Alpha/restrcture needed for 32K Urban sci-fi/suspence

[Dan]

I've noticed while trying to complete my draft, I need a bigger, more action-packed climax for the second half of my WIP. Here's the blurb:

Social turbulence is tearing the population apart. Coexistence turns to turmoil between humans and non-humans. Fae, Vampire, Lycan, and Mutants all try to work within the human laws but find many objectionable and restrictive.

Agents from the future teleport to the present. They have a difficult assignment; change the future by any means necessary. Agents Brooks, Stone, Conway and Proctor led by Rivers, attempt to bring creation to a new branch of law enforcement. Conspiracy, murder, sacrifice, election rigging, a political assassination, nothing is off limits to complete their mission. That is, until Detective Roy Burns is on the case.

Once formed, The Citizens Protection Federation agents are comprised of humans, mutants and a feral. The new agents struggle to overcome prejudice and distrust to become a team as they combat civil unrest. What sacrifices will the new agents have to make?

The last paragraph is the second half. (About 32k) I've thought up additions but am having problems working out the details and blending them into what I already have.

Sort of like X-men and the movie Bright rolled together. I'm calling it a gritty Urban Sci-fi/Suspence. I have a version with the first half summarized so the problem areas can be worked on and not get burned out getting to them. But the full version is available. (75k total) I'm not looking for any polish, just to get it all roughed in.

I'm willing to swap services on anything but serious romance. Anyone interested can reach me at thenumber1evild@gmail.com.

[Lela]

I would be interested in a swap.

I've got a 80,000-word manuscript, the 5th book in an apocalyptic series. Because I've been doing this a while, it's pretty close to being ready for the editor. Looking for honest critique and flagging of my typos. I'm willing to swap, except I don't read erotica, so we're probably on the same page there. Because this is a series, I'll provide a synopsis of the earlier books.

You can leave a message here or email me at lelamarkham@gmail.com.

[Dan]

I'm still looking for a good fit. Anyone?