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message 51: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick)
*Peeps out from under blanket* Oh yeah, how rude of me for almost forgetting about this.

Hello, everyone. :) I'm Alessia, you may call me Sia. (view spoiler) Um, well, I, only watch anime and Disney movies (come on, they're awesome) most of the time so no Supernatural or Sherlock references for me. And I suck at drawing, doing mental calculations, singing, dancing but I'm pretty good at the art of sarcasm (which is accompanied by the really bad habit of saying "shit")...



And uh, just to avoid confusion, I'm Asian, soooo I might not understand the American school system and everything else like apartments and public transport issues.



message 52: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Ah, of course the one group I'd pull out of them all would start with Fiend as the primary Mod followed by Jen. I suppose old habits will never die. Anyhow, tell me...what all plot has been developed that your information does not speak of?!

oh! And hi! I hope you both are happy to see me rather than not D:


message 53: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) SAVVY!
Oh my gosh, hi! Welcome back :D How've you been? I missed you a lot :)


message 54: by Δ|вσω (new)

Δ|вσω Hey!!


message 55: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Jen! I've missed you a ton as well! So much so, actually! I've been fair. Had a job I hated, but no longer do. As such, im now terrified that I won't find another job soon and be able to afford rent. But! Terrors for another day. How have you been?! Also, is there anything I need to be updated on in the group?

Audrey! Hi there! :), nice to meet you.


message 56: by sucre'd fiend, master of the murderous arts (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 194 comments Mod
Welcome everyone!

Sav, not much has happened ^-^ most people are still working on characters~


message 57: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Alrighty! So who all is online?


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments Me, though not for much longer.


message 59: by alessia (last edited Aug 30, 2014 11:57PM) (new)

alessia (classick) Well, I am too.


message 60: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Fiend! I thought that was Jen's reply to me! Hey there! Sorry I vanished for so long. How have you been? Any plot ideas your scheming up over there?

Hi there Coben and Alessia!


message 61: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Hello, Savannah. :)


message 62: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) So, Miss Sia, you just joined not long ago to this group as well, huh? I'm currently under the debate of what directions to take my first set of characters. How comes your creations?


message 63: by alessia (last edited Aug 31, 2014 12:10AM) (new)

alessia (classick) Yeah, just yesterday. Well, I'm still working on my first character. I'm trying to do my Ickens first, since the last time I checked the characters list, there aren't any Ickens at all. And once I'm done with my female character, I'll have to start on some males. There's only one male student here and I'm not so sure if there's anybody working on a male student currently. Your plans?


message 64: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) I thought there were two Ickens in the female characters? Those are blades, right? Always a good start.

Well, I'm under debate right now. I like the idea of making twins, brother and sister, who both happened into this...sort of art. Though, Fiend had mentioned it was not favored to have siblings being enrolled due to possible compromise issues. If not siblings, I was considering childhood friends maybe and still came into this line of life. But, then there is the option of making them not known to each other at all. But I'm a fan of having my characters intertwine with others. What is your opinion?


message 65: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) So you want them to know each other, but aren't that close so they wouldn't have problems? Then they could have divorced parents, so they would have been close during their childhood days but grew wider apart over the years. This also means that they would have different histories and they wouldn't be too alike, even as twins. Though making them different might make it more of a coincidence that they got into Ymira Academy. (But that's only a problem if you're bothered by sheer coincidences.)


message 66: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Oh! That idea would have been perfect! But alas, I decided to go about it differently. They aren't related, but they are close. Hopefully that will still be okay. I'm not quite sure if Fiend will mind. Merp, their histories will explain why they are rather close once I get it all made up.


message 67: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Okay then. Good luck. ;)


message 68: by Savannah W ~ (last edited Aug 31, 2014 02:29AM) (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Thank you much! Good luck with yours as well! I'll probably be stalking the progression of your character lol. Any sort of plot collab ideas going on in your head?


message 69: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Thank you. (You mean stalking? Well, it's a bummer but I'm not allowed anywhere near the internet on weekdays so it'd be about five more days before I can come back onto Goodreads to continue progressing.) Well, I usually make my characters related too, but for now most of the characters I have in mind aren't related. As for their relationships with other characters, I haven't thought of that yet. The character I'm working on now is the bullying type, so she doesn't have any friends. And she joined Ymira Academy when most of the students her age were already in ninth grade, which would be one year ago, so she doesn't exactly fit in yet. Another grew up as a drug dealer, so she grew up trying to minimize contact with others, her mother is the only exception. So she's an odd, socially awkward one. (I'm still thinking about the rest.)


