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Sep 26, 2014 09:58AM
Aura is deteriorating alive. Her wings are cracking, and her skin is peeling. "No, Aura! Are you alright?!"
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((Wait, I just realized that Indi had no way of knowing that Aura was deteriorating :P))
I hear Alex sounding disgusted. "What's happening?"
I hear Alex sounding disgusted. "What's happening?"
"We need to help her!" I scream.
"No...." Aura's voice is scared, but almost... calm. "No, I.... ow.... I-ouch! I don't want to die, but I can't live like this!" She screams.
"What does it feel like?" I ask quietly.
"Like I am being tortured for eternity, but can never die. Never."
Salifia looks horrified with herself. "What have I done? I didn't know-!"
"No...." Aura's voice is scared, but almost... calm. "No, I.... ow.... I-ouch! I don't want to die, but I can't live like this!" She screams.
"What does it feel like?" I ask quietly.
"Like I am being tortured for eternity, but can never die. Never."
Salifia looks horrified with herself. "What have I done? I didn't know-!"
I hear a growl, and my instincts from Aura kick in. I lash out a kick, and the attacker turns on me. I have no idea who it is, but I am not going to let them harm anyone else. They tackle me, and bite my arm, hard, drawing blood.
I scream out, and I feel some others --Alex, Salifia--- helping me. I grab my knife, and I am about to attempt to stop the animal, when Alex cries out,
"No! It's Carla!"
I drop my knife. We are at a stale mate. If she comes forward, we will be forced to kill her, but we can't. We just can't.
I scream out, and I feel some others --Alex, Salifia--- helping me. I grab my knife, and I am about to attempt to stop the animal, when Alex cries out,
"No! It's Carla!"
I drop my knife. We are at a stale mate. If she comes forward, we will be forced to kill her, but we can't. We just can't.
I hear someone running away; Aura.
I can't let her leave. She can't.
"Aura!"
I can't let her leave. She can't.
"Aura!"
We were being pursues by Carla. I ran after Aura, but also to get away from the attacker. From Carla. From our friend.
That's Salifia distracted Carla.
"You guys go ahead! I- I'll hold her off!"
"But-!"
"Run!" She yelled.
That's Salifia distracted Carla.
"You guys go ahead! I- I'll hold her off!"
"But-!"
"Run!" She yelled.
(woaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah plot twist XD )
I stood, my head spinning from all the confusion. The last half hour had been so weird. First, we were going on a bus to complete a mission, then I was forced off the bus to go find Aura with Salifia, then we found out Aura was dying, and everyone thought it was their fault, and now Aura came back from the dead, is kinda alive but doesn't have her wings, and I'm standing here feeling like I'm gonna throw up.
My gosh.
I stood, my head spinning from all the confusion. The last half hour had been so weird. First, we were going on a bus to complete a mission, then I was forced off the bus to go find Aura with Salifia, then we found out Aura was dying, and everyone thought it was their fault, and now Aura came back from the dead, is kinda alive but doesn't have her wings, and I'm standing here feeling like I'm gonna throw up.
My gosh.
((Yeah... Whats happened in the last 3 and a half pages? XD Sorry for needing to catch up every time I come on, but you guys have been busy!!)
((Aura died but Silifia brought her back to life but the bringing back the dead made Aura like rot alive, and her skin and wings started coming off, but she saved herself with a spell, but the wings disappeared, but other than that the spell worked. Oh, and Carla attacked us because she needed blood (she didn't actually know that she was hurting us) and she attacked Aura just a bit, and so she blames herself for Aura's wings disappearing, but she wasn't the one who caused Aura's death, that was from a wound. Got it? :)))
(Holly smokes. Ok. Where are we now, how did we get here, and what is the conversation going on about?)
(I really have no clue.................................................................................................... if that helps any XD )
Kmaefantasy wrote: "(Holly smokes. Ok. Where are we now, how did we get here, and what is the conversation going on about?)"
We are [or were] about to board the bus to go on a quest before Aura died, so I think we are still around there, but we might be at Aura's house thing. We are telling Carla that it wasn't her fault that Aura's wings cam off.
We are [or were] about to board the bus to go on a quest before Aura died, so I think we are still around there, but we might be at Aura's house thing. We are telling Carla that it wasn't her fault that Aura's wings cam off.
(Got it. So should I start out coming out of bed, or walking into the room after a meal, or what?)
((do anything, you could even act like you've been there the whole time, we don't mind :))
I burst from my sleep when I hear Aura screaming. I jump out of bed, and creep down to her room. "Aura?" I whisper, tapping on the door, after the screaming stopped. "Are you ok?" I twist the knob, but its locked. "Aura?"
"Yeah. No big deal, I needed to wake up anyways." I smile. "Are you ok?" I look at her pale face and her circles under her eyes.
I stare at the door, wondering what was up with her. Instead of wondering off, I sat down next to the door, and relaxed. In case Aura needed help, I would be ready to help.
"Yaa!!" I scream as a stranger walks out of the room. "What... Who..." I stammer, but then I see the familiar glint in her eyes. "Aura?!" I jump to my feet. "What did you do?!"
