It was my great honor to be a beta reader for Zosma.
The dialog is very strong. It is character-specific and authentic. The banter between characters is entertaining and compelling. It is remarkably entertaining.
Much of your plot is character and dialog driven. As such, it is imperative that these be highly designed and executed. The author was quite successful in this regard' the story's characters are infused with life; one gets the impression that they may sometimes walk off the page and have a seat next to them.
The dialog is very strong. It is character-specific and authentic. The banter between characters is entertaining and compelling. It is remarkably entertaining.
Much of your plot is character and dialog driven. As such, it is imperative that these be highly designed and executed. The author was quite successful in this regard' the story's characters are infused with life; one gets the impression that they may sometimes walk off the page and have a seat next to them.
An excellent read!!!