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Fire in the Blood
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Fire in the Blood - For those of you who couldn't put it down
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That remains to be seen.
But on the base level, since Oghma's true Neutral, I don't think he cares too much about a deal with a devil. I think he'd probably mostly be annoyed at the distraction--but he's been content to wait Dahl out for the better part of a decade, so maybe not.
In some way I can see him being like, "Ooh. New challenge. How are you going to get around THIS one, wayward son?"
But one thing I like about the current take on the Realms is that they prefer the gods being mysterious and indirect. Putting the interpretation of their desires and goals and reactions in the hands of their mortal followers. If there's a god in the pantheon such a mindset is suited to, it's Oghma. "I gave you a brain--use it!"
But on the base level, since Oghma's true Neutral, I don't think he cares too much about a deal with a devil. I think he'd probably mostly be annoyed at the distraction--but he's been content to wait Dahl out for the better part of a decade, so maybe not.
In some way I can see him being like, "Ooh. New challenge. How are you going to get around THIS one, wayward son?"
But one thing I like about the current take on the Realms is that they prefer the gods being mysterious and indirect. Putting the interpretation of their desires and goals and reactions in the hands of their mortal followers. If there's a god in the pantheon such a mindset is suited to, it's Oghma. "I gave you a brain--use it!"

At first I didn't like Raedra when I read the sample chapter but I started to like her as the book progressed. She was definitely the true heir but the succession question isn't entirely settled yet unless she produces heirs or her cousin does (I didn't see any indication that he has kids but he might, I guess).


Raedra's situation is different from Elizabeth I's in that when she marries (if she marries), her husband has no claim to the throne. Cormyr has had a lot more kings than queens, and several queens have deferred to a male relation, but the throne doesn't preferentially go to the male heir the way it did for Elizabeth. And specifically a husband would be styled as 'King' but would effectively be a king/prince consort without ruling power, if I'm understanding the lore correctly, whereas in Elizabeth's time, he would have been king regnant.
I think she'd get married--she doesn't want Erzoured to gain a claim to the throne, even as regent for a child. But I think she's going to wait for a guy who's definitely not in it for the throne and who understands that he is always, always coming second to her job. That might mean another arrangement like she and Brin had, but I hope she finds a decent partner who appreciates her.
I think she'd get married--she doesn't want Erzoured to gain a claim to the throne, even as regent for a child. But I think she's going to wait for a guy who's definitely not in it for the throne and who understands that he is always, always coming second to her job. That might mean another arrangement like she and Brin had, but I hope she finds a decent partner who appreciates her.

Zoonie was awesome, and probably my favorite addition to the cast. I'm happiest with Dahl and Fari getting a clue about how they feel about each other. That's been driving me nuts since the first time they met. As for Dahl and Oghma, I get the impression that Dahl isn't supposed to be a paladin and that Oghma has a different plan for him.

This is, I suppose, the point where I can confess that Dahl has been "in" the series since the "tiefling book" pitch. That was originally a stand-alone story, which had an older Farideh and Havilar, no Brin, and a waaaaay less interesting Lorcan called Barbas. When they asked me to make it into a series, I decided I had to put Dahl off by a book to better build up Farideh. And he's chnaged from there--just like everyone has, but it's been a little weird how much people assume he's a side character who's going to drop out any book now, when he's never been that. :p NOW YOU KNOW!
Torradin341: I'm working on Ashes of the Tyrants right now. I don't actually know the release date, but I assume it's next Fall/Winter.
Torradin341: I'm working on Ashes of the Tyrants right now. I don't actually know the release date, but I assume it's next Fall/Winter.

I really loved this book! I think it's the strongest of the series so far. It's got so much character development, so many high stakes and tense scenes and impossible decisions, tempered with enough humor and touching moments to keep it from getting excruciating. While I liked The Adversary, it felt dreary and muddled, and it was at times difficult to follow. This book had just as much going on as The Adversary, but it felt more organized and less overwhelming.
I guess I'll be the first to start speculating on the loophole in Lorcan and Dahl's contract: Lorcan never said Dahl couldn't write to Farideh. And hey, look at that, Dahl's got a shiny little bottle of ink especially for love letters. HMMMMM. :) I'm not asking for author confirmation on that; it'll be a long wait to the next book, and speculation is fun.

