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message 551: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Sep 21, 2014 12:56PM) (new)

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Kmaefantasy wrote: "Zaynah {♥Edward Cullen♥...♥Tobias Eaton♥...♥Harry Potterr♥...♥Magnus Bane♥} wrote: "WERE U HERE WHEN I KILLED ALICES CHACTER...BY AXIDENT!)"

(WHAT?! YOU KILLED SALIFIA?!)"


Yeah, she got confused when Alice changed her name to Ace breifly, and thought Salifia was BAD, so she killed her, along with beating up Aura, and then thought there was a separate white haired character.

Alice was not pleased. She was actually kinda hurt... I don't blame her, though, but Zaynah now understands and is sorry :)


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It starts about comment 861


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Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(hmph)


message 554: by [deleted user] (new)

:-) Ok. Gimme like 5 minutes. :-)


message 555: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

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I glared at Carla, but didn't waste any time.

I launched myself up and onto the top of the bars, scaled the one bar along the top connecting the other ones together, and leaped down, but not before nearly getting hit by a cannoned pumpkin.

Then, full of energy, I bound down the beam light, trundle through the pines, claw my way up the tree, and leap down just as Carla was taking off again.

Hmph.


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( ;) I am so gonna beat you)


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I hear someone fall with a loud thumb, and Em say angrily, "Show off." I say quietly, "Um, does anyone wanna practice with me, please...?"


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I look up, my yellow eyes gleaming.

"ME! ME!"


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I bound over and nearly flip Indigo off her feet as I lunge playfully in greeting.


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Indigo looks only slightly ruffled, and I back away apoligetically.

"Er, sorry, I forgot you were....ahem.....nevermind."


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Em then remembers that Indigo is blind! XD


message 562: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

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I look over my shoulder, and see Carla continuing with the course, and I could see her smug grin from here. Well, I WAS a panther, after all.


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I decide to surprise Em. She won't know that I've been training with Aura.

"Let's fight!" I say, to Em's surprise.


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I was about to protest, she was, after all, blind, but she moved into position and all I could do was follow suit and decide to take it easy on her.

WRONG DECISION.

She nearly pounded me.


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Once I had hit Em a bit harder than I meant to (this drove Carla into a fit of hysterics) Em stopped being easy on me. Well, I mean relatively. I still had a long way to go, but I surprised her alright. I heard her breathing on my left, and aimed a blow. At the last second, I knew that she would probably duck, so I pushed out a leg to trip her.


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My eyes widened with surprise, as I lay, panting on the ground.

Gosh, this girl...

I leaped up, hoping to catch her by surprise, but alas, to my dismay, she seemed to anticipate my move, and quickly ducked out of the way.

Frantic, I leaped and pounced, now every ounce of my fighting ability being put to use.

Not good enough.

Once again, I found myself on the ground, this time with Indigo's foot on my panther-y chest.

Her blank eyes stared off at a point in space in front of her, not moving, and she was just smiling, silent.

I was terrified.


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I think Ruby then realized my tactics. To listen. I heard a growl, and I knew she was a panther girl now.

And you know the thing about panthers?

They're dead silent.

Darn it.


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I slowly slipped from under her foot, and crept silently away from her. I kept backing up, until I was maybe fifty feet away.

I tried not breathing, but I nearly fainted, so I just crouched here, breathing softly, waiting.

After a while, a while watching Indigo twirl and look around wildly, flinching at every little noise, I saw it.

I saw what I was waiting for. She relaxed, just the smallest ounce, her muscles in her shoulders stopped tensing, and that ounce was just what I needed.

Then I lunged, jumping about ten feet in the air, and landing noiselessly only forty feet from her. I ran. Ran straight for her and in a split second, I was standing over her limp body, growling at her, who was on the ground, struggling violently, panic in her eyes.


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Adrenaline rushed towards me as Em pinned me to the ground. I twisted around, but I couldn't get out.

"Okay," I say. "You win-"

That's when I feel Em's wait removed off me, and feel a sharp pain in my arm. What was happening?!


