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message 1: by Florida_Man16, Head Mod (new)

Florida_Man16 (jon_the_metalhead) | 366 comments Mod
Here you can post your incomplete characters until they are done.


message 2: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (last edited Dec 10, 2018 10:29AM) (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
Jon, I need help

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message 3: by Florida_Man16, Head Mod (last edited Dec 10, 2018 09:45AM) (new)

Florida_Man16 (jon_the_metalhead) | 366 comments Mod
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message 4: by M!lo (last edited Dec 11, 2018 05:04PM) (new)

M!lo (yaboy_milo) | 251 comments I'll update this crap someday
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message 5: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 12, 2018 04:51PM) (new)

Maya Tsunemori
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message 6: by Ryan (last edited Dec 17, 2018 09:14AM) (new)

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message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 13, 2018 03:55PM) (new)

Nova Park
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message 8: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (last edited Dec 14, 2018 05:41PM) (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
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message 9: by Turtleturtlyness (last edited Dec 17, 2018 05:41AM) (new)

Turtleturtlyness | 208 comments Name: Tori Giles
Gender: Female
Cultural background: American
Age: 14 (Going on 15)
Class: Freshman and proud member of the school newspaper committee.
Appearance: She has long red hair that is constantly tangled and frizzy. She is also covered in freckles from head to toe.
Clothing: School Uniform, but when she isn't in school she wears oversized sweaters and black leggings.
Height & Weight: Tori is a little short for her age, and very lean. Her weight is the same as a 13 year olds.
Personality: Tori is always wanting to be helpful, she prefers to be around people she looks up too. She also is afraid of people being mad at her, so apologizes for almost everything.
Likes: Warm and fuzzy blankets, stuffed animals, sweets, spending time with her family.
Dislikes: Spicy food, itchy sweaters, scary movies, loneliness.
Ability: Ability Gauge
Level: 2.3
Strengths: Writing, Reading People, Playing the Piano...
Weaknesses: Singing, Reaching High Places, Thinking under Pressure.
Rank: Civilian.
History: Tori is very sweet and still has her sense of childhood innocence. At one of her old schools, she was picked on for being bisexual.
Family: Tori's brother was the only one accepting of her, and so now they live alone together.
Sexuality: bisexual
Relationship Status: Single (currently)
Theme Song: Secret Base Piano Music
Stats--
Strength: 2
Defense: 1
Speed: 4
Recovery: 3
Trick: 6

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message 10: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 77 comments ☯Raven(Soon to be named Eris)~They/them/“If you don't love yourself, how in the hell you gonna love somebody else?” ― RuPaul ☯ wrote: "Name: Lora Anglin
Gender: Female
Cultural background: Irish
Age: 15
Class: (Freshman, Sophomore, Junior, Senior, if they are a student.)
Occupation: (If they have one. If they go to the High School..."


Ryan wrote: "
Name: Emily Anglin
Gender: Female
Cultural background: Irish
Age: 16
Class: Sophomore
Occupation: Student
Appearance and Clothing:
Height & Weight: 5’ 10” and 140 lbs.
Personality: She is very..."


So, what are their histories going to be again Raven? XD Because I kinda forgot. XD


message 11: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
Lemme think


message 12: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 77 comments ☯Raven(Soon to be named Eris)~They/them/“If you don't love yourself, how in the hell you gonna love somebody else?” ― RuPaul ☯ wrote: "Lemme think"

Ok, I'll be back on again after my math final, talk to you then. :)


message 13: by Deepthi (last edited Dec 23, 2018 07:50PM) (new)

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message 14: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 27, 2018 10:27AM) (new)

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message 15: by Tamra (last edited Jan 07, 2019 07:28AM) (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Name: Jaquilin nickname:Jackie
Gender:female
Cultural background: (A lot of you like to use anime images, so this is to clear up why the Spanish looking anime guy is actually French, or whatever.)
Age:16
Class: Junior
Occupation: student
Appearance: Long black wavy hair with pretty blue eyes
Clothing: average girl clothes
Height & Weight: 5'4 110
Personality: kind of mysterious, Keeps to herself sometimes.
Likes: Painting, music
Dislikes:
Ability: she can make anyone look like her from touching them (idk)
Level: 3
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Rank: Civilian
History:
Family:
Sexuality: Bi
Relationship Status: Single
Theme Song:
Other:
Stats: (Stats refers to the character’s Strength, Defense, Speed, Recovery, and Trick. Ranging from 0 to 10, this is how we get a handle on your character’s abilities. Strength is self explanatory, as are Defense and Speed. Recovery is their ability to heal or handle strong blows, and Trick is their ability hide things or deceive.)
Strength:
Defense:
Speed:
Recovery:
Trick:
I am new to this group so my character might not be good. I need help.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

