even if it's painful, you've still got Marlie. You've still got things that make you happy. Why don't you just enjoy them? Don't kill yourself! Yet at the same time, it's so AWESOME that you're having suicidal thoughts. It's so awesome and cool and AWESOME and cool. And I love how your author lead up to that. It's so amazing, especially how you've been having those thoughts for a while and never wrote them. What?> What are you doing? You - stop - OW! JEEZ! I WAS ONLY TRYING TO BE NICE! *runs away*

ACACIA LEE ACKLES. I DO NOT KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE SAID THIS, BUT I WILL SAY IT AGAIN. YOU ARE SO FREAKING ASTONISHINGLY AMAZING AND YOU JUST GET MORE AND MORE AMAZING AND LETTERS TO RYAN IS AMAZING AND I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE IT. YOU ROCK AND THIS ROCKS AND EVERYtHING ROCKS. And I just see Letters to Ryan as a kickass movie and everyonre crying and its just so COOL. AND YOU ROCK. AND you develop and show and start relationsihps and foreshadow and you just do EVERYTHING a writer should and it's just like "HOLY GAHH!!" And I'm just running out of words here and you are just so amazing and I just don't know what to say, miracle writer, becuase I feel like I want to say more but I don't know what and I want you to GO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS and good night and I love you and - CHOMP.

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

My deleted review for the last chapter written for LTR

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HOLY SHITAKE MUSHROOMS WITH FUDGER NUTS ON TOP!!!!!!!!!!!!

I. CANNOT. THINK. I CANNOT. BREATH. I CANNOT ... RYAN OH MY GOD! WHY ON EARTH?! DON'T THINK ABOUT SUICIDE AND I KNOW THAT YOU'RE LIVING JUST TO LIVE, ER AT LEAST HAVE THAT FEELING! BUT YOU WERE HERE ON EARTH FOR A REASON AND YEA YOU'RE DYING BUT LET YOUR LIFE RUN ITS COURSE, DON'T DISRUPT IT AND DROWN YOURSELF!!!!

I KNOW I'M NOT MAKING ANY SENSE, BUT I'M TIRED, AND SHOCKED AND OH MY GOD RYAN!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, YOU ARE AWESOME AND AMAZING AND I'M GOING TO CRY MY HEAD OFF FOR HOURS WHEN YOU DIE AND I DON'T WANT TO READ THAT YOU KILLED YOURSELF!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T JUMP OUT THE WINDOW OR DOWN A BOTTLE OF PILLS OR CUT YOURSELF!!!!!! DON'T DO ANY OF THAT, PLEASE! YOU ARE SMARTER THAN THAT AND I LOVE YOU AND YOU ARE AWESOME AND FANTASTIC!!!!!!! YOU ARE LIKE A DIFFERENT VERSION OF MY LITTLE SISTER AND YOU CANNOT JUST GO OFF AND KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!!!! Okay, I might just have to make a shirt for Letters To Ryan altogether because it is soooo good!!!

YOU BETTER GET THIS PUBLISHED ACACIA OTHERWISE I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND USE MY JEDI POWERS ON YOU!!!!!!!!

GAH!!!!! I'M STILL STUNNED AND SHOCKED AND JUST GRAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHAGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHGAHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHG!!!!

MARLIE GET YOUR BOOTIE OVER TO THE HOSPITAL RIGHT NOW BEFORE RYAN DECIDES TO DROWN HERSELF AGAIN!!!! YOU HAVE TO GET OVER NOW OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AS WELL!!!!! I DON'T CARE IF COLLEGE IS A BIG PROBLEM, SCREW COLLEGE!!!!! YOUR BEST FRIEND IS DYING!!!!!

Okay, I think the caps is over with. This chapter was soooo good and had me on the edge of my seat, I couldn't believe that! I'm still freaking out and just. I don't know, I can't explain anything! I mean I guess I can but it won't really describe what I want to say.

