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message 1: by Rollie (last edited Aug 24, 2009 07:34AM) (new)

Rollie (zheick) FORBIDDEN WHISPER


Behind the normal rotation of the earth, there's a secret community where the people have their own special abilities.
Between their worlds there are societies who are creating hidden wars that cause visible mass destructions.
When Charmaine Steph Howell discovered that her blood line belongs to a secret society, she was ready then to hear more of the fact even if it causes her revenge.
Revenge for those people who bounded her life span even if it means a bad omen; fighting the man who saved her life more than she ever expected.




i need an advice if i really need to continue this one or not..please help.. i have my first six chapters of but i'm still hesitating if will continue this one...



here is the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 2: by Emma (new)

Emma Audsley (emmaaudsley) | 6 comments What does the secret society entail?


message 3: by Rollie (new)

Rollie (zheick) because people may not accept them and treat them unnatural... sometimes, if know we're different we better kept it as a secret esp. if its embarassing or creepy..


message 4: by Emma (new)

Emma Audsley (emmaaudsley) | 6 comments Sounds like there's promise in this.... keep writing! All writers hit walls whilst working & indecision is a killer! If you don't write the book who knows how far it could have gone?


message 5: by Rollie (new)

Rollie (zheick) thank you so much Em. i'm actually writing this one for my sister. she really loves to read.


message 6: by Abigail (new)

Abigail Sharpe (abigailsharpe) So did you finish?


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