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That's certainly true for the couples who meet in these eight compelling short stories and find that Love Starts Here.
I might also cut the "again" and make it, "...your life will never be the same."
Other than that, I like it.

That's certainly true for the couples who meet in these eight compelling short storie..."
Thank you, Dale. I really appreciate your help :)
I've self-published several novels to Amazon in the last 18 months or so and I feel fairly confident when writing the summaries for those (years of fanfiction may have helped! lol) but my next book is slightly different - a collection of short stories that are all meet-cutes, aka couples meeting for the first time in a variety of different circumstances, time periods, etc. - and I'm not sure that what I have reads so well.
Your thoughts on the below, and any possible improvements, would be gratefully received - thanks! :)
Love Starts Here
Love can strike any time, any place.
At a concert, in the future, or lurking next door,
In times past, on an errand, or stuck between floors!
Sometimes one look, one word, one touch is enough to know your life will never be the same again.
That's certainly true for these eight soon-to-be couples when they meet and find that Love Starts Here.