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message 2: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Thank you!


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments No problem


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Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Here's the plot: Girl/Boy A is having love problems all his life and has been scared to love. He doesn't want to fall in love with anybody anymore, but sadly love unpreventable. Girl/Boy B is a bakery shop owner that sells all kinds of sweets and never really seems to smile. Will Girl/Boy A be able to mend B's heart?
So who do you want to be?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Girl A if that is alright with you


message 6: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Okay this worked out well. I'll start on my character then.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Me too


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Name: Vanessa Elerge
Gender:Female
Nick Name: Nessa
Age: 18
Appearance: Her body is kissed by the sun. Her light blond hair flows down on her back which is curly. Her sea blue eyes pop out on her skin. https://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net...
Personality: She is a fun kind loving person. She is shy at first around people but once you get to know her she is full of life. She is very protective over the people she loves and cares about. She is stubborn and head strong. Her feelings don't get hurt unless she is close to the person who hurt her feelings. She doesn't really trust people
History: She always been curious about things. She doesn't follow the people around or listen to people that much. When she was little she liked to explore and get lost in the woods. She had friends but close or not. Her parents were always protective of her. She couldn't do much but read or do music. Both were viewed as pointless to her parents. Every summer she goes to her grandparents. She is a straight A student who prefers staying low but doesn't mind people.
Dislikes: she hates jocks and other mean people. She doesn't like people who nag her over and over.
Likes: she likes anything from boys to chocolate. She loves to sing and read. She loves meeting new people. She will stand up for people. Her favorite color is pink.
Other: she has a necklace of a trident that she never takes off.


message 9: by Caramel Cat (last edited Oct 08, 2014 05:48PM) (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Name: Leonardo Yuuichi
Nickname(s): Leo

Age: 20
Birth Date: 3 April
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Homosexual

Appearance:
Eye Color: Dark Blue
Hair Color: Chocolate Brown
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 162 lbs.
Blood type: A
Marks: None

Personality:Leonardo is a good listener. He doesn’t say much until the person is finished talking and when he does talk he always seems to pick the right words. He’s not an emotional person and doesn’t seem to show the different sides to people unless they somehow get close to him. He normally doesn’t smile, but when he does she seems to light up the room. He loves to quote people too when she talks sometimes. Leo loves to bake with a passion and one day hopes to take over his grandmother’s bakery in the future. He loves to help people out and lift their spirts. He is a little mysterious in a way since he likes to keep people in the dark about himself most of the time.
History: Leonardo was born in Italy and grew up there living with his parents at the time and he would live with his grandmother in Japan during the summer time and learned how to cook and bake from her enjoying himself with his grandmother. His parent began to fight more and more as he got older causing him to wish for summer to come faster so he could leave and be with his grandmother. He finally moved in with his grandmother when he graduated high school and decided he wanted to take over the bakery. He doesn’t care if his parents want him to go to college deciding against it. He discovered he had developed the skill to recreate any sweet he has eaten using the exact same recipe which is extremely amazing talent for a baker.

Family:
[Alive] (Mother) {34 years old} Rita Alberghini
[Alive] (Father) {38 years old} Kanehara Yuuichi
[Alive] (Grandmother) {74 years old} Hina Yuuichi
[Dead] Hiro Yuuichi

Crush: Open
Other: He likes stuffed animals. She also has a sweet tooth herself and loves to try new desserts.


message 10: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Finished!


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Okay do you want to start?


message 12: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Yeah I'll start.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Okay thanks


message 14: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo waited for a customer to appear, but since of the summer heat he didn't except many people to visit the shop. He had bought three fans just to keep the air flowing in the bakery. He was glad that he did because it was much cooler since all of the desserts would have been melting because of the chocolate or icing. He was glad for this fortune of good luck and promised himself not to ask for more from God not wanting to greedy for a while. He had her chief white cooking top on and a pair of blue jean shorts because of the heat. He sat and waited for a customer of her grandmother to come back from shopping for more stock of ingredients. She used a paper fan to keep himself cool as he watching the wind chime move outside the store display window. He thought about what kind of sweets he wanted to try to make today as he daydreamed waiting.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa sighed. She had to go order a stupid birthday cake for her sisters birthday party. It was all nice and everything but she didn't like talking to people at all. It was a terror for her. To make things worse is that she always picked bad relation ships all the time. She always got hurt in the end. So she had this big wall up to protect herself from people. She walked along the streets looking at the things in the windows. She was almost to the bakery. She slowly took her time dreading the moment to talk to the whoever was there. As she got to the store she was shaking. She took a deep breath she wasn't going to let nothing get to her. She stood up straight. From an oncoming person she may look a snobby person but she wasn't. She heard the little ding go off as she entered. "Hi do you know who I can order a birthday cake from?" She asked coldly