I was thinking about the ink that Dahl had in his back and agree that is a potential way around the agreement. Extremely interested to see were this all goes.


I am also very excited to see how Dahl exploits all the loopholes in Lorcan's (surprisingly sloppy) contract. I'd have to re-read the wording, but I think a telepathy spell would be a valid work-around. Also passing notes, exchanging letters, speaking through someone (tell so-n-so I said...) and a few other things come to mind right away. In fact, I think as long as someone else was in the same room for Dahl to be speaking to, they might be able to communicate quite easily, though that could be pretty risky.
Well, let me give you a teeny boost more: There's a sixth one planned and the working title (which my editor loves so I'm hopeful it stays) is King of Dust.
As for the deal--Dahl's got no idea what he's specifically agreed to. He doesn't have a contract in hand, after all. There's certainly a line, and Lorcan's certainly made this deal when he was not in a state to be making careful agreements so definitely loopholes, but the forfeit of guessing wrong is his immortal soul. Also the mail service between Harrowdale and Djerad Thymar is notoriously unreliable. :p
But I was maybe a little obvious with the ink.
As for the deal--Dahl's got no idea what he's specifically agreed to. He doesn't have a contract in hand, after all. There's certainly a line, and Lorcan's certainly made this deal when he was not in a state to be making careful agreements so definitely loopholes, but the forfeit of guessing wrong is his immortal soul. Also the mail service between Harrowdale and Djerad Thymar is notoriously unreliable. :p
But I was maybe a little obvious with the ink.


As for Lorcan, i think his main motivations for his actions towards Farideh are Glasya and Asmodeus's higher purposes. But I would say he does have some kind of creepy, unhealthy, selfish feelings for her. He is half human after all.
Just FYI: I'm doing an AMA on Reddit today. https://www.reddit.com/r/Fantasy/comm...
My biggest fears in order:
1. No questions.
2. Few questions, including my grandma who asks whether I'm going to hurry up with another great-grandchild already.
3. I forget my password again, cannot log in to answer. :p
My biggest fears in order:
1. No questions.
2. Few questions, including my grandma who asks whether I'm going to hurry up with another great-grandchild already.
3. I forget my password again, cannot log in to answer. :p