I take a breath and shake my head. "Ok. Whatever."
Alice wrote: "um…no offense but this is my character so could you back off a bit…..?Thanks! :)"
Yeah, no probs, sorry!!!! I will delete that comment... I just was wonderin', was it because you want Aura to be mad at Carla? I just assumed you wanted to forgive her, but I will delete it :)
Yeah, no probs, sorry!!!! I will delete that comment... I just was wonderin', was it because you want Aura to be mad at Carla? I just assumed you wanted to forgive her, but I will delete it :)
(okay! :D )
"HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"
Suddenly, a magical fairy named Ruby jumped out of the bushes and clobbered the Astar over the head with a big watermelon.
The End.
"HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"
Suddenly, a magical fairy named Ruby jumped out of the bushes and clobbered the Astar over the head with a big watermelon.
The End.
But then the Unicorns of the Universe united, and wanted the last word in the matter, so therefore...
THE END!
THE END!
"Erm... Um..."
I was standing awkwardly at the bank of the river, looking around aimlessly, wondering what to do.
I was standing awkwardly at the bank of the river, looking around aimlessly, wondering what to do.
I just stand there, wide eyed, watching the scene unfolding before me. "What a group." I thought, amazed. "I probably couldn't do anything like that in a million years..."
"Uh, okay, okay guys? Guys?" I shout over the quickly loudening din. "Um, well, let's stop with the insults, kay? Why don't we just...um...well, how about we all go back to the hotel and have the whole group talk this out - remember Indigo, Paige - Alex and Sveinn? C'mon, we can figure it all out with the help of the rest of our group. How does that sound?"
((Hi! So, whats happened sense Aura changed her appearance in her room?)
Kmaefantasy wrote: "((Hi! So, whats happened sense Aura changed her appearance in her room?)"
((A LOT))
((A LOT))
((Uhhhhhhhhhh okay then))
Grumbling, I slowly turned around and trudged back to the hotel, where everyone was gathered in the dining room.
"Em! There you are! Where's Salifia? Where's Carla? Em?"
Paige was at my shoulder, battering me with questions and looked nearly to the point of shaking me.
"It's okay, it's okay, Paige. Their in the forest. Collecting some ingredients for some potion or other - an enchanted rose, a hairbrush - and I think she said a pony hair or something? But anyway, I came back to warn you guys and...well, I thought maybe should we go after them?"
A gasp broke the silence, and I turned around to see that Paige had toppled from her chair and lay sprawled on the floor.
Grumbling, I slowly turned around and trudged back to the hotel, where everyone was gathered in the dining room.
"Em! There you are! Where's Salifia? Where's Carla? Em?"
Paige was at my shoulder, battering me with questions and looked nearly to the point of shaking me.
"It's okay, it's okay, Paige. Their in the forest. Collecting some ingredients for some potion or other - an enchanted rose, a hairbrush - and I think she said a pony hair or something? But anyway, I came back to warn you guys and...well, I thought maybe should we go after them?"
A gasp broke the silence, and I turned around to see that Paige had toppled from her chair and lay sprawled on the floor.
((So, Mae, Alice and Zaynah for some reason went off to find some stuff to make a potion I think, and I kinda followed them, and they went into the woods, but now I went back to the others to get them... But I think Alice and Zaynah don't want any help, so they walked off........))
((sorry, where would Indigo be right now???))
(What is happening!!?!?? I'm sooooo loooooosssttt!)
(Okay, so Julane and Mae, here is a more detailed thingie on what's going on:
Alice and Zaynah went off to search for potion thingies, and I came back to the hotel where all the rest of you guys are (I had followed the two of them) and well..........check out comments 1352, 1358, and 1359, that should clear it all up ;) )
Alice and Zaynah went off to search for potion thingies, and I came back to the hotel where all the rest of you guys are (I had followed the two of them) and well..........check out comments 1352, 1358, and 1359, that should clear it all up ;) )
((thanks everyone!!))
I follow Doyle, who carries Paige. I feel like a little puppy, blindly yapping at everyone's heels.
"Is she alright?" I ask. "Wh-what happened? I mean, I highly doubt falling off a stool would do this, did anything else happen?"
I follow Doyle, who carries Paige. I feel like a little puppy, blindly yapping at everyone's heels.
"Is she alright?" I ask. "Wh-what happened? I mean, I highly doubt falling off a stool would do this, did anything else happen?"
"Well, I only told her what Carla and Salifia were doing- speaking of which, we need to hurry! Who knows what kind of trouble their getting themselves into!!" I said with a huff.
(So I'm passed out, sick or something? Poisoning? And you guys just got captured by a witch, and Indigo is also passed out? Is that correct?)
((wait I thought Carla was in the forest.... sorry, I don't understand what you were saying, Zaynah, sorry!!! /:p
((wait so are WE with the witch thing too??? sorry, Z))
((No, I'm jus wondering because Z said that she was with us, but then she's with the witch and we aren't??????????))