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Ruby, Just plain Epictastic.
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Aug 22, 2014 01:00PM
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I opened my eyes blearily and attempted to shake my head. That was when I realized my head was clamped to a table of some sort that I was laying on. My eyes widened, and I tried to bring my hands to my head, but found they were clamped, too. In fact, to my horror, my entire body was strapped down to a table, the iron clamps digging into my skin painfully.
I tried to shout, but my voices wouldn't work. I stared around me, wild-eyed.
I found many other tables similar to mine lined up, and the immaculate white floors and walls shone like the sun. Each table was empty, however, their iron clamps lying open mournfully. The voices I had heard earlier were getting closer, and all too soon the wide double doors at the end of the hall opened with a bang. I tried to scream, but again, my voice stubbornly didn't work.
As the people-like figures drew closer, my eyes were able to focus on them. They were relatively human-like, with long legs and arms, a large torso and hands a feet. In fact, I saw nothing odd about them until one turned slightly, feet away from me, For a split second, I saw huge, feathered wings sprouting out the back of the figure. Large and black, the wings melded smoothly into the creature's back, slipping without a bump into the lab coat that it wore.
I blinked, but when I opened my eyes again the wings were gone. I hardly had a moment to consider this phenomenon, because I caught sight of the huge syringe the leading man was holding in his hand.
When the group got close enough, I heard the man holding the syringe speak. Except it wasn't English, it was odd, and nothing like anything I had heard before. A complicated mixture of a shriek and a bird call flew from his mouth again. I cringed, but still stared, terrified at the man. He continued to shriek, and it almost seemed as if he was trying to assure me I'd be okay.
By the looks of that syringe, however, I was definitely not going to be okay. I struggled against my bonds in a panic, and I caught a fleeting glimpse of alarm in the man's eyes. I tried to shout and scream, clawing at my cuffs and throwing myself at my captors. Unfortunately, all my effort and strength was wasted, and after a while I lay, panting, on the table as I had used the last of my energy.
I looked up at the creature above me. There was something in his eyes- pity? Regret? Sadly, I was never to know as he gave one apologetic smile and plunged the syringe in my arm.
Hey ruby i started reading it even before you told me...and can i just say...
*gets down on one knee*
RUBY FIREWOOD 12 WILL YOU MARRY ME?
*gets down on one knee*
RUBY FIREWOOD 12 WILL YOU MARRY ME?
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Oh! I never would have dreamed of this! Yes, my Prince Charming! Yes! Let's ride away together into the sunset!
absolutely on my beautiful white stallion, come the love o my life and let us gallop to far far away where nothing but peace and meadows and your writing can beseech us.
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+climbs up clumsily onto the horse+
Let us go, now, my Romeo, my Prince Charming, my love- but, oh no! What will my father say? He'll have your head! Oh, what shall we do?
+Swoons and topples off the horse+
Ruby!!! I love it!!! So I posted my chapter 2, and then I read this and I was like :D yay!!!! I was wondrring ..... No, nvm....okay fine... Do you want to like kinda combine our stories to make and epic... Rublane story???!!!! If not that's fine, but I wrote mine last year so the style is bad, and we have the same plot..,.
And is this like maximum ride??
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You are the geniusest genius. TOTALLY!!!!!!! THAT WOULD BE EPIC!!!
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uh, sorry havent read that just yet sooooo I dunno
You said you got the Angel Experiment, this is exactly like it (they have wings in lab, ya know?) Well, you'll see.
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