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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments I wrote something! This is my first time ever doing non-school-related writing, so please give advice. I'm really new to this.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4778...



Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Thanks. :) It was fun to write. I've never tried writing before for now.


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Tiffany  (tiffanyyy_wang) | 1972 comments Mod
Wow. I love writing too! I have this really odd story that I can give you a summary about if you want to hear about it! I'm not gonna waste time typing, so just say if you want to hear about it!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments I'd love to hear about it. :D


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Tiffany  (tiffanyyy_wang) | 1972 comments Mod
Thanks! Ok. So this girl, Katie, decides to bungee jump off Mt. Rushmore. We soon find out why. Then, her sister starts doing reckless things too. Then, it goes on explaining how this affects her and her family. It sounds adult-like at the moment, but if you actually read it, you would understand.


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments That sounds really interesting! Did you post it on goodreads?


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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Thanks. :) It was fun to write. I've never tried writing before for now. "

well,you are great!my writing sucks!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments I doubt that. I know a lot of people who are great at writing, but think that they're awful.


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments I just finished the second chapter.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


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Tiffany  (tiffanyyy_wang) | 1972 comments Mod
Woah! You said to post it on Goodreads! Hey! That's a good idea!


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Swati  (readerforevergmailcom) | 2208 comments Mod
Yeah, you should!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Chapter 4! A new meaning to a near-death experience!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...



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omg!you are so amazing!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Thank you! You like it?


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love it!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments What part do you like best?

Do you have any advice?


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everthing!and keep on writing!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Thanks :)


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maybe...tell people what the words you are saying are!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Do you mean the Italian?


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yeah!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments The first three are Italian swears.

"Un grande amore" is "a great love", meaning a love story along the lines of Romeo and Juliet, Jane Eyre and Rochester, Anthony and Cleopatra, Elizabeth and Darcy...

And I just mentally went through the show, and I don't think that there's any more Italian.

Did you read the other chapters, or just the prologue?


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of course i read the other chapters!rachel,are you muslim?


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Ok, I was just curious. I sent it to one of my friends, and she didn't realize that there were other chapters.

No, I'm Catholic, but I really like learning about different religions, especially Islam.


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cool!well,i'm muslim!


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Swati  (readerforevergmailcom) | 2208 comments Mod
Cool..


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yeah...so if you have any questions you can ask...*blushes*..i feel stupid now.


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments What do Muslim's believe about the afterlife?


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Swati  (readerforevergmailcom) | 2208 comments Mod
Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "What do Muslim's believe about the afterlife? "

Good question.


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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "What do Muslim's believe about the afterlife? "

it depends,are you talking about right before we die or when we are dead!?


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Both. I didn't know there was anything about right before you die.


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well,before we die you will feel a sudden brezze,a angel,will take your soul,it depends on if you where good or bad,if you where bad a angel(i forget his name)will rip your soul out and if you where good they will take it out gentle and it will feel great!


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Casey WHAT?!?!??! I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT U GUYS R TAKIN ABOUT BUT HI ASIYAH


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Cool, what about after you're dead?


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Casey YAY MORE PEOPLE!!! XD


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Casey wrote: "WHAT?!?!??! I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT U GUYS R TAKIN ABOUT BUT HI ASIYAH"

hey!


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Casey HEEEEEEELLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Cool, what about after you're dead?"

that also depends!if you are good,in your grave you will be peacfully at rest!if you where bad,allah will send snakes and and spiders,the snake will wrap himself around your neck and squeze hard causing discomfort!


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in heaven you will be reward with palaces and there's honey there they say if you drink it you will never be hunger or thirsty again!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Very interesting. Do you believe in anything along the lines of Heaven and Hell?


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Casey HMMMMMMM I DONT! I BELIEVE IN COOKIES AND PUDDIN! WOULDNT YOU AGREE JENN?!?!??!?!


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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Very interesting. Do you believe in anything along the lines of Heaven and Hell?"

no..but you can get yourself out of hell!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Really? That's interesting. How?


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Lauren (djinni) "Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Very interesting. Do you believe in anything along the lines of Heaven and Hell?"

no..but you can get yourself out of hell!
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How can you know how to get out of Hell, and not believe in it?


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Lauren wrote: ""Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Very interesting. Do you believe in anything along the lines of Heaven and Hell?"

no..but you can get yourself out of hell!
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How can you know how to get out ..."

we do beleive in hell!




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Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) wrote: "Really? That's interesting. How?"

by saying allahu akbar!i'm gonna make another topic!


Rachel (aka. Kaiserin Sisi) (looney-lovegood) | 265 comments Ok, that would be a good idea.


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