What exactly do you need help with, TJ?


message 17: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Pretty much everything. I haven't made an rp character in over 4 years.


message 18: by Kit-Kat (new)

Kit-Kat Since she is a student, I would give her a power. Think f a power that relates to her personality, then base her history around that power.
That’s how I started mine


message 19: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
Actually everyone has powers, both student and adult, some are cripples meaning born without a power


message 20: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
And Cripples get picked on a lot


message 21: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Okay what about that?


message 22: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
Just telling you a bit of how it works


message 23: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Oh no, I put the power and I was wondering if it was good.


message 24: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 07, 2019 07:36AM) (new)

OKAY just a few things that I have to point out (These are just general mistakes members seem to make, so this is kind of like, a heads up.)

1. 'Average girl clothes' really don't tell us anything... so please provide a description or pictures at least.

Okay. So, as we told Tsumi, for personality, it HAS To be in complete sentences. Same as the history and appearance. (For appearance, if you don't have a link/picture, please be descriptive.) I would recommend at least 2-3 sentences.


Two people cannot have the same ability unless they are DIRECTLY related.

Leave 'Stats:' blank. It's kind of like a category or something. Strength, defense, speed, recovery, and trick do need to be filled out though.


message 25: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Someone else has that ability?


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

No i don't think so. ^-^'


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

That was just something I keep being asked about (through PM) so i thought I'd put it there for like... future references.


message 28: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments I don't know what to do for the strength, defense, speed, recovery, and trick


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

TJ wrote: "Name: Jaquilin nickname:Jackie
Gender:female
Cultural background: American
Age:16
Class: Junior
Occupation: student
Appearance: Long black wavy hair with pretty blue eyes
Clothing: Normally wears j..."


You know you can edit the comment right? XD


message 30: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Yeah, but then I have to keep scrolling up and down. lol.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

For the strength and stuff, just put a number from 1-10.

For example: If your ability was illusions or something, trick would probably be pretty high, while strength might be lower. (The reasoning behind this because Illusions are something that messes with your mind, but an illusion can physically hurt you.)

Just... base the numbers based off the ability. Just don't make it so they are like, super high in every field. That would make them a bit too op XD


message 32: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments OMG can I take that ability? lol


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

nah XD It's already taken, sorry. (Both shadow illusion and illusion are taken.)


message 34: by Phoenix~They/Them, Annoyed Little Puffball (new)

Phoenix~They/Them | 214 comments Mod
The ability makes no sense, how does it work


message 35: by Tamra (last edited Jan 07, 2019 08:06AM) (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments I really don't know, I guess it makes them not think what they were already thinking.

Ugggghhhh I need major help.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Mind Manipulation?


message 37: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments Name: Jaquilin nickname:Jackie
Gender:female
Cultural background: American
Age:16
Class: Junior
Occupation: student
Appearance: Long black wavy hair with pretty blue eyes
Clothing: Normally wears jeans and a cute T-shirt. Sometimes she will wear dresses and skirts, but not often.
Height & Weight: 5'4 110
Personality: She is kind of mysterious and keeps to herself sometimes.
Likes: Painting, music
Dislikes:
Ability: she can freeze anything
Level: 3
Strengths: quiet, no noises
Weaknesses: love, but she eventually falls for it.
Rank: Civilian
History:
Family:
Sexuality: Bi
Relationship Status: Single
Theme Song:
Other:
Stats: (Stats refers to the character’s Strength, Defense, Speed, Recovery, and Trick. Ranging from 0 to 10, this is how we get a handle on your character’s abilities. Strength is self explanatory, as are Defense and Speed. Recovery is their ability to heal or handle strong blows, and Trick is their ability hide things or deceive.)
Strength: 4
Defense:5
Speed:3
Recovery:7
Trick: 6


message 38: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments is this good?


message 39: by Xander, Deputy Mod (new)

Xander Mizuki (xandermizuki) | 113 comments Mod
This is the workshop: the space to put unfinished OCs. If it's ready put it in the approval tab for pending.


message 40: by Tamra (new)

Tamra  (pleasereadbiothankyou) | 34 comments I know, i was seeing if i needed to do anything else


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