This was written so well, and it's soooo very emotional and I love it. It's hard to believe that you're only 13! 13!!!! That's crazy!!!!! If I never knew that or knew you and I picked it up, I would think an adult wrote this! You are a miracle writer, like Sella says because you can do just about anything you want with your writing! You're magical and godly. Yea, godly is a good word! You are a writing goddess that can do anything you want!!!

Oh and to add on to what Sella also said. You are foreshadowing how Ryan is changing and what's happening and in Marlie's world. It just gives me chills about what happens next and I just can't wait! I really don't want Ryan to die, and I'm still trying to figure out how Marlie goes to jail!

RYAN I LOVE YOU AND I WANT TO GIVE YOU A GIANT HUG AND IF I COULD I WOULD MAKE A CURE FOR YOUR DISEASE THAT WAY YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE AND YOU'D GROW UP AND HAVE A REALLY AWESOME LIFE, GET MARRIED, HAVE KIDS, AND JUST YEA!!!!! OH I LOVE YOU RYAN AND I WISH WERE REAL SOMETIMES AND SOMETIMES I FORGET THAT YOU AREN'T REAL BECAUSE THIS FEELS ALL SOOOO REAL AND JUST ACK!!!!!! I LOVE YOU RYAN!!!!!! DON'T GO ALL EMO ON US AGAIN!!!!!!!

NOW I MUST GO TO BED!!!!!

p.s. Sorry Sella! I'll read the Outcast chapters tomorrow! And I promise to write a super long review!

p.p.s. ACACIA WRITE MORE NOW!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AFTER THIS
!!!!!!! HOW MUCH LONGER DOES RYAN HAVE TO LIVE?!?!!?!?!?!?!

[Sella]

LOL Krista! I love you. I better watch out, because you're starting to beat me with reviews! XD

And it's fine, about Outcast! :D haha.

[♫Huneeya♥]

i kno i'm completely off topic but...I JUST FINISHED READING THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS SERIES AND ITS AMAZING AND AWESOME AND I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT EXCEPT FOR THE CHEESINESS OF THE EPILOGUE OF CITY OF GLASS BUT BESIDES THAT ITS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AND I'M SO HAPPY WITH THE ENDING!! YAYYY!!! :DDD AND IS IT TRUE THAT THERES GOING 2 BE A FOURTH BOOK?!?! caz it rly seemed like the story had ended :P

[Acacia]

Have I ever told you guys how awesome you are?

[[deleted user]]

Nopeee!! Hahah. I know you weren't talking to me, but it was such a good time to jump in. :)

Huneeya...OMG I AGREE I LOOOOVE THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS..THEY ARE LIKE BAH!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!! yes indeedy there will be another book!!!!!

Oh my. Too many chapters to read. I'll read them after I do my hw and go to soccer practice. :'( poor me. I have sports everyday again. KILL ME. No, actually I like being alive. On that note, I will finish this randomly long post. xD

[Sella]

Acacia wrote: "Have I ever told you guys how awesome you are?"

Yes, you have, in fact. Many times. XD

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

What Sella said. :P

[Acacia]

Haha. Well, I'll say it again. And Abbee, of course you're awesome too! :D

[Sella]

Abbee and Krista would be even more awesome than they already are if they read and commented on the two new Outcast chappies. :P

[Acacia]

Haha. Yeah, they would. GUYS! READ THEM! GRARL!

[Sella]

Why thank you for your support. XD

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Chapter 30 review. I'm not sure why it got deleted, it's not that long and it's one of my bad reviews ...

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Sella, I am sorry for the wait. My computer was being a butt and decided to randomly shut off all internet tabs, again! Gah! I need wifi ...

Anyhoo, the story....

I kind of miss the acting Caleb, I dunno why but it just was like him and it's sooo different for him to be like nice and caring and not really arrogant. I mean I love the new er old Caleb, but like I said another part of me misses him ... Hmm. I'll get used to it ...

