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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments No problem


message 3: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Oct 21, 2014 02:23PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sure

I'm suppose to be evil. Don't you see?

Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?


I know this is a killer here I really would love to be Girl A.
Another thing is I'm trying to become more detail so I would love someone who can push me to be detail.
Also someone who is active I understand people have life's outside of goodreads.
Anyone?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Yes please


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Name: Aaliyah
Species: Witch
Age: 17
Nic-Name: Lily
Apperance:



Personailty:

Caring
Thoughtful
Head-strong
Cautious
Scared

Likes:

Books
Music
Light
Good boys
Family

Dislikes:

Power
Bad boys
Darkness

Family:
King Teddy/father
Queen Carla/mother
Prince Chris/brother

Wants: She doesn't want to be evil. She is fighting the growing darkness inside of her. She would do anything to help her kingdom. One day she wants to be able to make a difference in the lives of people. She hopes that the pepole will like her.

History:TBRP


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Okay you shall go first?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sorry I meant who shall go first thats okay


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments okay I won't be on tonight I'm going to my best friends


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Yeah and thats fine


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments It doesn't matter :)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Aaliyah laid on her bed and slept soundly or as much as she could. She didn't like the weird stares that people gave her but her parents understood partly or at least she thought they did. They blocked her powers with heavy magic but as the days she grew more and more stronger the binding wouldn't stay as long as they hoped. She was knew that her parents would disown her. She kept it in for so long. She didn't know if her powers could stay locked in for much longer. Her parents were using her as a weapon.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She heard a noise but shook it off thinking it was the wind. She wouldn't think anyone would kidnap her for her power. She thought it was pointless and stupid. She looked down and sighed some. The princess slept off into a deep sleep not thinking about anything else but sleep. She was smile a little bit. Aaliyah was innocence but her power wasn't.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Well Aaliyah was wrong like always. She should of looked at that noise. She kept struggling but it was no use to her. It wasn't like anyone would care that she was gone. The thought of whoever took her was scary because they must know she has power. And who ever it was wanted power. The problem was is that she didn't know if she could prove that she had power.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((sorry never got the notification))

Aaliyah looked at him. "Please let me go I can't use my powers. They are too dark." She whispered she looked at him. She felt the darkness come over her. "Let me go." She said she pushed her powers in. After not letting go the pain was too much for her to bare. She winced at the pain as she didn't move.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "More grief and pain is what a monster like me deserves fully."She whispered softly. Her powers were coming out as she was angry. "Let me go." She said as her eyes flickered black


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm not using my powers." She said but the powers were coming. "Stop it your hurting me." She said as she let fire flow through her. She zapped him. Her eyes were black as she was shaking. "Please stop my powers are too dangerous."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her eyes widened as she stumbled back. "Shut up." She said. The sky was darkening and turning a dark black. Wind started to pick up. It kept growing and growing. She was angry. Her power took over her. "Stop stop." She shouted.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Its fine))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((No problem))


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