That gets uncovered more explicitly in the next two books. Hopefully without spoiling anything this is what you might know by now:
1. Bryseis Kakistos engineered the twins' birth so that she could be resurrected. But that went poorly because they twinned. She'd anchored her soul to the zygote and when it split, it ripped her apart. The two anchor points remained behind and now those pieces are contained within Farideh and Havilar.
2. She wants to come back because she's pissed at Asmodeus. She feels he betrayed her--and the details of this are actually in the Adversary's epilogue. She was promised a place at Asmodeus's right hand, but then he dawdled about it and she decided to betray him. He engineered her death and told her she had to be patient. She was not patient (for reasons...) and went with this resurrection plan, which went awry. And then the Sundering came and so Asmodeus imbued Bryseis Kakistos as his Chosen...but Bryseis Kakistos is dead and in parts so that power is split up. Farideh and Havilar received a big portion of those powers, and what BK got, she can't tap because she can't remember how to work it. So from Asmodeus's point of view, he's given Bryseis Kakistos what he promised. If she'd just been patient, she would have been the kind of Chosen you imagine when you hear the word--fear effect, burning angel visage, imp minions, and more. Their deal is done, and she's even more pissed.
3. But she doesn't remember how to get back at him. And honestly, she doesn't remember everything about why she wants to and what she planned to do--as you see in this book, she's forgotten Alyona. (Who is Alyona? NEXT BOOKS.)
4. Asmodeus is not screwing around with that though. He knows that Bryseis Kakistos knows how to steal his godhood, but he's banking on the fact she can't--not so long as the twins are alive and not on her side. He also knows that there are archdevils who are incautious enough to throw in with Bryseis Kakistos--he can't let them figure out what's going on.
5. Glasya has cottoned to the fact that something is awry here. The twins are Chosen and yet they don't really embody anything about her father's worship. They probably could--but they noticeably don't. She's not going to do anything too dangerous, but addressing the non-corruption is something Asmodeus can't complain about. Not without tipping his hand. So she doesn't particularly care about Farideh. She's watching Lorcan and Asmodeus at this point.
1. Bryseis Kakistos engineered the twins' birth so that she could be resurrected. But that went poorly because they twinned. She'd anchored her soul to the zygote and when it split, it ripped her apart. The two anchor points remained behind and now those pieces are contained within Farideh and Havilar.
2. She wants to come back because she's pissed at Asmodeus. She feels he betrayed her--and the details of this are actually in the Adversary's epilogue. She was promised a place at Asmodeus's right hand, but then he dawdled about it and she decided to betray him. He engineered her death and told her she had to be patient. She was not patient (for reasons...) and went with this resurrection plan, which went awry. And then the Sundering came and so Asmodeus imbued Bryseis Kakistos as his Chosen...but Bryseis Kakistos is dead and in parts so that power is split up. Farideh and Havilar received a big portion of those powers, and what BK got, she can't tap because she can't remember how to work it. So from Asmodeus's point of view, he's given Bryseis Kakistos what he promised. If she'd just been patient, she would have been the kind of Chosen you imagine when you hear the word--fear effect, burning angel visage, imp minions, and more. Their deal is done, and she's even more pissed.
3. But she doesn't remember how to get back at him. And honestly, she doesn't remember everything about why she wants to and what she planned to do--as you see in this book, she's forgotten Alyona. (Who is Alyona? NEXT BOOKS.)
4. Asmodeus is not screwing around with that though. He knows that Bryseis Kakistos knows how to steal his godhood, but he's banking on the fact she can't--not so long as the twins are alive and not on her side. He also knows that there are archdevils who are incautious enough to throw in with Bryseis Kakistos--he can't let them figure out what's going on.
5. Glasya has cottoned to the fact that something is awry here. The twins are Chosen and yet they don't really embody anything about her father's worship. They probably could--but they noticeably don't. She's not going to do anything too dangerous, but addressing the non-corruption is something Asmodeus can't complain about. Not without tipping his hand. So she doesn't particularly care about Farideh. She's watching Lorcan and Asmodeus at this point.

This is how I envision devils.
So demons are easy--let's start there. Demons corrupt to cause chaos, which ultimately means destruction. Break it all down to it's component molecules and move on. Slow or speedy, most demons follow this pattern. Which makes sense--they're predators, devourers. They are the wolves and mortals are the sheep.
Devils, on the other hand, do their best work when playing off the status quo. What do you want? What do you yearn for? What has the world kept from you? If society doesn't create things for you to crave, create structures that keep you from grabbing what you want, then their job's harder. Which, to me, makes Asmodeus's godhood make sense--he needs people alive to keep society in place, to find the people who can be corrupted or culled. If he can draw power from the living as well as the dead, he's in a much better position.
So if the demons are the wolves, the devils are the shepherds. Make no mistake--the end of this story is fresh mutton no matter who gets to the sheep first--but the shepherds want the sheep alive as long as they're useful. So all this complexity is in their favor.
So demons are easy--let's start there. Demons corrupt to cause chaos, which ultimately means destruction. Break it all down to it's component molecules and move on. Slow or speedy, most demons follow this pattern. Which makes sense--they're predators, devourers. They are the wolves and mortals are the sheep.
Devils, on the other hand, do their best work when playing off the status quo. What do you want? What do you yearn for? What has the world kept from you? If society doesn't create things for you to crave, create structures that keep you from grabbing what you want, then their job's harder. Which, to me, makes Asmodeus's godhood make sense--he needs people alive to keep society in place, to find the people who can be corrupted or culled. If he can draw power from the living as well as the dead, he's in a much better position.
So if the demons are the wolves, the devils are the shepherds. Make no mistake--the end of this story is fresh mutton no matter who gets to the sheep first--but the shepherds want the sheep alive as long as they're useful. So all this complexity is in their favor.
Rachel wrote: "That clears some stuff up now. So Farideh and Havilar aren't exactly chosen? Bryseis Kakistos is. My question is, who were Farideh and Havilar's biological parents? Where did they exactly come f..."
Later books! :)
Their parents are named in The Adversary epilogue: Adastreia and Chiridion.
Later books! :)
Their parents are named in The Adversary epilogue: Adastreia and Chiridion.