So Caleb was living on the streets? That makes sense, but wouldn't like after his parent's death the law go after him and place him in a foster family? And what about school? How did Caleb like pay the phone company and recieve bills? That part was just a tad confusing...

Lavender has become very googoo eyes over Caleb. She's not helping much either. I agree with Caleb, he's still grieving over his bestie friend and doesn't need another love! At least not yet ... I think that makes sense ... I don't think it does ... hmm.

Ah okay! I'm running out of things to say for this chapter ... I want to read the next, which I will so um yea ... I'm going to end this comment now ...

No wait!

I LOVE THIS MORE THAN ANTONE ELSE EXCEPT ACACIA BECAUSE SOME HOW WE BOTH ENDED UP WITH RIGHTS TO OUTCAST!!!!! GRRRREEEEAAAT JOOOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Sella wrote: "Abbee and Krista would be even more awesome than they already are if they read and commented on the two new Outcast chappies. :P"

You cannot rush perfection. :P

Anyways here's a much better review for chappie 31!

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Ahem, prepare for the most immature and most mind blowing review you will ever read. Or not. It's not going to be that mind blowing or maybe it will be ... You will see as will I because I still need to write it. Okay! Enough of my rambling.

Um let's see, where to begin. Uh let's start with immature part.

“Aw, come on.” Caleb winked. “You don't have to be five to enjoy yourself. Do it with me? Please?”

If I didn't know he was talking about hide and seek I would be thinking well, Do it with me? Please?" You understand, right? Anyways, I just started laughing my head off so much because of that. It just made my day because yea I'm immature and I think icky things like that. My brother asked why I was laughing and so I read that part to him ... Oh wow. You should have seen his face... XP

PSSHAWZ! LAVENDER! THAT IS NOT GOOD! I LOVE HIDE-AND-GO-SEEK!!!!!!!! IT IS LIKE AMAZING AND JUST I LOVE THAT GAME!!! I STILL PLAY IT! AND CHEATING?! YOU HAVE PLANT POWERS, DON'T WASTE THEM! :P AND AWWWWWWW I LOVED CALEB BECAUSE HE WAS A LITTLE CONCEITED WITH HIS RULES BUT THAT MAKES HIM ALL LOVABLE BECAUSE WE KNOW HE WAS JOKING AND YEA! AND I LOVE HIM SOOOOO .........

Okay, now I must yell at Lavender again. STOP REMINDING CALEB ABOUT ALL THAT! IT HURTS HIM AND I DON'T LIKE IT WHEN CALEB IS UNHAPPY!!!! AND HE LOST JULIA WHO HE LOVED AND YOU AREN'T HELPING YOUNG LADY!!!! WAIT A WHILE LONGER!!!! LET HIM RECOVER GOSH DARNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!

And now ....

HOLY SHITAKE MUSHROOMS!!!!!!!!!!! CALEB FOUND THE TRADERS!!!!!!!!!!! BUT WHICH TRADERS?!!?!?!?1?1?1?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
HOLY MOLY MACARONI AND JUST GAHHHH!!!!! THEY FOUND THEM!!!! GRAH!!!! I'M DUMBFOUNDED AND SHOCKED AND MIND BLOWN AND JUST .....

SELLA. MOMMY. DEAR. YOU. MUST. WRITE. MORE. RIGHT. NOW.

YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!
And now homework awaits no wait ...

I LOVE THIS MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE EXCEPT ACACIA BECAUSE THE WHOLE DIBBS THING AND STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!

[♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P]

Haha. I just read Brigid's comment. We were on the same page with the "Do it with me? Please?"

[Sella]

♫Krista♫ wrote: "Sella wrote: "Abbee and Krista would be even more awesome than they already are if they read and commented on the two new Outcast chappies. :P"

You cannot rush perfection. :P

Anyways here's a..."

Hahahaha!!! I LOVE YOU KRISTA!! XD XDXD And OMG, I didn't even realize how wrong that sentence was when I wrote it. :LP Should I change it? hhaah.