A Book that I am currently Writing?!

[Melissa]

So I don't know if this is acceptable Here. And if it isn't please let me know and I will remove it. But I just wanted to give a little info on a book I am currently working on. It is a Scifi / Gay&Lesbian fiction. Just to see how it sounds to others, and get any and all feed back. Even some constructive criticism. So here is the Synopsis I have wrote for it.

Orion's Belt has always been known as The Three Stars in the Galaxies belt. Which is said to consist of The Milky Way, or so that is what Mankind has always been told by Nasa. And Learned in Science and through the study of Stars. But Roger Brighton learned along time ago, that Orion was much more then that. While on a flight aboard the space shuttle. He encountered technical problems, in which he would have to force land the shuttle onto a planet, one that he didn't recognize. During his time n the planet e soon learns as being called, Nightravius C,. e meets the real story of Orion, and the Alien Being, or King of the Alien Planet and his Power. Orion, was the name of said King, and He and his people were the reason that Earth and the Solar System even existed. The Belt of Orion held the power of the entire Solar System. Roger learned the kindness and firece compassion this King had. And so, he made a deal, to keep te truth of Orion's belt a secret and in exchange Orion would supply Earth with Fuel, and other elements needed to aid N.A.S.A FOR ETERNITY. But now, 25 years later, Roger and the rest of Na.sa learn that the Planet of Nightravius C is in danger. The planet was under great attack and much of the Solar System was in danger, With no planet left, and King Orion in immediate Danger. N.a,s.a sends out a officer, Doyle Brighton, Roger's son to find Orion. And bring him back to base. It is now Doyle's duty to protect Orion and His belt from anyone who is seeking it out. It will come down to Orion saving earth from facing the same fate as his world and Doyle's to keep Orion Safe. But there is more then protection that conspires between the two. For Orion looks Human, and is no different then they are. Doyle finds himself falling for the King and Orion, for him.

So I know the synopsis, is a little all over the place. But any input you guys have. And your thoughts on if you would read something like this. Will help Me.

[Elena]

I would really love to read this. I’m not generally one for romance novels, but I do like what you have going here. I would love to know how King Orion plans to save the solar system. What exactly is causing these horrific attacks that destroyed his planet? Why did NASA decide to send Doyle when they could have sent any other experienced agent out there?

There are so many questions and I need them answered!

[Melissa]

Elena wrote: "I would really love to read this. I’m not generally one for romance novels, but I do like what you have going here. I would love to know how King Orion plans to save the solar system. What exactly ..."

<3 Ah thank you. I know I have like 4 chapters written up. and it is all a deep conspiracy. >:) And yea, I really don't write romantic to much. Course this is my first book im writing. So I am excited to get it finished and try to get it self published. But I am so happy you like it and are wanting to read.