Writing.com Gift Points reward for reviewing my story

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For those of you familiar with the writing.com gift point system, it's a great way to share your stories, offer feedback to others, and receive feedback in exchange.

I've set an "auto reward" for gift points on my stories, so when you sign up to the site (free) and review my work, you can then receive gift points and use those gift points to request reviews from others on the site.

Here's the piece I'd most like to have reviewed:

https://www.writing.com/main/view_ite...

This is Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction, so if you're at least somewhat familiar with the show, then great. If you aren’t, Seto Kaiba is basically an arrogant billionaire who occasionally performs heroic acts but justifies them in ways that keep others from getting close to him. My story deals with adult topics, but graphic details are kept to a minimum. This is only the first part of a much longer story, and I’d like feedback from a variety of perspectives. If you enjoy it, Part 2 is also up!