message 16: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo sat up straighter noticing a customer was coming in the bakery still fanning himself. He watched her noticing she seemed like a cold person. He guessed something happened to her in the past making her like this. He nodded saying, "Yes ma'am I do know. You can order a birthday cake from this bakery your in now from me." He pulled out a big note pad with a pen before looking back at her asking politely knowing manners were key when talking to customers or people in general, "So what kind of Birthday cake would you like ma'am and do you have an ideas for the cake?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Why was he so nice? It was very annoying and she didn't like it one bit. "I don't care what kind of cake it is." She muttered. "Its not for me make the worse you got all I'm suppose to do is order it." She said. She didn't want her to seem like she was being snobby but she really was being snobby. "Look it doesn't have to be special all it matters it is a cake." Her voice was cold everything about her was cold. She looked up at him and look blue eyes. She quickly looked down. He was just another guy who would hurt her. He was too nice and she didn't like it. She shook it off. "Give me a price." She said looking up at the note pad on the counter.


message 18: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo had dealed with customer like this before, so the whole act she didn't phase him. He nodded writing down word from word that she had wanted before asking, "Does the person with a Birthday have a name and age? It won't cost more or anything to have a name on the cake and the age for what kind of cake would be pefercet fit for the person and it's just something nicer than a 'Happy Birthday'. I also don't want to make a cake with coffee for a kid." He looked back at her before asking, "I need a name of whoever is going to pick it up and what time and day you want it done by. Oh, and how many people do you want to feed with this cake so it will be the right size? After all those questions I'll tell you the cost of the cake ma'am." He continued to fan himself since he hated how hot it was during the summer.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked down slowly. "Just have it down before this weekend and I will come and pick it up." She said softly not paying attention really. "I really just want the price so I can go." She whispered. She didn't really like being here any longer than she had too. "I don't care how much it costs." She replied. She bit her lip some more. "Can't we just hurry up with this please." She asked. She sighed some. "Fine make the cake with layers and make it look like circles and have pink light pink frosting on cake and dark on the edges and if it comes in strawberry I will have that." She said looking at him for a brief moement the cake was for her. She was having a birthday party for herself.


message 20: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo noticed her discomfort and looking down at his paper, "I'm just trying to help you have a good Birthday cake for the Birthday person, so you can calm down a little Miss. I promise I don't bite." He wrote down the replies for his question before saying as he drew a quick sketch of what she described, "I need the name of the Birthday girl or boy and your name since your picking the cake up since if I'm not here my grandmother wouldn't know to give the cake to you." He showed her the picture looking at her asking, "Is this acceptable cake ma'am?" He noticed she must have some kind of social anxiety or something because she just looked nervous since she walked into the bakery.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She took a deep breath. "Okay make the cake out to Lisa." She lied. "And the cake is fine if you could do that in ice cream cake?" She asked. "My name is Nessa." Another falsey truth. She didn't want to be here. His blue eyes for drawing her in. No she would not fall for anyone. She took a step back. "How much is the price?" She asked. She looked at her watch."Here." She handed him $100 and walked out. She took another breath and went to her apartment leaving her phone on the counter of the bakery. She didn't even know if she lost. She was just glad to be out of there and away from any boy. Tears came to her eyes. She didn't like being alone but this was a choice that she made for herself to protect herself from getting hurt. She reached for her phone and realzed it was gone. She didn't want to going to look for it. She didn't like the guy in the bakery he seemed like he was judging her like every other guy around her did.


