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♫Krista♫, the Great and Powerful Empress of Silliness :P
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Oct 19, 2009 05:22PM
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Hi, everyone :)I've added a new chapter to my story if any of you wish to check it out....
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Thanks a bunch
Abbee *abz* wrote: "Holly, Jess. If its 11 Acacia's time, its 11 my time too. i might be on a little late soo...ya. I have a soccer game an hour away at 8. it'll take me awhile to get home. "i need 2 figure out what time it would be over here ><
lemme think... we're gmt+2...what time zone is texas?
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Indi, the Empress of Maturity. God knows, we need one of them!
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Yes! I finished chapter 13 for Fallen, please, please read and leave a comment :Phttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Next chapter!! But be warned, it's pretty short, and I think it's actually pretty boring. Still, though.http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Acacia, you're going to hate me for this, but I think Jasmyn should die.
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That would make a very good twist and a lot more dramatic. That's actually a really good idea.
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."
YAYZ!
Holly wrote: "Acacia, you're going to hate me for this, but I think Jasmyn should die."Any particular reason?
I know, I'm starting to think so too.
One Last Time:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
It's 567 words. A short read. Let me know what you think!
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Acacia wrote: "Holly wrote: "Acacia, you're going to hate me for this, but I think Jasmyn should die."Any particular reason?"
Your ending would be too happy otherwise.
:P. Your just so optimistic aren't you Holls?
Humph. If you can call it that. You remind of my brother though. Whenever I call him pessimistic, he tells me he's realistic.
ah true ^^
as much as i love happy endings in real life, theyre just too unrealistic in books.
as much as i love happy endings in real life, theyre just too unrealistic in books.
Not if you make it somewhat good...
ya i guess but unfortunately a lot of books ive read that have them are really bad, idk its just better with not happy endings
ya, but HP had an ok ending...
actually i loved the HP ending, the best bittersweet ending ever!! but im biased because i am absolutely obsessed with everything harry! lol
Holly wrote: "Acacia wrote: "Holly wrote: "Acacia, you're going to hate me for this, but I think Jasmyn should die."Any particular reason?"
Your ending would be too happy otherwise."
That's true. And I'm actually warming up to the whole idea. I'm wondering now how exactly to do it.
Have her get stuck in the building before they explode it. Little Jasmyn would be toast.
Yes, but how would she get stuck? Hmm. I'll figure it out somehow. Although I'm getting a little depressed just thinking about killing her.
Holly wrote: "She reminds me a lot of someone..."What do you mean?
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♫Krista♫ wrote: "Make it uberly dramatic, if you decide to kill her."But of course.
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I kinda can't wait for her death now. Is that bad?
Naw. After all, I'm looking forward to the deaths in Holly's story.
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And I like happy endings! Just as long as they're still realistic. Nothing can be too happy, but happy endings are good! After all, in Phases, Libby is going to go through lots of bad stuff, but she lives. She goes into a coma for a few months, but she lives. She's not very happy with me about the coma thing though.... I thought about killing her and making her like Callie, but then I decided against it because it would screw up the rest of the plot and I'd have no idea where to go with the story, so yeah. She's still pissed about missing practically her entire summer vacation though, lol... =)
Anyway. I don't think you should kill her. I mean, I kind of like the idea, but then, hasn't Caitlin been through enough? Do you want your audience to hate you? She wouldn't have any best friends. The two people who were supposed to have known her best, who'd she'd grown up with, the people who kept her grounded throughout the years now both gone? That's gonna suck for her. A lot. Besides, you already got rid of one, do you really want to get rid of the other? It'd be different if you got rid of them at the same time.
Which is pretty much exactly what I was thinking. And yet...I really like the idea. Graaar. I'm gonna sleep on it. >.<
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Acacia wrote: "Naw. After all, I'm looking forward to the deaths in Holly's story."I know you are, Acacia darling. Especially the one that we shall not mention, for it be so secretive that no one can ever know and will never see coming. I'M looking forward to that one.
I like sad endings or sometimes bittersweet ending. Rarely happy endings. I like sad books. Sometimes.
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I know you are, Acacia darling. Especially the one that we shall not mention, for it be so secretive that no ..."
uh oh.
happy endings...eh. like the book i finished last nite was happy, but unrealistic, rushed, and just plain bad.
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