Incomplete Christian Short Story

[Caleb]

I've always written fantasy before, but I'm trying my hand at Christian fiction. I have an incomplete short story I'd like someone to look at, see if I'm on the right track or if I should stick to fantasy. Comment if you'd like to read it. Thanks.

[Erin]

I'd be happy to help. erbuteau@gmail.com

[Erin]

Ok so somehow your email has disappeared and I cant find it anywhere! Could you please resend the file so I can look over it again before I write my review? Sorry for the inconvenience.