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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Needing beta readers for 45k NA Zombie Novel - Gore, Action, Romance, & Humor

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Kira Adams | 85 comments Hello!

I am currently seeking beta readers for my NA zombie novel, Into the Darkness. It is around 45k words right now. It's has a nice mix of gore, action, romance, suspense, and humor.

Here is the blurb:

It was supposed to be a way to end the devastation in the Middle East, but instead a darkness is unleashed unlike anything the world has ever seen before. Ike Glass is well versed in chaos, but even he is unprepared for what the world will become after the outbreak. Ace Cullen has been loyal to his country ever since he was brought to the states as a young boy, but it’s difficult to stand by a country that can’t even take responsibility for their own actions. Phoenix Blue just wants a night of mindless sex…is that too much to ask? Always a black sheep, she shocks everyone as she finds the strength inside herself to protect the ones she cares about, and fight to see another day. They were strangers when the virus took over, but tragedy will bring them together in ways they never thought possible as they descend into the darkness.

I would like feedback on the plot, flow, characterization, and grammar/spelling if you feel so inclined.

I can send the entire novel in PDF form. Looking forward to finding my next round of betas!


Kira Adams | 85 comments Still looking if anyone is interested!


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