First 3 chapter swap! N/A romance

[Chrissy]

Looking for someone to swap chapters with. Romance preferred but will read just about anything 😊

[Trish]

Hi Chrissy :)

I'd love to be your Critique partner if you'd love to be mine.

I have a 136k Romance story for your kind consideration.

Here's the blurb:
A young lady from Malaysia who works in Singapore considers becoming a nun after getting her heart broken umpteenth times repeatedly by getting into crappy relationships with unkind men. Her last relationship was really the ultimate breaking point for her. She got herself entangled in a relationship with the SVP in her company. What started out as a dream relationship, quickly turned into a game of manipulation, abuse of power, emotional hurt, unwilling sexual intimacy, backstabbing, getting conned of money, and a string of complex internal company politics.
She loses all faith in love and trust in men and people in general. She vows to herself to 'take back' her virginity by staying single for at least a year to heal her wounds, and the next man she'll ever get in bed with will be her future husband (if, she ever finds him).

Little did she know, that after changing her job, she finds herself crossing paths with 4 very charming and nice guys, one after another. Coincidentally they are all Germans there in Singapore either for Business or holiday, and they are all vying for her attention at the same time.
None of them know about the other's existence.
The main character is lost on who she should give a chance to. She is scared to love, scared of getting her heart broken again. Not only that, even if she does choose to give her heart to 1 of the 4 gentlemen, how would it be possible to sustain a healthy, and committed relationship when they were living worlds apart?

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Would you be interested to be my Critique Partner and provide me your honest, professional feedback? Would be much appreciated. Thank you! :)


Have a nice day!

Sincerely,
Tricia

[Elena]

Hi Chrissy, I have New Adult romantic fantasy, 92k words. Would you like to swap?

[Trish]

Hi Elena, or we can swap if you like :)

[Chrissy]

Hi ladies. At this point, I’m only looking to swap the first few chapters. Up to 10 at most. Beyond that I’m still “fixing” but am looking for feedback on what I’ve done so far. I’m happy to work with you, just wanted to be upfront on my end

[Shoba]

Hi Chrissy

I have a 5000k essay (non-ficton) that I am happy to swap with you. I need it back quickly though - within two days as I have a deadline to submit it. I am an author who has won awards for my novel and short story and I'm interested only in swapping with experienced authors. If interested please email me at shoba.sadler@gmail.com

Thank you.
Shoba
shobasadler.com

[Jennifer]

Hi Chrissy,
Are you still working on your first 3 chapters? I have a dark mystery that I'm looking to swap the first three chapters. If you're interested, email me at jennifer_rand@msn.com