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Vidya (vidyasamson) | 1 comments If anyone here is interested in beta reading my novel, please email me at and I will send it soon. Please put MASQUERADE OF PRINCES in the subject line so I know it's not spam.

Please email me directly. Please do not contact me via Goodreads since I seldom check out my Goodreads messages.

The blurb:

I was about to put a bullet into my brain when I met three men who deserved it more.

I'm Castor. I'm fourteen and I have neurofibromatosis, which means I have incurable, non-fatal tumors all over my face and body.

But just when I was going to end it all, I ran into the beautiful Kaya as she was being abducted by three thugs.

I saved her, and how did she repay me? By transporting me to Jandan, a small kingdom with big secrets.

Sure, travel broadens the mind, but did she have to teleport me to a dungeon in another universe?

Said dungeon held the imprisoned Nikhil, Crown Prince of Jandan. The three of us broke out of prison, only to discover life was one damn thing after another, and all before I'd even had breakfast.

The crown pimple got us mired in ever-deepening palace intrigue as we tried to figure out who was trying to kill him, and why.

As if one Nikhil wasn't bad enough, we ran into another pestilence who looked exactly like him. This double trouble duo led us slam-bang into explosive secrets as we unraveled mystery after mystery and battled powerful enemies within and outside the palace.

And if that weren’t stressful enough, we got blackmailed into helping Jandan overthrow her colonial rulers.

You'd think Kaya would be impressed by all I was doing to help her and her country, but who does she fall in love with? The crown pest.

Are the teen years really supposed to be this complicated?

Join our adventures if you enjoy smart, witty, charming, captivating characters and a very dashing, unique, irresistible hero.

Dip into the pages of MASQUERADE OF PRINCES to find love, humor, and intriguing mystery.

Thank you!

message 2: by Dwayne, Head of Lettuce (last edited Dec 06, 2018 09:47AM) (new)

Dwayne Fry | 4283 comments Mod
It's up to you, but you may want to reconsider posting your email address publicly like this, especially if you don't want spam.

Also, I would recommend putting that blurb in the workshop. It needs help and there are plenty here would would be happy to oblige.

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