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message 1: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oooooooo Emmeline - this is amazing!!!!!!


message 2: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!


message 3: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
!!!!!!!!!!!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I really think this is great, Emmeline!!! Do you mind CC:

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message 5: by em_panada (new)

em_panada @Julane - I see your point, it was just the only thing I could come up with at the moment XD. So it's more temporary. But, thanks for your input! Some names stick, some names don't. I'm glad you like it though! I was a bit worried.

I'll post more tomorrow.


message 6: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
I kinda like, it, but I see what you mean Julane.......





Yes!


message 7: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O

SOOOOO different from what I expected!!!!


Just one CC:

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message 8: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oh, and also, are ya doing the picture story thing with Alice and I? You can if ya want - in fact I think it would be really fun to have another person!! I've already started mine!:D Don't look, though! Not until we all are done!


message 9: by em_panada (new)

em_panada @Ruby - oh thanks! I'll get that changed. As for the picture story, I want to make a few changes before I post it.


message 10: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:D Mmkay!!


Ooooo more more more more!


message 11: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:O



I love Matty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D


message 12: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
OMIGOSH THAT IS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 13: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooo


message 14: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:D This is so goooood!!!!


message 15: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh more!!!!


oooo and for some CC:

'Which is fine, but after a while it looses it's charm.'

'loses' not 'looses'

Other than that - :D :D :D


message 16: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Haha! Beautiful typos.

- I guess that's what happens when you write on your phone. XD


message 17: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD


message 18: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
MORE!!!!!!


message 19: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooo I love it so much!!!! This is a really good story!

Just a bit of helpful CC again! XD

'Matty lead her down to a smaller building where she opened the door.'

Instead of 'lead' 'led' is the correct spelling

aaaaaand

'...she explained how hard it is to enter into a craft you didn't inherit by birth, and told Gwendolyn about all the possibilities that lied for a wood carver...'

Instead of 'lied' 'lay' is the past tense


Other than that - MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!


message 20: by em_panada (last edited Nov 02, 2014 01:31PM) (new)

em_panada Darn, I really need to start editing before I post. Oh the crimes of the first draft!! XD


message 21: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD


message 22: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oooooooooo loverly loverly loverly!


message 23: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:O


message 24: by em_panada (new)

em_panada (Hey guys! So I deleted parts of my story on here because it's doing better than I expected, and I just don't want anyone to steal it. So, I won't be posting anymore, but I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I hope one day you will be able to read the entire thing -without those annoying grammar mishaps- but yeah. Thanks for your support and everything! You guys are amazing!)


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