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Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(What is happening?!)


message 571: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
(What is the sharp pain)


message 572: by [deleted user] (new)

((I don't know, just an idea XD, but I can removed it and we can continue from where we were before :)))


message 573: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

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(No! I will add on to it! It is a good idea!)


message 574: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

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(But now i have some thinking to do XD)


message 575: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Sep 21, 2014 01:49PM) (new)

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"Enough."

I backed away as Aura walked up, and she pressed a pointy nail to Indigo's arm.

Immediately, Indigo seemed revived, and she stood up, brushing herself off.

"Er, sorry about that, Indigo.... I don't know what happened..." My head bowed, I transformed back into a human, the fur slowly creeping up my body, being replaced with clothes, until it reached my head, then it lengthened and became my hair, which slowly turned back to blonde, and when I glanced up again, my eyes were green.

"Enough training for today - it's been two and a half hours!" said Aura, with a hint of pride in her voice.


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I glance over at Carla, who had just called me.

She beckoned me over, and I warily came.


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I stand up, and smile. "No, it's fine. You were a bit intense for a second there, but I don't want you to go easy on me, Em. Thanks for helping me!"


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I nodded over my shoulder at Indigo, and stood, my chest still heaving, in front of Carla.


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(Ahh!! Sorry I left for so long. :-P I'll write my bit now.)


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Breathe in. Breathe out. Sweat was collecting on my forehead I was focusing so hard. A huge piece of ice sat in front of me, and if you squinted ever much, you could see a small coat button in the center. My task was to get the button out of the hunk of ice, without damaging the ice or the button. As hard as it was, I apparently had to do it at 110 degrees. 14 portable heaters surrounded me and the ice, all set on maximum heat. While I had to rescue the button, I had to keep the ice from melting. And, apparently, smashing the heaters isn't an option, so now there are 13 surrounding. Whoops.

Every 2 seconds I had to frost the ice so it had a new layer to sustain itself, then try to move the ice around the button towards me, without making the whole thing crack. I'd made about 3 inches of progress. Awesome. About 5 feet left to go.


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I heard a loud crack, and Em screams in pain. "Carla!" I yell. "What are you doing?"

I hear two of them breathing hard. "Are you guys alright?"


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I heard screaming and crashes in the other rooms. I tried not to break concentration, but I heard cries of agony and got worried. "You alright out there?" I called through the door. Oops. The ice cracked about a foot deep. Poo. I focused the ice closed together. The heat was starting to make me feel drowsy, and a bit nauseous.


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"Why!? Whats the point of this?!" I exclaim back, but still trying to keep the ice solid under the new weight.


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"Uh... Disarming?"
(BRB)


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I listen to Carla and Em fighting. I did NOT know that Aura could fly until she was on my head. That was a bit frightening.

I don't know my way around, but I do my best, until I come across a door. It is stifling hot, and I hear Paige and Aura talking.


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I laugh. "M'kay, but you can work with Paige also."

Aura shoves a dart gun in my hand, and tells me to try to shoot her when I hear her voice. She dodges the darts and buzzes around all while also teaching Paige.

"Indigo, you have to be quick! Your advantage is that they will think you are helpless! Paige, faster! Great hit, Paige! Faster Indigo! Nice one! Paige, fighters stance! Be quick! Indigo! Quick!" She says.


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Alice wrote: "(btw how old is paige )
Aura:
"Yes but would you be able to survive long enough to disarm me?"I hand her a sword."Remember to keep the ice solid or you will die."I advance with the sword."


(Paige is 14)


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"Wow." I say. "Sorry about the dart, by the way."


message 589: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 21, 2014 04:29PM) (new)

"Thats what I asked." I exclaim. "Apparently we are gonna be rescuing buttons and having Nerf battles!" I say sarcastically.
Swipe, ice blast, side step, repeat. Swipe, dodge, duck, super blast. The sword started to feel hot from the heaters' blast, making it harder to grip. The block was starting to drip, and Aura had disarmed me. Supercalifragilisticipsialidoucous blast, kick sword into hand. The ice is looking ok, but my fighting is not. I try to clean up my stance, but only to be disarmed again. Fabulous.


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I am panting, and no matter where I hit, I can't get Aura. Paige sounds just as tired next to me.