Tiamet's presence surprised me, and the intrigue just keeps growing! Five stars, Erin!

Speaking of Lorcan, he was pretty textbook domestic abuser here, and would've been even if he hadn't slept with Farideh. It's not just the poisoning (and robbing her of her personal choices), but also the playing on her insecurities, emotional abuse, and interfering with her other relationships. The problem is, there's a strong undercurrent in YA that sees these abuses as "sexy", so I'm glad that Farideh seems smart enough to buck the trend. Hopefully that keeps going on.


I would definitely be curious how people feel about Farideh and Dahl and Lorcan going back now and re-reading the series. It definitely has looked like it's about one thing...but it's kind of about another.
Lorcan's always been pretty textbook, IMO. But until he's set next to Dahl, it's hard to see. And I wouldn't count him out entirely. He shifted hard to the devilish side here, but the tricky thing about Lorcan is that he is becoming...let's go with "less awful" by knowing Farideh. Which is another thing I've always done intentionally--it's easy to paint abusive relationships as incredibly obvious, with evil men and weak women. But that's just as dangerous (or even more) than not acknowledging them. It means when you have an actual abusive situation, it's easy to miss it because "he's a nice guy" or "he really loves her" or "she's not one of those doormats."
It's interesting because my intent was that when they are alone--aside from the stuff with being jealous of Dahl and panicking and dosing her--they're more on balance than before. He's actually backed off pretty well post-Adversary. She's controlling the boundaries for the most part--with notable exceptions, that she still manages to turn around and take charge of. But the question is, is any of that good enough?
Especially when he gets his heart stomped and falls back hard--because really, from his perspective, she dumped him over something that he didn't even really get to explain and then leaped into someone else's arms (someone she insisted she wasn't remotely interested in. To be honest, I think as easily as he can pretend he doesn't love her, he can also pretend that Dahl is just Farideh's way of punishing him.
And there's elements that would support that--she still loves Lorcan. She still kind of wishes he'd shape up. The fact that Asmodeus doesn't offer to get rid of Lorcan for her, only to make him behave better (one way or another) is telling.
This biz is definitely not done being complicated.
Lorcan's always been pretty textbook, IMO. But until he's set next to Dahl, it's hard to see. And I wouldn't count him out entirely. He shifted hard to the devilish side here, but the tricky thing about Lorcan is that he is becoming...let's go with "less awful" by knowing Farideh. Which is another thing I've always done intentionally--it's easy to paint abusive relationships as incredibly obvious, with evil men and weak women. But that's just as dangerous (or even more) than not acknowledging them. It means when you have an actual abusive situation, it's easy to miss it because "he's a nice guy" or "he really loves her" or "she's not one of those doormats."
It's interesting because my intent was that when they are alone--aside from the stuff with being jealous of Dahl and panicking and dosing her--they're more on balance than before. He's actually backed off pretty well post-Adversary. She's controlling the boundaries for the most part--with notable exceptions, that she still manages to turn around and take charge of. But the question is, is any of that good enough?
Especially when he gets his heart stomped and falls back hard--because really, from his perspective, she dumped him over something that he didn't even really get to explain and then leaped into someone else's arms (someone she insisted she wasn't remotely interested in. To be honest, I think as easily as he can pretend he doesn't love her, he can also pretend that Dahl is just Farideh's way of punishing him.
And there's elements that would support that--she still loves Lorcan. She still kind of wishes he'd shape up. The fact that Asmodeus doesn't offer to get rid of Lorcan for her, only to make him behave better (one way or another) is telling.
This biz is definitely not done being complicated.


Dahl on the other hand is a genuinely good person. He, like Farideh, is pretty heroic and he cares about people. He has a capacity for friendship that Lorcan really doesn't, and that's something that I think would have to be essential in a relationship with Farideh.

However if they really spend months in the wilderness tracking down the crown prince / king that would have been noticed. Also Fari and Havi seem keep track of their periods, Havi would have notived that too
So...That is the weirdest thing I'm going to call NDA for. Possibly ever. (Hopefully ever.) That detail is there for a reason, and it's not in this book.

