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message 51: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
The Writer Named Emmeline wrote: "@Ruby

I'll admit, it was a bit confusing at first. I didn't know why Raven was running or to where, or originally who was the old woman. But, you solved the (why) problem in the end, and it isn't ..."


:D :D:D


message 52: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
alice wrote: "Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Well, I have finally finished it! Here it is! :D :D


Snow White's Daughter


"Raven! Raven! Get back here!"

As she ran, Raven silently cursed herself for being so stu..."


:D :D:D yayayay!!!


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

Wait, we have till Friday.... right?!


message 54: by em_panada (new)

em_panada It was supposed to end on Monday I think...


AυвяєєƤαιgє We have til Friday.


message 56: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 30, 2014 02:51PM) (new)

!!!!!!!!!??????

B-But...?



Julane wrote: "Erm, when does the contest end? Cuz I think I might participate..... "

Aubree wrote: "Next Friday."



message 57: by em_panada (new)

em_panada I thought it was Monday. XD

Then, I shall refrain from voting.


message 58: by [deleted user] (new)

XD

Thanks. Plus, I want to postpone Sora leaving the group!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


@Sora

Why do you wanna leave?


message 59: by em_panada (last edited Oct 03, 2014 04:02PM) (new)

em_panada Alright. NOW I can vote. XD

- So first of all, great entries everyone!!! You guys did a-maze! So here is my tallies and why:

1 tally - Alice's 'JUST RIGHT' -

So, I voted for Alice's entry. Alice did a great job with descriptions and humor. She was creative in her use of spaghetti (instead of porridge), chair-designs, and her undecided ending. One of my favorite parts was when Alice conveyed Sally in a way I often imagined Goldilocks. A greedy, self-indulgent child with little remorse or restraint (so often you hear people praise the fictional character for her bravery). The story actually reminds me of a poem I read in a book once where the poet, too, conveyed Goldilocks as such. Only it's ending was a bit darker (I needn't say how, you know what I mean). All round, Alice did a brilliant job, and I wouldn't be afraid to say she has a knack for entertaining stories. Great job!

2 tallies - Ruby's 'SNOW WHITE'S DAUGHTER'

Next one I voted for was Ruby. Her re-imaging of Snow-White's protege was intriguing, and new. A classic spin was turned into something different and unique. The whole story made you question who was on the right side all along, and while she leaves a dramatic cliffhanger that (like Alice's) only left to it's appeal I hope it's not the last time we hear of Raven.

3 tallies - Sora's 'SLEEPING BEAUTY?'

Sora's entry however won me over with her own originality, and clever spins (she too, left us with a bit more questions like just how the 'Beauty' ever fulfilled her oath, and what happened to her poor fiancée in the tower?). Besides that her blood-curdling details took me away, and sent goosebumps. If you didn't get creeped out, I'd be amazed. I'm not sure about you, but I've always wondered how the Sleeping Beaut still stayed pretty after 100 years, but Sora managed to take it and use it to her advantage. So well-done on her part!!!

And again well done to everyone! Even to Charlotte who gave me a fictional character with my name (I'm afraid that made me a bit more biased, and made it harder to vote), but I found her story creative, imaginative, and I can't wait to read more about this 'Emmeline' in the future if it be. Again, you guys are amazing!


message 60: by [deleted user] (new)

Great job guys!! Awesome job Sora!!!!


message 61: by em_panada (last edited Oct 03, 2014 04:08PM) (new)

em_panada Charlotte wrote: "...wait were you judging?
Because that totally wasn't an attempt to win you over! :p"


No, we all have to vote. I think Aubree's just adding up the tallies and voting herself.

And lol, I knew you weren't. But it was a great story (I wish we could do our favorite four).


message 62: by em_panada (new)

em_panada You didn't? :(


message 63: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Lol

Well, thanx for voting for me you guys!


message 64: by [deleted user] (new)

BTW, when I say "1" "2" "3" I am NOT saying that "1" got the least points, I mean that one is my favorite!!!


AυвяєєƤαιgє Okay, I'll tally up the results and give people a little bit more time to vote and then I'll give the results probably by tomorrow.


message 66: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Oct 04, 2014 10:41AM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
WAIT!!! I WANNA VOTE!!!


so, the most tallies win? like, '1 tally' gives that person 1 point? and '3 tallies' gives that person 3 points?


If so:

3 tallies: Emmeline's The Snow Queen

2 tallies: Alice's Just Right

1 tally: (ARGH. I can't figure out who should go here... could I have a list of all the contestants?)


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

Sora's sleeping beauty....
Charlotte's one
Yours
Hmmmmm.... Sorry, can't think of any others... Charlotte didn't finish hers, so I don't know if you can vote for her, but I did...


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

((So here are my votes))


1. Sora's Sleeping Beauty (3 tallies)
2.Charlotte's story (2 tallies)
3.Emmeline's Snow queen (1 tally)

((Okay, so if I can't vote on Charlotte's because she didn't finish, move Emmeline's story up, and make Ruby #3. If I CAN vote for Charlotte, keep it the same, thanks!!!))

:)


AυвяєєƤαιgє Okay, guys. Today is the big day when we will find out the winner. I will quickly tally up the results and then, bam! We will know the winner. All of your entries were amazing! I loved them all and don't know how anyone decided how to rank them.


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome!!!


AυвяєєƤαιgє Ruby, who do you want your last vote to be for?


AυвяєєƤαιgє We have a winner! *Dramatic Music Plays in The Background* And that winner is..... SORA AND THE SLEEPING BEAUTY(?)! Congrats Sora! You wrote a fabulous piece that looked far into the world of princesses while at the same time, made it mysterious, spooky, and creepy. The rest of you did an amazing job! All of your pieces were unique and "twisted" with interesting plots and fabulous characters! The stories were well-written, intriguing, and made me wish that they were all chapter books! PM me if you want to see how you finished with the other writers.


message 73: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
CONGRATS SORA!


message 74: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
This was really fun and a great idea, BTW Aubree!!!!!


message 75: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
*gasp*


OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!



I can do my contest now!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAAYY!!!


AυвяєєƤαιgє Thank you! Now you can finally do your contest!


message 77: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


AυвяєєƤαιgє I can't wait!!!!!!! What is it going to be about?


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