"Can we have a break?" I say tiredly.


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"Yes. Break. Needed. Now." I pant, blasting the block of ice again.


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Nerf gun darts that Indigo is firing as practice, and my training task is to get a button out of a huge piece of ice without damaging it or letting it melt. :-P


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I "watched" (rather I listened to the sounds of ripping fabric) with mild fascination.

"Okay," I say. "I'm gonna go have lunch."


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"Diddo." I drop the sword and head towards the door with Indigo.


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We head to the dining area. I don't really want to touch all of the food to figure out what it is, so I ask Paige to tell me what there is.

"Um, there are cucumber sandwiches, tuna pickle sandwiches, yoghurt parfait, sushi, croissants, orange chicken, broccoli cheese soup, um, something that looks like gravy, some pasta..." She says.

I take some sushi, and sit down.


message 596: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 21, 2014 05:56PM) (new)

"So how was training?" Paige asked, trying to get conversation started.


message 597: by [deleted user] (new)

(I think so. Let me check. ;-))


message 598: by [deleted user] (new)

(Yep. She did. I have to go, sorry. Have a good evening!)


message 599: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

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"Ugh, that obstacle course was horrifying! Carla was pounding me!" I said through a mouthful of sushi.

Carla smirked across from me, but then said, "Aw, but she wasn't that bad! Only about a hundred points behind me!"

I scowled. "A hundred? Yeah, I don't call that too bad, for someone who had never trained or fought in her entire life!"

Carla looked up, flabbergasted. "Y-you have never trained? But those monsters- at the castle!"

I shrugged. "Luck! I happen to be a pretty lucky gal." Then I dived into some croissant.

"Well, Em," Indigo said, "You were pretty good when you were fighting me! You beat me!"

"Aw, only 'cause I was a panther! Panthers can do that kind of stuff, it was instincts, not skill." I said, blushing. "And," I added quickly, "Carla beat me up in that fight!"

I grinned as I brandished an arm in a sling across the table at Carla.


message 600: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Sep 22, 2014 02:26PM) (new)

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I winked, and lowered my arm so I could eat my sushi.

"That's an almost - I would've been able to if we had, like, ten more minutes! I'd have beaten you to a pulp!"

But before she had a chance to answer, Paige and Aura's loud voices cut through the air.

"What do you mean, fight? Like, fight, fight? Fight for real?, I would think you knew she wasn't ready!" When I glanced over, Paige was on her feet, with Alex and Doyle on either side of her looking a bit alarmed.

"I think she's ready." Aura said calmly, sitting and eating her salad across from Paige.

"Ready? Ready? How can she be ready to go into combat! She's blind! Blind! How is she supposed to be able-" Paige was abruptly cut off when Indigo walked back in through the doorway, (she had taken a bathroom break), and said, "I know that. But I trained. I think I can take it."

Aura grinned triumphantly. "See? Even she feels she is ready!"

I scooted farther down the table, away from the two. Paige looked like she was going to explode. Her face was bright red as she opened her mouth to speak, then closed it again and sat down. She looked quite similar to a huge, red, duck.

"Paige," Indigo said softly, as she slipped down to sit next to Paige, pushing Doyle aside gently. In my opinion, she was doing quite well, she was learning to use her other senses to get around, and already it seemed she could get around the building as if she had her sight. I remembered how she fought me, and her admirable skill.

"Paige, it's okay, yeah, I don't have my eyes any more, but to tell you the truth, I have other ways. My nose, ears, and hands. Tools, Paige, tools! I can smell everything, my ears are sharper than ever, and I can feel my way around! I am beginning to forget the wonders of light, color, and shadows, but I don't mind! In fact, I think being blind is suiting me better now. Really, Paige."

Indigo had her hand on Paige's shoulder, staring straight at her. Paige started to cry, small tears leaving wet trails in their wake across her face. I uncomfortably noticed the table had gone completely silent, everyone sitting quietly, awed at Indigo's moving speech.

"Oh, Indigo." Paige gasped, and threw her arms around Indigo's neck, sobbing into her shoulder.

Indigo patted her back, smiling faintly.


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