Oh, I understand. WotC marketing determined that female warriors are more favorably received if they are particular full-bosomed and thus as part of the Sundering, Sharess is casting a secret spell to grow the breasts of all female warriors in the realms, Since Fari is a caster, she is not affected.
That's the secret reason, isn't it? :)

That's the secret reason, isn't it? :)
LOL. If that were the reason, you would have heard my head exploding halfway around the world before I ever wrote that...
Now that my schedule's slowed down a little, it occurs to me, I haven't asked my usual questions on this thread! With book club, I like to wrap up with some discussion topics about the book and how it fits into the greater line.
1. Was there anything about this that made you want to game? Any scenarios or characters you're planning on swiping? Any new urges to pick up the Realms as a setting?
2. Did this book affect the way you feel about Cormyr? (And maybe, how much experience did you have with Cormyr before this?)
3. Unlike the Sundering series, this book is not directly linked to the current RPG storyline (aside from Tiamat's cameo). Do you prefer one strategy over the other? Does this affect your interest in a novel or an RPG adventure?
LOL. If that were the reason, you would have heard my head exploding halfway around the world before I ever wrote that...
Now that my schedule's slowed down a little, it occurs to me, I haven't asked my usual questions on this thread! With book club, I like to wrap up with some discussion topics about the book and how it fits into the greater line.
1. Was there anything about this that made you want to game? Any scenarios or characters you're planning on swiping? Any new urges to pick up the Realms as a setting?
2. Did this book affect the way you feel about Cormyr? (And maybe, how much experience did you have with Cormyr before this?)
3. Unlike the Sundering series, this book is not directly linked to the current RPG storyline (aside from Tiamat's cameo). Do you prefer one strategy over the other? Does this affect your interest in a novel or an RPG adventure?

I have never played any D&D before but all these books have been making me more and more curious. I have friends that play, so once I get my back better I may have to start playing.
Any advice on character types to go with for a noob.

2. Before reading your books I avoided the realms, so I'm learning the realms through your books. That being said, Cormyr strikes me as a place to have a longer arching storyline then a dungeon of the week style of game play.
3. I'm coming to your series from comic books, and I shall tell you nothing frustrates me more then when a series I like get hijacked by a crossover event (especially a bad one). It usually results in the series dropping what it's doing to accommodate the event, even if it had nothing to do with said event in the first place. I didn't mind it so much with the adversary because I read it as book 3 of the brimstone angels rather then the sundering. Tiamat's cameo here did make me stop and re-read the paragraph. It just didn't sit right with me.

2. Other than reading Troy Denning's book the Sentinel, I didn't know much about Cormyr. After reading the book, I learned more. The kingdom does remind me of some Medieval English/French, etc kingdoms especially when it came to the succession issue. Hopefuly Cormyr doesn't end up with a War of the Roses scenario :).
3. Since I am coming to the series through books, I don't mind the RPG angle so much. If it makes sense in the book then I think it can work (Salvatore's Rise of the King put the Tiamat/Tyranny of Dragons in there for a bit and it works so far). I thought it worked pretty well in Fire in the Blood. I felt in a way that it was a teaser for bigger stuff to come.

On a somewhat different note, now whenever I hear Taylor Swift's song "Trouble", it makes me think of Lorcan and Farideh lol.
The song "Love Don't Die" by the Fray was suggested to me as the Ballad of Lorcan, and now it lives permanently on my playlists. I will have to hunt up "Trouble."
I call "Global Concepts" by Robert DeLong the Ballad of the Obarskyrs, even though it's not really appropriate in a lot of ways. I can just really see it played over a trailer of their critical scenes.
I call "Global Concepts" by Robert DeLong the Ballad of the Obarskyrs, even though it's not really appropriate in a lot of ways. I can just really see it played over a trailer of their critical scenes.
It seems like a lot of people got their copies of the book, got sucked in to what I know was probably an amazing adventure, and finished it quickly. This thread is for all of you. Feel free to come here, share your thoughts, and not have to worry about spoiling it for people like me. :)
So don't hold yourselves back!! Feel free to scream from the rooftops how much you loved the book, ask all of your questions, and silently gloat about getting to discuss it with Erin before the rest of us.
Looking forward to avoiding your spoilers :)