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Nov 19, 2009 08:58PM
Anyone read my story, its for an assignment and i want it to be good
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But - but - but - but - but - we're all going to die! I RAN OUT OF FOODS! Nooooooooooooo! *sobs*"
AIIIIEEE!"
That is a funny noise. ORANGATAN!

YAY!

Read or I will stab you with my 'Holly Reserved' pichfork.
only kidding :P
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Read or I will stab you with my 'Holly Reserved' pichfork.
only kidding :P
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."
Ahh I have to catch up!!

youve only read chapter 1 so i think that would take you about 5 hours. take your time and write more 300!!!!
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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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Sella wrote: "Pssh fine. :P I'm about to post the next chapter, actually ... haha."
It's been 51 minutes . . . lol sry just had to point that out.
It's been 51 minutes . . . lol sry just had to point that out.
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Kim wrote: "YAY!"
It took me ten minutes to figure out that you were Kim. I feel really stupid at the moment.
It took me ten minutes to figure out that you were Kim. I feel really stupid at the moment.
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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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Chapter Nine of In the Reality:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
read, comment, like! :) thanx a ton! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
read, comment, like! :) thanx a ton! :D

I never look at the name either, I always just look at the picture. So whenever someone changes their picture, it takes me a while to realize they're the same person, and another while to adjust to their comments being the same. XD

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
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Sella wrote: "♫Krista♫ wrote: "I know, but I never looked at the name . . ."
I never look at the name either, I always just look at the picture. So whenever someone changes their picture, it takes me a while to..."
Same here!
I never look at the name either, I always just look at the picture. So whenever someone changes their picture, it takes me a while to..."
Same here!
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Abbee wrote: "Chapter Nine of In the Reality:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
read, comment, like! :) thanx a ton! :D"
I MUST READ THAT SOON!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
read, comment, like! :) thanx a ton! :D"
I MUST READ THAT SOON!

i got tired of looking at myself."
xD funny kim
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i seriously did though.
plus i want a picture of how i look now with my new hair cut but i look really bad at the moment becuase of NaNo so i cant take a picture until i stop looking like a zombie..
LOL. yes, Krista read that soon!

Abbee: THANKS SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ON MY STORY!! did u actually read all the way through? any suggestions on how i can make it better?
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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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Last night I finished chapter 12, but I have to edit it before I post it. There are a ton of spelling errors, and I have to fix up the ending.

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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."
YAY! I LOVE YOU!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."
I LOVE IT MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE!

Okay, sorry. But it really should go eat itself.
Anyways ... here's the review I wrote for ch. 17 of AFH that goodreads DELETED because it was too long! :P
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AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOOODDD@1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I. AM. SO. FREAKING. GLAD. I. GOT. CUSTODY. OF. THIS. STORY. YESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
AHAHAHHA!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO HILARIOUS AND SO AMAZINGLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD YOU ARE SO GOOD AT ROMANCE AND HUMOR!!!!!!!! AHH I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!
I love the title of this chapter. So funny. XD
Heehee. Derek's going cra-zy, he's going cra-zy. XD
I love Fitz so much, but I'm starting to like Derek too. Aahh!! Haha. Fitz is SO hilarous in this chapter. ("Hot?" Fitz suggested. "Sexy, maybe? Or perhaps you were about to say 'amazingly awesome and kind of unrealistically gorgeous.'" OMG I WAS CRACKING UP!!)
I LOVE the conversations between Derek and Sloane!! They talk awesomely. I LOVE how you're slowly, gradually developing their relationship. It's SO amazing. And I love how you're starting to hint that Sloane is falling in love with him. It's just so GENIUS and amazing and GAH YOU'RE SO TALENTED AT THIS!!
MORE! MORE! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I REALLY DON'T WANT TO EAT YOU BECAUSE THEN THERE WOULD BE NO MORE AMAZING AFH!!
I LOVE YOU DAUGHTER!! XD

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5..."
I LOVE IT MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE BESIDES HOLLY!
I loved Holly's and Acacia's new chapters (sadly) less than Sella and Holly. :)
Huneeya: Actually I have been reading your story since the beginning, I just forgot to comment every time until today. Sorry! :)
Huneeya: Actually I have been reading your story since the beginning, I just forgot to comment every time until today. Sorry! :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

I LOVE IT MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE!
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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IKR!?!?! And holy guacamole!!! 850 new comments!?!?!? I'm sorry, but there's no way on God's green earth that I'm going to read all of those!!!!!
But hey, guys, guess what! I'm on Facebook!!!
But hey, guys, guess what! I'm on Facebook!!!
No way! Really, Jess? I'm gonna go find you.
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Wait, what's your last name again?