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Ron Baratono (ronbaratono) | 301 comments https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/9717...

Please remove the word "will" from this sentence. These people are the ones that will lift you from any darkness your feeling.

Thank you,
Ron


message 2: by Ron (last edited Mar 11, 2019 10:25AM) (new)

Ron Baratono (ronbaratono) | 301 comments Thank you Gabriella :) Could you remove this sentence also, it just doesn't fit: "Stop this darkness from rolling over and over in your mind."
You're group is a blessing.

Ron


message 3: by Ron (last edited Mar 12, 2019 11:51PM) (new)

Ron Baratono (ronbaratono) | 301 comments Dear Gabriella,

Can you add: "Maybe something we can’t get past?" as a second sentence. This would clarify the wording better. Also, the end of the quote needs a question mark. Thank you so much.

Ron


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