message 22: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo was about to stop her, but he didn't want to make the situation worse. He sighed running his hand through his hair before noticing she had let her phone on the table and wondered if she was going to come back for it. He realized early on in the conversation that the girl was lying since it was obvious that the cake was for herself. He knew her name wasn't Nessa at all since he knew nobody had named their child that. The first name that came to his mind that sounded like Nessa was Vanessa. He guessed that was her name. He didn't want to look through her phone to check if that was her name of not deciding to turn the phone off to stop himself from having the temptation of looking through her phone. He decided he was going to make the best strawberry ice cream birthday he could make want to change this girls mind about people. He quickly went to the register and got the exact change for her putting her phone and change in a paper bag that had Ben written on in sharply reading Nessa putting it under the counter for when she comes. He smiled when his grandmother came back to the bakery with ingredients smiling at her before taking them out of her hands saying, "I'll take care of that for you ma. I'm going to start on a order and if a girl with tan skin and blonde hair comes in tell me." He went into the back now having a passion to cook her a cake for this girl.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She sighed some and bit her lip. She got up shaking some form the floor to her bedroom apartment. She wiped the tears that were falling from her face. She didn't like the idea of crying no matter where she was. She had to get her phone back but she din't know how to do that other than the option of going to ask for it in front of people. She couldn't really think of anything at the moment other than that idea. She got up and went out the door. She put her hand to the doorknob. Her hands was shaking. He was a bad person like everyone else he would end up hurting her like everyone else. Vanessa put her hand to her hips and went over and called the bakerys phone. "Hi my name is Nessa and I was wondering if the cake could be delivered to my apartment building?" She asked


message 24: by Caramel Cat (last edited Oct 08, 2014 09:06PM) (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo was busy baking when Nessa called. His grandmother picked up before saying, "Yes dear that wouldn't be a problem. We wouldn't mind to deliver to it you at all. My grandson need to get outside every one in a while anways." She laugh before asking kindly, "What is your address Miss and we'll deliever. Oh, and fid my grandson already take your cake order or did you want to place one?" She waited for her answer when Leo walked back over to the front waiting for his cake to settle and the oven to get hot. he noticed she was talking on the phone and asked, "Who is it?" She whispered to him saying, "A girl name Nessa." He whisper what have happened in her ear before she added, "My grandsons said you left your phone and change here and you have already ordered a cake. We will take your things back to your house with the order too."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa bit her lip. She cursed at herself for doing that agian. She thought she needed to break that habit of biting her lip. She listen to the words of the grandma. "Um my address is..." She thought for a moment what was her address. She moved around so often that remembering her address didn't matter because she always had a new one. She didn't want to say that she didn't know her address. She figure that the people were going to laugh at her thats what people did laugh when people were iggroant. "That would be fine giving my things when the cake is deliver." She said she changed the subject quickly. She decided there was only one thing left to do and that was hang. She put the phone done and ended the call. Her knees were trembling she sighed some. Once again she ran from her problem.


message 26: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments The grandmother was surprised that the lady had the nerve to hang up the phone she sighed before looking at Leonardo, "This girl is a diffucult customer." Leo nodded before saying, "Yeah, I'll call her back grandma don't worry about it. You should tend to the other customer." At that moment a lady walked in and grandma and the lady began to chat since they were old friends." He took the phone with him in the kitchen before calling her back. Once she answered the phone he said, "Hey you hanged up on my grandmother a minute ago. If you don't know where you live can you tell me the general location of the place because I know this town like the back of my hand. I'm just trying to do my job Miss. Nessa will you just help me? I'm not trying to scare you or anything."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She picked up the phone it was him. She didn't answer him. She wasn't going to. He knew that she didn't know where she lived. Her heart broke into pieces. He probably was going to laugh at her or worse tell everyone about it. Vanessa wasn't sure what to do right now. She was trembling inside. She didn't mean to be rude. "I'm sorry that I was rude." Her voice was cold but she was trying to be sincere to him. "I don't like people who are like you they seem nice on the outside then once they get to know they hurt you bad. They take your heart and they never give it back." she said. "I live in the tallest apartment building the last floor last door in the hallwy." She said her voice was shaking some.


message 28: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments He listened to her talk before he thought of a quote he once read in a book, "A man once said, 'Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn't it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up.'― Neil Gaiman, yet if you never let someone in your heart and trust them then you will never find the person to love. Trial and error will always happen and you will get hurt on the end, but in the end you must move on with your life and pick yourself up and keep trying to find the right person. Once you find then there will be no more pain, just love Miss." He paused for a moment before adding, "I'll take your cake this weekend to your house. Have a good day Miss and I'll see you this weekend." He hanged up the phone before getting back to cooking other desserts.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her eyes widen was he insulting her? Her eyes watered some. Before she could respond to it he hung up. She didn't want to speak to him anyways. She went to her couch and sat down letting the tears rolling down her cheeks. Trail and error? Like each time they lied to her that each time they hurt her. So whats the use of loving someone when they hurt you thats why she gave up on everyone. She always got hurt no matter who what they were. She didn't like that when they used her. All this person was showed her kindness and she in returned to be rude and cold. She guess she deserved everything she ever got. She wiped the tears that were running down her tan cheeks. The thing that bothered her the most was that he wasn't wrong he was right. She didn't care anyways this guy was just the baker and the last time she will ever hear or think of him this weekend.


