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alice wrote: "Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Well, I have finally finished it! Here it is! :D :D
Snow White's Daughter
"Raven! Raven! Get back here!"
As she ran, Raven silently cursed herself for being so stu..."
:D :D:D yayayay!!!
Snow White's Daughter
"Raven! Raven! Get back here!"
As she ran, Raven silently cursed herself for being so stu..."
:D :D:D yayayay!!!
Wait, we have till Friday.... right?!
!!!!!!!!!??????
B-But...?
Julane wrote: "Erm, when does the contest end? Cuz I think I might participate..... "
Aubree wrote: "Next Friday."
B-But...?
Julane wrote: "Erm, when does the contest end? Cuz I think I might participate..... "
Aubree wrote: "Next Friday."
XD
Thanks. Plus, I want to postpone Sora leaving the group!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@Sora
Why do you wanna leave?
Thanks. Plus, I want to postpone Sora leaving the group!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@Sora
Why do you wanna leave?

- So first of all, great entries everyone!!! You guys did a-maze! So here is my tallies and why:
1 tally - Alice's 'JUST RIGHT' -
So, I voted for Alice's entry. Alice did a great job with descriptions and humor. She was creative in her use of spaghetti (instead of porridge), chair-designs, and her undecided ending. One of my favorite parts was when Alice conveyed Sally in a way I often imagined Goldilocks. A greedy, self-indulgent child with little remorse or restraint (so often you hear people praise the fictional character for her bravery). The story actually reminds me of a poem I read in a book once where the poet, too, conveyed Goldilocks as such. Only it's ending was a bit darker (I needn't say how, you know what I mean). All round, Alice did a brilliant job, and I wouldn't be afraid to say she has a knack for entertaining stories. Great job!
2 tallies - Ruby's 'SNOW WHITE'S DAUGHTER'
Next one I voted for was Ruby. Her re-imaging of Snow-White's protege was intriguing, and new. A classic spin was turned into something different and unique. The whole story made you question who was on the right side all along, and while she leaves a dramatic cliffhanger that (like Alice's) only left to it's appeal I hope it's not the last time we hear of Raven.
3 tallies - Sora's 'SLEEPING BEAUTY?'
Sora's entry however won me over with her own originality, and clever spins (she too, left us with a bit more questions like just how the 'Beauty' ever fulfilled her oath, and what happened to her poor fiancée in the tower?). Besides that her blood-curdling details took me away, and sent goosebumps. If you didn't get creeped out, I'd be amazed. I'm not sure about you, but I've always wondered how the Sleeping Beaut still stayed pretty after 100 years, but Sora managed to take it and use it to her advantage. So well-done on her part!!!
And again well done to everyone! Even to Charlotte who gave me a fictional character with my name (I'm afraid that made me a bit more biased, and made it harder to vote), but I found her story creative, imaginative, and I can't wait to read more about this 'Emmeline' in the future if it be. Again, you guys are amazing!
Great job guys!! Awesome job Sora!!!!

Because that totally wasn't an attempt to win you over! :p"
No, we all have to vote. I think Aubree's just adding up the tallies and voting herself.
And lol, I knew you weren't. But it was a great story (I wish we could do our favorite four).
BTW, when I say "1" "2" "3" I am NOT saying that "1" got the least points, I mean that one is my favorite!!!

WAIT!!! I WANNA VOTE!!!
so, the most tallies win? like, '1 tally' gives that person 1 point? and '3 tallies' gives that person 3 points?
If so:
3 tallies: Emmeline's The Snow Queen
2 tallies: Alice's Just Right
1 tally: (ARGH. I can't figure out who should go here... could I have a list of all the contestants?)
so, the most tallies win? like, '1 tally' gives that person 1 point? and '3 tallies' gives that person 3 points?
If so:
3 tallies: Emmeline's The Snow Queen
2 tallies: Alice's Just Right
1 tally: (ARGH. I can't figure out who should go here... could I have a list of all the contestants?)
Sora's sleeping beauty....
Charlotte's one
Yours
Hmmmmm.... Sorry, can't think of any others... Charlotte didn't finish hers, so I don't know if you can vote for her, but I did...
Charlotte's one
Yours
Hmmmmm.... Sorry, can't think of any others... Charlotte didn't finish hers, so I don't know if you can vote for her, but I did...
((So here are my votes))
1. Sora's Sleeping Beauty (3 tallies)
2.Charlotte's story (2 tallies)
3.Emmeline's Snow queen (1 tally)
((Okay, so if I can't vote on Charlotte's because she didn't finish, move Emmeline's story up, and make Ruby #3. If I CAN vote for Charlotte, keep it the same, thanks!!!))
:)
1. Sora's Sleeping Beauty (3 tallies)
2.Charlotte's story (2 tallies)
3.Emmeline's Snow queen (1 tally)
((Okay, so if I can't vote on Charlotte's because she didn't finish, move Emmeline's story up, and make Ruby #3. If I CAN vote for Charlotte, keep it the same, thanks!!!))
:)


*gasp*
OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!
I can do my contest now!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAAYY!!!
OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!
I can do my contest now!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAAYY!!!
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I'll admit, it was a bit confusing at first. I didn't know why Raven was running or to where, or originally who was the old woman. But, you solved the (why) problem in the end, and it isn't ..."
:D :D:D