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((Aaaah.))With Ren having frozen her foot, and Kris delivering a punch to her chest directly, there wasn't much resistance or path for him to slide clear of her. She took the force, blasting back, and snapping her ankle.
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"B!tch," she cursed, gripping her ankle and wresting it free of the ice. She seemed subdued, for now.
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arlo leans back and smashes his head into axels face
arlo twist around on his knees and deals a very powerful low blow
"i tried controling it earlier but you wouldnt listen so i had to use force now release me or you will regret it" arlo said seething
and breaking his feet out of the slightly thin layer of ice and created a barrier around the axel
and breaking his feet out of the slightly thin layer of ice and created a barrier around the axel
arlo dropped his barrier with a smirk and walked forewards until the barrel of the gun was touching his head when he felt the gun tremble and said "go ahead, you wont do it, i have made my peace with death but i will fight with my entire being before i die got it?"
arlo used a barrier and shrunk it on the boy before he could do anything
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still bleeding arlo walked in front of him and said "never disrespect me like that again" he then released the barrier as he coughed up some blood and walked to the nurses office
((Leon. Can you PLEASE capitalize the beginning of sentences and the names of characters, as well as use proper punctuation. It's hard to tell where a sentence stops if there is no punctuation. For example, the sentence would have stopped after the quotation mark, so the period would have been after the word 'again.'
It's also hard to tell if a sentence ended, even with a punctuation mark present, if the first word of a sentence isn't capitalized. {Because, people make mistakes, meaning they can make punctuation mistakes. If a sentence is not capitalized, then it can be mistaken for a punctuation mistake.}
I'm not saying you should do this, I'm just asking if you could. {At least with the capitalization.} I don't mean to be stingy or anything XD))
It's also hard to tell if a sentence ended, even with a punctuation mark present, if the first word of a sentence isn't capitalized. {Because, people make mistakes, meaning they can make punctuation mistakes. If a sentence is not capitalized, then it can be mistaken for a punctuation mistake.}
I'm not saying you should do this, I'm just asking if you could. {At least with the capitalization.} I don't mean to be stingy or anything XD))
(its ok i get that alot but i hardly ever have time for it i apologize for that)
((It''s fine! XD
It's just another pet peeve of mine. I understand, and like I said, I'm not forcing you to do it, just asking if you could at least make an effort with it? With the names at least.))
It's just another pet peeve of mine. I understand, and like I said, I'm not forcing you to do it, just asking if you could at least make an effort with it? With the names at least.))
((I’m with Yuki on this one. It has always been something that aggravates me.. A mistake or two.. whatever. Just when people make a whole paragraph...))
(ill see what i can do and i promise ill try to work on it)
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(ill try to keep that in mind)
(he is in the hallway if you wanna help him remove this post and put it in hallway)
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