message 70: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Awe, that sucks! And yes, that is indeed what I meant to spell lol. Me and spelling do not meet eye to eye at all times. A bully and a drug dealer, sounds like the starts to something of this nature. I'm glad your sticking from the easy, but useful idea of the parents being either killers themselves or high trained military ops. Dont get me wrong, those can make great backgrounds and explain why the child would be trained so well, but it's nice to see children getting exposed in another fashion, that's for sure.


message 71: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Yeah, the first grew into a bully because of an abusive father and the other had to resort to drug dealing because she hasn't even graduated from high school yet but needs to support her family after her father's unexpected death. What about your characters? Have you decided anything?


message 72: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) Hmm...here is what Im thinking. But this is brief and doesnt explain much at all really...

(view spoiler)


message 73: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Honestly, I've done that kind of character before, but it seems a little wild. It's true that people do abduct children and sell them off, that part is realistic and what Nadia went through is also pretty real. The thing is, the experimenting part has be reused so many times. Unless you want Hollis and Nadia to be "mutated" slightly, then you should probably change the experimenting part with something else. Like maybe manual labor? You learn skills from that too, and it makes them physically stronger and more durable (which helps when they're assassins or on the run).

Also, you mentioned that the organization was part of a bigger project, with a lot of influence over many parts of the world. So maybe two untrained fifteen-year-olds killing them all is a little impossible?


message 74: by Savannah W ~ (last edited Aug 31, 2014 03:33AM) (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) I didn't mean to imply those sorts of experiments :). I meant more along the lines of these: (view spoiler)

This isn't exactly common, but nor is it something unheard of. It's known that the children change based on what sort of enviorment they grow up in. And these experiments are targeted to just what sort of change a child will make when introduced to different scenarios, how fast they will change, what it will take to push them to desperate measures, what skills can be learned and how well, and so forth. Basically, can children be fully engineered to be a certain sort of being. In Hollis and Nadia's cause, can they be trained to survive at all cost, what can they learn and how fast, and what sort of mental state will they maintain through it all.

Now what do you think?

Also, I didn't say they would be killing them all ;) Just key ones they deemed responsible for their lives. They were being trained to kill or be killed, so I think the adaptations they gained over seven years of continuous training and what not would suggest them capable of killing off a few folks :D.


message 75: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) And! Changed the history so their family would still be alive, just because. His is now with his profile in the construction thread, if you want to see the "finished" product of it.


message 76: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Now that you've explained and I've read it, it seems pretty cool. :) And the Acklin Organization sounds like something I want in the plot. ^-^ ((You might want to double check your history for grammar and spelling, though. I think I spotted a few minor mistakes here and there. But otherwise, it seems ready to go.))


message 77: by Savannah W ~ (new)

Savannah W ~ (savannah_white) I'm glad you approve of it after fully seeing it :D. I didn't think how misconstrued the original blurb I posted could be. I'm going to see what Fiend and them think of it, but if they like it, I'll possibly talk to them about ways to employ the Acklin Organization as a danger to the school. But, one think I know that would be neat is if a mission was to kill someone, and on said mission Hollis crosses path with one of the men that worked over his file and researched him. So things go down fast.

Ha, yeah, no, I'm sure there are a few spelling errors, if not a lot, as well as minor grammar errors here and there. Being I haven't went to bed and it is now...seven am, I expected more than normal lol. I also blame my keyboard. A puppy took to digging on it and took out some of the keys D:. But I make do!

So, do you not have internet sunday through thursday nights and get it friday and saturday?


message 78: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Well, you've done a good job. ;) And good luck on negotiating. I hope it gets approved! I'd try to think of something to contribute too, but I probably won't get to share it till next week.

