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So, I have a problem: Des anyone know rather it's ok to switch from using 'he' and 'she' to 'I' in a story? I have a example below-->

He was content with the agreement to lock up the girl once they succeed in capturing her, but he was also concerned with the fact that they could get caught. Meanwhile, I was well aware of their plan to kidnap Sally Blue. I knew just how to put a stop to this mess.