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message 1: by Alex (new)

Alex | 200 comments Below is a synopsis of a thriller/suspense novel that I'm self publishing. I've tried out numerous titles. Based on the synopsis, which title works best:

Moonlight Tandoori
Pseudocoma
The Second Detective
The Nth Detective
Black Box
Escape from Islamabad

Actor Philip Rayne has played a detective on television, but when a friend, Niya, is wounded in a bizarre attack, he must become one in reality to prevent the assassins from finishing the job. As Niya in her imagination relives the terror-filled ordeal and heroic actions that made her a target, Philip gets on stage with an ensemble of murderers who want Niya and Philip dead before the final act.


message 2: by Keith (new)

Keith Oxenrider (mitakeet) | 1171 comments I like Pseudocoma best, then The Nth Detective.


message 3: by Alex (new)

Alex | 200 comments Thanks, Keith. That helps a lot. I still owe you a critique of your screenplay.


message 4: by Keith (new)

Keith Oxenrider (mitakeet) | 1171 comments No worries!


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