message 30: by Caramel Cat (last edited Oct 09, 2014 09:21AM) (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments ((Skip to the weekend?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((sure))


message 32: by Caramel Cat (last edited Oct 09, 2014 09:42AM) (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo walked up the stairs carrying the cake in a beautiful box. His grandmother decided to tag along after Leo had told her the suspicions he had about her order an how it was probably her birthday. His grandmother insisted that they should surprise her with a birthday party since she seemed like she was alone because it was their right to bring happiness and joy to the customers. His grandmother had also bought another sweet for free as a gift and the paper bag with her change and phone inside. It was a piece tiramisu. They had finally got to her door wearing birthday hats with an extra hat for Vanessa. The cake was open reading in a beautiful cursive that was written with a chocolate pen Happy Birthday Vanessa! it was also decorated with chocolate dipped strawberries. He knocked on the door saying "Order for Nessa." Once she opened the door his grandmother poped a confetti tube while they said smiling, "Happy Birthday Vanessa!"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her faced paled. She was shaking now. Her heart was racing. She was not going to get mad. Vanessa kept repeating that to herself over and over again. She would be nice and she wouldn't flip out on them. "Thank you." Her voice was shaking a little bit. "I really do apperactiate it you can leave the things down on the table and leave." She said. Her voice was cold but trying to be sincere. She took the cake and put it in her freezer so it wouldn't melt. She walked them to the door. "Thanks." She said again. "You can leave." She didn't want them to stay. She knew she should of show some kindness to them but that was the least of her worries. She didn't want to be near people what so ever. She knew people hurt her. This was some kind of rude trick people pulled so they could make fun of her.


message 34: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments His grandmother smiled at her happil before saying, "Don't be shy dear. Nobody should spend their birthday alone. Come we'll take you out for a good time." She handed her the bag with the Tiramisu that had a note inside that read Tiramisu mean to "lift up" in Italian. I hope I could help lift up your spirts. Sincerely Leonardo and Grandma Hina. P.S. I hope you can begin to trust people again and eat more of the bakery's sweets. He put the birthday hat on her before saying softly, "Come on it's best not to disappoint my grandmother she will be hurt and no everyone won the world is out to hurt you. I can promise you that me and my grandmother aren't trying to. We have a day all planned out for you. It will be fun." His grandmother came back asking, "Are you ready to leave Miss. Vanessa?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him then to the sweet old lady. "Fine I'll go with you to be nice for once." she snapped. She manage to fake a smile. She wanted to be alone can't anyone respect that? She just wished someone would let her wishes be. "Let me get ready." She went to her room and put some short shorts on a pair of flip flops. She wore a nice neon pink t-shirt and her blonde hair flow effortessly. She put a tiny bit of make up to make her eyes pop. She smiled as she looked at herself in the mirror. She grabbed her purse and walked out her bedroom door. "I'm ready." She said with a smile. Not a fake smile but a real one for once she smiled. She was going to be nice to this old lady. She didn't care about the boy. "Just call me Vanessa Miss sounds to formal for me." She whispered.


message 36: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments The grandma smiled and cupped her face saying, "Okay Vanessa. I wish I had a granddaughter like you. Such a good girl and pretty girl. Right Leo?" She took her hands off her face before looking a Leo. He tried to stop himself from stairing at her before saying looking her straight in the eyes, "Yeah she's very beatifup and nice." He felt a himself get embarressed that he had said that about her. She just really looked beautiful having her real smile for once. She motioned for them to follow her saying, "Come. We're going to have a nice day." She lead the way walking next to Vanessa with Leonardo following her behind quietly. She asked Vanessa, "So dear do you want to eat first or go do something? It's all up to you." She came a little closer adding in a whisper, "My grandson Leonardo treat him good. He's a good person. I raised him well you know and he doesn't have many friends at all since he always is at the bakery. I get worried about him you know."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa smiled some at her. She nodded her head that was the sweetest thing anyone ever said about her at all. She never got treated well what so ever. She always got hurt in the end. She looked at the boy who was there as he was staring at her. She blinked her eyes and smiled some. She wasn't nice she was rude to him and his grandmother ever since she meant them and she didn't think it was right for her to be so rude. She walked with them. She blushed slightly which caught her by surprised. "Yeah I will you aren't trying to play match maker?" She asked rasing her brow some. She smiled Leonardo that was a nice name. "Name after a ninja turtle now?" She said and turned around looking at him teasing him some. "Thats okay I actually like the ninja turtles." She smiled and turned around watching where she was going. "Lets go eat somewhere first." She whispered. "Do you know of any Italian places around?" She asked.