Ow, and I thought my laptop was in bad shape. Take your time, don't rush it. It's not big deal and besides, it's still under construction. :)

No, I don't have it from Monday to Friday. Maybe if I behave up to my parents' expectations, they might give me a few hours on the net on Friday night. And even on Saturdays and Sundays I have limited time. Like now. I have to give it back in four minutes and I won't get to see it till Saturday. It's now Sunday, 7:56 PM. I live in Asia, so there's usually a twelve-hour gap between me and most people on Goodreads.


message 79: by sucre'd fiend, master of the murderous arts (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 194 comments Mod
Icken are the bladed weapons
Booth are the ranges weapons, like snipers and archers
Yu is poisoning.


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments Could someone check my Teacher application, please?


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments Is there an RP request thread? Because for the life of me, I can't find it.


message 82: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) You could just do it here, or in the status thread.


message 83: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) @Savannah Is it alright to have my character's mother as one of the Acklin Organization's managers - or something close to that?


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments Ok, thanks. Anybody want to rp? I have a teacher for Booth (Coben Awlk), and a Yu student (Axel Garrison)


message 85: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Well, I have a Booth student who is - I'm going to warn you - a twenty-three year old drunkard who has his Senior year to finish before graduating - he kind of wasted five years of his life somewhere he doesn't want to remember so yeah. If you're still up, then I'll RP with you with my rusty RP skills. :)


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments I am still up, but not for much longer. I could probably do one post to get things started before I go to bed and we could continue tomorrow.


message 87: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) (Sorry for the late reply - the internet broke down.) And sure.


Coben [Arming the strong, aiding the weak] | 65 comments Posted on Booth house target range


message 89: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Gotcha'.


message 90: by sucre'd fiend, master of the murderous arts (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 194 comments Mod
SIA I WANT THAT TWENTY-THREE YEAR OLD DRUNKARD
I WANT CLAIMS


message 91: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Oh wow, that enthusiasm is blinding me He's in the Target Range with Coben and his class, do you have a Booth student? :)


message 92: by sucre'd fiend, master of the murderous arts (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 194 comments Mod
Not yet, but I SHALL


message 93: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick)
it's alright I'll save him for you xD


message 94: by [deleted user] (new)

I went back to work on characters for this group... and realized I wanted to start from scratch. The only problem is, I have no idea what kind of character I want them to be >.<


message 95: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Do you want to make a teacher or student first?


message 96: by [deleted user] (new)

I already have a teacher (Daniel) and a student (Sadie), and I'm still happy with those.
It's just the unfinished ones that have me stuck :P


message 97: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick)
Oh - sorry. Both are from Booth, right? So you could start with another division. Maybe Icken. I don't think a lot of people have made teachers or students for that division yet - though I'm just relying on the outdated approved list.

Anyway, I checked - more like skimmed through - most of the students made. A lot of them have parents which are from the military or have the jobs of being an assassin. I think it's cool and it explains why their child would end up in Ymira Academy, a school for assassins and cold-blooded killers. But it seems overused, so if you use that idea, you'd have to change it a little.

As for the personality of the character, I usually get to that once I've planned out a history - which I can't think of one now, so sorry. I'll keep trying and get to you once I've found my light-bulb. :) Do you have anything in mind, by the way?



message 98: by sucre'd fiend, master of the murderous arts (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 194 comments Mod
Sorry about the approved character list; I have to find time to update that >.>


message 99: by alessia (last edited Oct 02, 2014 08:30AM) (new)

alessia (classick) Did I offend you? I'm sorry. x,x I'd help you if you want. There aren't that many characters anyway. :)

Icken characters: I take back what I said, Aubree! There's a whole bunch of them.
- Amira Jade Eyles {senior; female}
- Maurelia Cassandra Swartz {senior; female}
- Layla Hesper {junior; female}
- Aiden James Blackthorne (senior; male}
- Hollis Oliver Church {senior; male}

Booth characters:
- Sadie Jane Lindbergh (senior; female}
- Nadia Jade Mathus {senior; female}
- Darryl Robin Lancaster {senior; male}

Yu characters: You should do this one instead, Aubree.
- Ivanna Marie Cross {senior; female}
- Axel Garrison {senior; male}
- Eleanor Ellis {sophomore; female}


message 100: by alessia (last edited Oct 02, 2014 07:43AM) (new)

alessia (classick) Teachers:
- Pearl Gang {Icken}
- Daniel Everett {Booth}
- Coben Awlk {Booth}
- Geran Septimus Delacorte {Yu}


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