100K Suspense novel - need help to trim down to 80K

[J.C.]

Would really appreciate a read and feedback by readers who enjoy fast paced thrillers. That is what I am trying to achieve. Ideally looking for three reviews.


Story: A peaceful protest devolves into a riot and Mark Cervantez finds himself arrested for assaulting an officer. An avid environmentalist he has to to find a way to pay his legal bills while staying true to his beliefs.

Mark lands a new job at a biotech firm and thinks he's solved all his money problems. But what he doesn't know is that the CEO is of his new company is financing an eco-terrorist group named the Vrai Vert led by a mysterious woman named Leah.

Mark stumbles into their plot and becomes a target himself stuck in the war between the Vrai Vert and the FBI.

[J.C.]

Additionally I have completed 9 drafts and received several positive responses from readers on prior drafts. I would like to reduce the size of the novel and am looking at what needs to be cut.

[J.C.]

Awesome, will email you Willow. Looking for two more people interested in fast paced suspense with an environmental theme.