message 38: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Her grandmother was shocked she had caught on so fast she was trying to set them up even of she wouldn't admit it. She shrugged, "Maybe, I'll never say I I'm trying to or not." Leonardo had heard his name mentioned in ther conversation. He crossed his arms before answering clearly, "No, I wasn't named after the ninja turtle." He hated how people always assumed that he was named after the . He pouted like a kid a little not looking at her before muttering, "I rather have you call me Leo since its shorter." Hina nodded saying, "Yes I know all of them because Leonardo always asks for Itaian feeling homesick since he grew up Italy. He didn't ease drop on their conversation.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa nodded her head some. She bit her lip. She felt herself get her feelings hurt. She should of known that he would end up snapping at her every did. She didn't really know the difference between anything really. She was so use of getting hurt that it didn't really matter to her anymore. She started to become a recluse the way she liked it and now here here she was walking with people. People she just meant not to long ago. She felt like they were being too nice and then they would end up hurting her and she would end up crying her eyes out like all the times before this. She sighed some. "Thank you I want Italain but thats too exspensive." She whispered. "Well then you were either named after Leondardo Da Vince, Leondardo De Capiro or Leo Valdez." She said turning around looking at him. "All of those choices are nice but I think turtles are cute." She said and turned back around looking down at the sidewalk. "Look you see I don't date or socialize with people and if I need a date I could have one." She whispered to his grandma


message 40: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo was embarrassed that she kept saying things like that before saying, "Who knows. My mother just wanted name me Leonardo since it means lion and they wanted me to brave and strong." He rubbed the back of his neck feeling shy looking away muttering, "It's not that cute anyways." He sighed regaining his composure before he looked at her, "Vanessa is cuter name than mine though." His grandmother shook her head, "If you don't date or socialize you'll never have friends or find your soul mate dear. Don't give up. And nothing's to expensive. Nothing is ever wrong with spending money on food."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was doing her best to be nice and even flirt with him some to prove a point people didn't like that or they always hurt her in return. "Lions are cute I guess or even better yet a tiger but since you don't have a tiger name. Though turtles are cute so are lions. So I guess I could handle having a lion instead of a turtle both can protect me in their own ways." She said. She was trying not to show her hurt. "I don't have friends for a reason and I don't date for that same reason." She shook her head not caring. She looked back down at the sidewalk. She nodded her head. "Okay if you really want to by food." she said. She felt bad for taking the old ladys money. She sighed some not objecting figuring she couldn't change her mind.


message 42: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo laughed after explaining how Lions are cute. He smiled brightly, "You can be funny you know that. You cheered me up." His grandmother nudged Vanessa saying, "He must like you since he hardly smiles." He ruffled Vanessa's hair before he walked next to his grandmother saying worried, "It's really hot today, so didn't overwork yourself ma." Hina shook her head saying, "Im fine Leo. You worry too much about me." He sighed, "I can't help it." He moved his hands into his pockets before asking, "So how old are you turning anyway Vanessa? You never told us." He pulled out a lighter and walked behind them as he light a cigarette taking a drag. He was a smoker no matter how much his grandmother and parents complained about him smoking, but it calmed him from having terrible day drams of his parents fighting when he was younger.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa slowed down some and got behind them after he ruffled her hair and the comment. She wasn't trying to be funny was trying to her best to flirt and prove a point. Vanessa saw him light a cigarette. Her faced pale some flashes of her ex smoking came into her view she shook it off. "Well first off if I'm suppose to be friends with someone I want them around as long as me." She said . She walked up and took the cigarette out of his mouth and stomped on it. "Thats a foul habit it would be cute if you were doing that as a metaphor but you lit so its not cute." She said. "No wonder you don't have a girlfirend they don't like kissing boys with bad breath and clothes that smell awful." She said. She looked up. "I'm turning nineteen today." She whispered.


