Hello!

[Spiral]

Hi! I'm Spiral Architect, trying out this whole newfangled webserial thing. Hopefully I can get a good one running--at the moment, my attempt at this (As Dust, asdust.blogspot.com) only has one post, but hey, I'm here to learn.

So...um...hi.

[Frances]

Welcome! Best of luck with your serial. Feel free to get comfy and ask questions as you go. :)

[Barbara]

Just checked it out. I would suggest filling out your "about me" page. I like to know something about the author.

The writing is good, but you need to break up the dialogue a bit, and add more tags.

[C.A.]

Hi Spiral, welcome to the Madhouse...we have punch and pie.

--Craiggers

[S.G.]

Hi Spiral -- you might also want to create a table of contents now that you have three posts up. As you add more sections it'll become harder for your new visitor to find the right place to start. If you can't figure out how to do a TOC, you can always insert a "Start Here" link somewhere near the top of your page that goes to your first installment.

Best of luck!

[Nicolette]

Hi! My name is Nicolette deSada and I mostly write M/M Romance. I am currently writing a serial novel called The Paperboy on DeviantArt. I've just recently started posting it on my personal website, which I hope turns out to be a good move.