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message 1: by Tomas, Wandering dreamer (last edited May 28, 2019 11:46PM) (new)

Tomas Grizzly | 765 comments Mod
So far, I've been mostly throwing random tips around, but I'd like to get some feedback on the first book of my project as well. The details:
Title: Eternal Defenders
Genre: Sword and Sorcery fantasy with shadow vs. light theme, coming of age and romance elements.
Content rating: 15+ for sensual intimacy
Length: ca. 180k words (cut down from original 230k).

Current blurb (under spoiler tag to save space):
(view spoiler)

The focus of the beta would be mostly at story-based issues (potential plot holes, inconsistency) and flow. It was through some external feedback already so it should be in a decent state.
Edit: To clarify, I am looking for a free beta at this point, with a paid beta being considered for later this year.

PM me on Goodreads (do NOT post your e-mail in this thread where a spambot could see it) if you're interested. Feel free to ask questions in this thread, if you have any. I can also offer a few samples on PM request.

Thank you for reading.
Tomas


message 2: by Utsuri (new)

Utsuri | 4 comments Sure! I will beta for you.


message 3: by Molly (new)

Molly (twindawnpublishing) | 11 comments I would love to beta read for you. Romance and fantasy are my go to genres for reading. I'll send you. Hope you are still looking.


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