Science Fantasy first 5k swap

[Will]

Hi guys,

I'm looking for a first 2/3 chapter swap 5-7k words. I write sci-fi / fantasy and I'm currently working on my first project. Looking for advice on my narrative voice, character development and I'm interested to hear whether you wanted to learn more...

In terms of my own experience I am fanatical about fantasy and well read. I would be happy to offer my own comments and feedback in return.

Thanks,

Will

[PaulBentham]

Hi will I would be interested in a swap, I also write sci-fi. I am currently working on a piece of flash fiction Xiaon G12: Core Element.[10k]
Synopsis.
Maverick alien Bounty hunter G12 is assigned to locate a rogue agent on an uncharted planet. On his arrival he is teamed up with a by the book cop, and uncovers a terrorist plot.
Let me know if your interested , time constraints etc ,Cheers P

[Will]

Hi Paul,

Sounds great. I would be happy to take a look and give you some feedback. In return I would be interested in you thoughts on the first 6,000 words of my Science Fantasy novel, I'm really looking to have the question "did you want to read more?" answered. I have my novel and character arcs planned but this is my first foray into a full novel and I want to know if my characters / voice is clear.

This is my story goal;

The Cirian civilisation’s iron grasp of the Epsilon star system is beset upon by natural disaster, intrigue, rebellion and an external threat originating from their misuse of technology. A Cirian official turned exile and an unknowing young woman come together to provide a last-ditch defence of the natural world and everything they hold dear.

If you are happy to go ahead with the swap, please email me your work to willowen21@gmail.com and I will respond with my own.

Very best,

Will

[Kayvion]

Hi Will,

I see you've already found one person to swap with, but if you're looking for another I'm definitely down! I have a YA sci-fi WIP that needs some work and I'd love to swap the first 5,000 or so words with you if you're interested. To give you an idea of what it's about, here's my current query:

"The future is in turmoil, and only Harlow can save it.

At least that’s what some guy in the corner store parking lot said. But Harlow is quick to dismiss the kook--until he rips her out of space-time to prove it.

Over two hundred years into the future, the galaxy has been conquered by an elitist scientist who uses technology to wipe out species based on their intelligence levels. Due to a genetic anomaly, Harlow might be able to free them. The renegades need her help, and the chance to explore outer space is an offer Harlow can’t refuse.

As more of the galaxy falls prey to the Scientist, Harlow and the renegades plot to take it back. But although Harlow has pledged herself to the cause, she feels as if there’s more to the mission than the renegades will tell her. Something that will change her life, and her future, forever."

If you're interested, shoot me an email at kayvionlewis@gmail.com.

Thanks :)
-Kayvion