message 44: by Caramel Cat (last edited Oct 10, 2014 07:32PM) (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo was surprised when she stopped his cigarette not able to control his composure glaring at her. He shrugged, "I didn't ask for a girlfriend. Now did I? Don't throw away people's money like that either... Geez, What a waste." He grumbled about how she wasn't in charge of his life and it's not that bad of a habit. He pulled out a lollipop out of his pocket before popping it in his mouth. He looked at her before murmuring, "Happy princess?" He ran his hand through his hair frustrated. His grandmother urged them to keep walking saying, "Come, come. Don't mind Leo he's being a little moody. Don't mind him. Everyone gets like that every once in a while." He didn't say nothing a little angry before muttering, "Happy nineteenth birthday I guess." His grandmother whispered in her ear, "He's about to turn 21, so he's not to old date Vanessa."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was trying to be nice save a friend. She stopped dead in her tracks. Tears sprung in her eyes and she ran as fast as she could not listening to the grandma. She didn't care if it was her birthday or not people always ended up hurting her no matter what. She ran further and further until she was back at her apartment. She locked the door and slugged to the floor crying. She trusted him and the person hurt her. She curled in a ball her mom died from cancer because of smoking and her ex smoked all the time. She didn't care anymore about no one. She thought she would try and she did, but she wasn't going to get hurt. She knew she didn't have the right to do that it was out of impulse and force of habit she didn't want her new friend to die like her mom.


message 46: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo noticed tears in her eyes and his eyes widened in surprised. "Van-" He was cut off once she started running away and looked at his grandmother before saying, "Go after her you idiot. I'll meet you at the bakery I'm fine. Go!" With those word he ran after Vanessa yelling, "Hey! Vanessa!" He was about to catch her put she closed the apartment door causing him to crash into it making a loud sound. He had feel down before pounding on the door saying breathlessly, "Vanessa! Hey, come out. I'm sorry, but nobody can be perfect all the time. I'm just human and make mistakes like everyone else no matter how hard I try. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make you cry. Come out Vanessa or at least open the door. I'm sorry." He was breathing heavy.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The tears in Vanessa eyes kept coming. This is why she didn't trust people. She didn't like getting hurt. She be used to it since thats all she was used to is getting hurt. She notice he was out there maybe if she didn't answer him he would go away. Then he probably wouldn't go away. She pondered what to do for that moment. She got up slowly and she turned around and faced the door knob. She grabbed it and then slowly turned it. She opened the door all the way. The make-up was running down her face in tiny streams. She didn't like getting hurt. She didn't mean to over step her boundaries. "I'm sorry." She whispered.


message 48: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo sighed when she opened the door. He moved closer to her before pulling her in a hug. "Shhh, it's okay. I'm sorry too. I just have terrible day-nightmares, so to say, and smoking stops them from happening as much." He pulled away a little to wipe her tears smiling gently sucking on his lollipop. He mumured gently, "You're okay." He stroked her hair a little before asking, "Do you want some of the sweet I made for you that's not cake? Sweets always make the heart feel better no matter what. I promise." He pulled away before he walked over to the table picking up the nicely decorated gift bag that held the Tiramisu and handed it to her saying, "Happy nineteenth birthday Vanessa. This is for you." He gave her a real smile adding, "I think you'll love it."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Vanessa let him hug her. She wasn't use to the touched at all. She wished he would stay there and hug her forever. She liked it. Then he pulled away to wipe the tears. Her heart was beating really fast. She was falling for him and she knew that right then and there. She was scared she didn't like falling for people they always hurt her in the end. She let the breath out that she didn't realize she was holding. She smiled some. "I'm sorry I did that your life is none of my business and I was trying to prove a point to your grandma. She thinks we should date she doing her best to set us up." She whispered. Her eyes cleared up and smiled. "Thank you I really apperactiate it." She whispered. She took it. "What is it?" She asked curious and confused?


message 50: by Caramel Cat (new)

Caramel Cat Universe | 562 comments Leonardo's face turned red embarrassed, "She said that?!" He muttered about how his grandmother should mind her bussiness running. His hand through his hair hating how his grandmother always pulled stunts like this. He looked at her before answering his question a little shy still trying to calm down his blushing face, "Open it and you'll find out. Don't ask me silly." He snorted at little before smiling at her. He went over to her kitchen trying to calm down before looking through her cabinets before finding a cup and filing it up with water. He came back with a fork in his hand. He finally had stopped blushing finally feeling normal waiting for her reaction.


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